托福综合写作精讲·第17期 | tpo68 一代宗师Ansel Adams

文摘   2024-12-12 12:00   四川  

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今天继续分享TPO68的综合写作范文。


讲的是一些照片的底片nagatives是否是由一代摄影宗师Ansel Adams所拍摄的。(如果是,那购买这些nagatives的人就赚大发了


照例,阅读给出了一些比较扯淡的Ansel Adams拍的照片的相似性similiarities”来证明这组底片是他拍摄的。


听力逐一反驳了。但注意的是,听力主要是 explain 了这些相似性,其实并不那么相似。


Ansel Adams

Ansel在14岁的时候,意外得到了一本讲述Yosemite的书。那是一个在旧金山附近的国家公园。也是世界上第一个真正的国家公园。他马上就迷上了那个地方。于是他就开始央求父亲带他去看看。于是不久,Ansel全家就动身去了Yosemite。

以下都是他在Yosemite park所拍摄的照片

很多照片都包含树





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At a sale at a private home in California several years ago, a man purchased a box of photographic negatives stored in envelopes (negatives are photographic images on film or glass from which actual photographs can be made). The negatives dated from the 1920s and showed landscape scenes of the western United States. While the negatives carried no indication of the name of the photographer who created them, some people have concluded that the negatives were in fact made by the landscape photographer Ansel Adams, one of the greatest American photographers of the twentieth century. Several arguments have been offered in support of this idea.

First, the negatives include images of landscape features that Ansel Adams is known to have photographed. One of the negatives shows a large pine tree leaning downward on a cliff. The same distinctively shaped tree appears in another photograph that, without a doubt, was taken by Adams in the 1920s.

Second, the envelopes holding the negatives are numbered and marked with handwritten place names. The handwriting on the envelopes seems to resemble the handwriting of Virginia Adams, Ansel Adams’ wife. Virginia Adams is known to have assisted her husband in his work, so those who believe that Ansel Adams created these negatives have concluded that she helped her husband organize these negatives by numbering them and recording the names of the places where the images were created.

Third, a number of the negatives have been damaged by fire, it is well known that Ansel Adams’ photography studio had a fire that destroyed or damaged nearly a third of his negatives. The fact that some of the negatives bought at the sale have fire damage is consistent with the idea that they once belonged to Ansel Adams.





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