11.17托福写作考题分析| 学习课外技能

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11月9日托福·考题分析. 

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教授:

Ensuring that high school students get theeducation they need is challenging. Someeducators are recognizing that regular classesat school may not be enough to prepare students for careers and for life. Because of this, they recommend that all high school students be required to spend a specific number of hours learning useful skills outside school. Others think that this requirement isnot appropriate for all students. Which view do you agree with? Why?


学生一:

暂缺。


学生二:

不应该强制。 




审题分析


1. 这是一道新题。但是话题是教育中很常见的课外技能话题。我们团里有相关的语料。这道题也比较常规。难度系数中等。 


2. “有用技能”
根据同学们的回忆,题目并没有列举“skills”是什么,只是强调了在课程外。所以大家可以先自己定义一下,比如:沟通技能,合作技能,时间规划,金钱管理技能等... 这些在课堂上学不到,但是对未来发展很有用的技能。 

3."所有高中生"
这是一个绝对化表达。 
大家可以扣着这个点写反驳: 高中生时间学业压力很紧张,所以没有时间和精力去额外学习技能。 并且这些技能可以在大学/学校的一些课外活动学习,比如足球队,辩论赛... 。 

其次,“在校外学习”,就意味着有学费压力,这对很多经济条件不好的同学也造成了经济压力。 

因为这些技能确实是每个人都必备的,所以我们也可以放心大胆地写:所有高中生都应该学习这些技能。因为确实是对未来生活很重要。 




参考范文: 
I firmly believe that all high school students should be required to learn useful skills outside of school, as these extracurricular experiences contribute significantly to a well-rounded education. Despite educators’ best efforts, school curricula often cannot cover every essential life skill due to resource limitations and a primary focus on academic subjects. Therefore, it is crucial for students to actively pursue after-school activities that foster important skills such as financial literacy, effective communication, and physical fitness.

Consider Bill Gates. The reason why he became a pioneer in the computer era is that, as a high school student, he gained early exposure to computer programming through an extracurricular club. This unique opportunity, sponsored by his parents, laid the foundation for his future success as a tech innovator. Likewise, the reason why tennis star Qinwen Zheng achieved a top global ranking is that she discovered her passion and honed her athletic prowess through her school’s tennis team. This experience provided the foundation she needed to excel on the world stage.


In conclusion, since schools cannot address all of a student’s developmental needs, participating in extracurricular activities is essential for acquiring practical skills that prepare them for future success.



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