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11月3日托福·考题分析.
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@148期同学M
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Dr. Achebe
Children是否应该参与team sports？how it is important on children’s development？
Paul:
有些人不擅长学习 体育帮他们建立信心 找到新的方向
同学二：
暂缺
1. 运动是托福常考小话题。 之前也多次考到相关的内容。属于同学们备考范围内，大家写起来应该容易。
2. 并且这道题目问得很简单，只是泛泛地问team sports是否应该参加，大家可以切入的点很多。
--可以从sports本身切入：
①有利于学生身心放松，身体健康。
②还可以从运动中学到很多品质，比如坚持，努力，乐观。
③ 还可以站队同学一，多参加运动有利于有天赋的同学找到自己的潜能，树立自信，尤其是学习成绩不好的同学。
--还可以从team 切入：
① 有利于学生学会合作，沟通等技能。
②可以交到很多朋友，扩大朋友圈。
如果非说不好，不要参加，可以分析的理由就是：
① team sports往往需要额外多花时间训练，参加比赛，可能会影响学习。
参考范文
In today’s digital age, it is essential for students to regularly participate in team sports, as they play a pivotal role in fostering valuable friendships and developing critical social skills. With the omnipresence of social media and immersive video games, many children are increasingly engrossed in virtual worlds, spending excessive hours glued to their screens. This shift has led to a noticeable decline in outdoor activities and face-to-face interactions, raising concerns about a generation growing up into lonely adults.
This is where a team sport can step in and make a difference. When participating in a football, basketball, or volleyball team, they have to put down their cellphones and spend a significant amount of time together both on and off the court, collaborating with each other during tournaments, and giving pep talks when encountering setbacks(改编写作团语料). All of these strengthen their bonds. During these periods, those originally isolated students realize that friendship is much more valuable than the virtual world because they can count on their teammates when going through hard times into everyday life, such as struggling with schoolwork, having trouble with a boyfriend or girlfriend, and so forth.
In conclusion, amidst an era dominated by virtual interactions, it is more vital than ever for students to participate in team sports. Such involvement not only promotes physical well-being but also cultivates relationships and essential social skills that are invaluable throughout life.
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