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11月24日托福·考题分析.
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综合写作回忆
综合是一个world cup和super bowl
@165期W.
学术写作分析
教授：
which do you think is more effective: studying in groups or studying alone
学生一：
一个觉得提升效率
学生二：
对效率不高
1. 题型：利弊题型，比较 小组讨论和独立学习 的好处
effective: 限制我们的比较，要专注在“学习效果方面”
2. 可行分论点：
-- 小组讨论:
好处：① 学习负担：大家可以分配任务distribute tasks，减轻个人负担；心里压力较小。② 效率：相互监督，效率更高；③ 学习效果: 相互讨论，每个人分享各自的观点角度，思考更全面；
坏处: ①在分配任务时， 可能会因为不服从分配等吵架；② 有的组员不按照时间完成任务，影响学习进度slow down progress；③ 在开会讨论的时候，还需要协调所有组员的时间安排讨论arrange a timetable suitable for all members，不方便。④ 有的组员可能会怕被排挤而不敢指出别人的问题：critics are reluctant to point out a plan’s defects for fear of being ostracised by the group.
--独立学习：
学习效果：学习的内容会更全面；
学校效率：自己可以把控学习进程，更自由，效率更高。
坏处：自己学习的压力比较大。如果自己没有自律self-control，影响学习进程；学习负担：学习内容如果太多，学不完。
思路1：
I perefer working in a group. Working with peers can relieve my learning burdens. Pushed by the limited period of time and the large amount of knowledge to absorb, I may easily be stressed out, for there is too much on my plate(有太多的事要做) and stretch myself too thin.(写作团词汇) By contrast/things will be different if the whole learning project can be divided and distributed among group mates. What I should do is to carefully focus on what is assigned to me and to share with others, instead of swallowing the whole thing in a hurry.
思路2：
Group discussion helps me absorb knowledge better. When discussing with group members, we all can share our understanding from our own perspectives. Not only can we confirm what we think is right but also can easily find out what is wrong by others’ detection, not possible when we study alone. For example…
思路3：
I prefer studying alone. Learning groups cannot always work like a charm. If members cannot agree with the assignment distribution, or the time to have a meeting, the learning efficiency can easily be undermined. ....
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