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11月24日下午场·托福·考题分析.
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Dr. Achebe
More and more, online shopping is becoming the primary way that many people obtain everyday goods. But what are the ramifications for the society in which we live? On the one hand, online shopping has advantages-for example, I can make a purchase without ever leaving my home. However, with fewer people shopping at local shops, in some places, these establishments are having a hard time competing. Do you think that online shopping is, on the whole, affecting society?
Andrew:
I think that online shopping has had negative impacts on society. In my city, many local stores have shelves filled with various products that you can find in online stores. This has forced some of them to closedown, which not only affects the amount of tax revenue generated in our local community but also impacts the number of job opportunities available to the community members.
Kelly:
It's unfortunate that some local stores are forced to close down, but that's the nature of competition. As consumers, we benefit greatly from online shopping due to lower prices. Even if l find a physical store that can compete with online sellers in terms of pricing, I am still likely to make the purchase online because it means i don't have to spend money on transportation to the store.
(1) 这道题重复了今年8.21日的考试原题，是今年第2次考到了!
也命中了写作团day9-视频课程中讲解过的原题！这也是今年写作团第12次中原题!
👩🏻🏫：需要注意的是，题目问的是对整个社会的影响： Do you think that online shopping is, on the whole, affecting society?
大家尽量把内容写得宏观一点。从整个社会入手。
比如:
1. 方便人们的日常生活，尤其是对工作很繁忙，还要照顾家人孩子的中年人。(People can browse and purchase goods from the comfort of their homes at any time, which is particularly beneficial for those with mobility issues or hectic schedules.)
2. 节省开支。因为可以跟网上的多个平台进行比价，降低人们的生活成本。
3. 促进经济繁荣。因为网络上有很多宣传，尤其是主播live streamers 宣传了很多不为认为，没钱在电视上做大规模的宣传的产品，所以促进了这些小品牌的发展。
👩🏻🏫：这一点大部分同学可能能想到。如果思路一下子很难想清楚，词汇表达不够的话，就不建议写了。
4. 导致当地线下商业消亡。the decline of local retail stores, which can't compete with the scale, variety, and pricing of online retailers.
👩🏻🏫：这一点是Andrew同学的观点。也有写难度。需要思路特别清晰才能写出好。
参考范文 :
I contend that online shopping has a predominantly positive impact on society, primarily because it stimulates economic growth. Before the advent of e-commerce, companies had to invest heavily in traditional advertising methods such as celebrity endorsements and national television campaigns. Evidently, only well-established companies with substantial financial resources have the means to succeed, whereas smaller, yet high-quality, startups often face limitations. This is why large corporations like Apple and Coca-Cola can readily monopolize their respective fields. However, the rise of online shopping has leveled the playing field. Consumers now have access to a diverse range of products and can easily compare them based on price, quality, and features. Additionally, the presence of YouTubers, live streamers, and influencers offering detailed product reviews has expanded consumer choice, enabling smaller businesses to thrive in the digital marketplace. To illustrate, consider a busy businesswoman in search of a portable computer. Through online reviews and influencer videos, she can now explore options beyond the mainstream brands like Apple, thereby making a more informed decision. In conclusion, the widespread adoption of online shopping has broader societal benefits. It not only enhances consumer choice but also provides opportunities for smaller enterprises, thereby fostering economic inclusivity.(197字)
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