Ava, a fifth-grader, longed for a cell phone like her peers but had to wait until she was thirteen. To persuade her parents, she penned an essay, demonstrating she was mature enough for a cell phone. Her parents, impressed, gave her an old phone.
“Ava,” her dad said seriously, “a cell phone isn't just for fun and games. It's a significant responsibility. You must keep your phone secure. You must silence it in public spaces. You must...”He listed all of the ways that she had to be responsible with her phone. But Ava, too busy with choosing the perfect wallpaper, downloading apps, and chatting with her best friend Sarah, only half-listened.
Over the weekend, Sarah’s mom took the girls to a movie. Normally Ava avoided horror films, but Sarah's pleading words with funny memes (表情包) had somehow convinced Ava that the movie might actually be enjoyable. Before the movie started, Sarah's mom instructed the girls to silence their phones out of respect for others. As the movie's tension built, Ava found herself growing increasingly uncomfortable. “I need to go to the bathroom," Ava whispered to Sarah.
After the movie, while waiting for Sarah's mom to fetch the car, Ava felt a sinking feeling. “I can't find my phone!” she shrieked, patting down all of her pockets. Panic-stricken, Ava searched her bag, yet her phone seemed to have vanished. Ava got into the car, her stomach in knots.
“Are you going to tell your parents? ”Sarah whispered to Ava on their ride back. Ava was silent, her mind racing with the consequences. She could envision her parents’ disappointed faces and harsh words. She feared that this incident might lead to her parents taking away the privilege of having a phone altogether.
As they arrived, Ava climbed out of the car and trudged home, her heart heavy with what had happened.
Paragraph 1: The moment Ava walked in, her parents greeted her with a smile.
Paragraph 2: Then her parents drove Ava back to the cinema.
一、浙南名校续写语料
情节一： 面对父母的关心，Ava的内疚，羞愧，担心，难过的心情
1.However, with the thought of losing the cell phone , Ava couldn't even （装出笑容）, her parents immediately realized that something went wrong, asking Ava what happened in a gentle tone . Overwhelmed by guilt and shame, Ava could not （忍住眼泪）anymore, crying that she had lost her cell phone .
2.Upon hearing this and thinking of her lost phone , Ava was just too nervous to （说出话来）. Anxious and worried , she just （咬住嘴唇） , （垂着头） and slipped into her own bedroom.
3. Guilt and frightened, Ava couldn't show her natural smile, although she tried her best to do.
Ava （做出假笑）, trying to hide her tense. Dominated by a sense of fear and nerve, Ava lowered her head, standing there, (呆呆的).
4. (鼓起勇气), she decided to tell her parents the bad news.
5. To her surprise，what she got wasn't （严厉的话语）as expected but a warm hug. Overwhelmed with gratitude and love, Ava told them that she wanted to look for her cell phone. Without thinking twice, her parents agreed and the family cast a happy glance to each other and set out hand in hand.
6. Feeling tides of nervousness and guilt rushing upon her stomach, Ava nodded anxiously, ________(勉强挤出) a weak smile.
7. Like sitting on pins and needles, Ava could hear nothing but her heart as she spent the hours sitting on the sofa, ______________(头脑一片空白).
8. Knocking on the door was her mother, and at that time, Ava's heart and brain were __________________(激烈地斗争) : the former telling her to turn to mum tor help, the latter urging her to keep this secret.
9. Overwhelmed by a sea of sorrow, Ava tried to hold back the tears, yet still they ____________(背叛) her, streaming down her cheeks.
10. __________________________________(一股强烈的悔恨之情) bubbled up inside her, dragging her into the depth of despair.
11. An air of fear and nervousness __________(笼罩着她). Ava looked at her parents’ eyes and _____(挤出)a smile...Ava turned away, avoiding the eye contact with her parents.
12.Suddenly, she buried her head in her hands and ___________(痛哭起来).
13.With watery eyes, Ava ____(结结巴巴地说) that she lost the old phone and she ____(搜索) all her pockets, even the bag but _____(一无所获).
14. （无法平静地向她的父母撒谎），Ava choked.
15. ___________________（担忧袭上心头） at her heart, the poor girl replied________（不安地）.
16. ____________（充满了）a sense of guilt, Ara wanted to explain but____________（徒劳无功）, so she just beat about the bush.（拐弯抹角地讲话）
17. Hearing their footsteps ___________（回响） in the empty cinema, Ava's heart was in a tight knot again.
18. Ava attempted to hide the fact that something unpleasant had occurred, but _____________（忧虑背叛了） her.
19. _________________________________（她咧嘴笑了）.
20. Ava then______________________________________________________________ （挤出一丝笑容试图掩饰内心的忧虑）, but the panic and anxiety in her eyes had already betrayed her.
21. ___________________（尽管很担心）she was, she uttered all the bad experiences, lowering her head and waiting for ___________________（严厉的指责）.
22. Ava felt her stomach like a little boat 颠簸 in a heavy storm.
23. Ava murmured, 倾吐the whole incident and apologized for her carelessness and the absence of responsibility.
24. She the courage, took a deep breath and then said, ”I’ve lost my phone. ”
25. She was what to do next.我对下一步做什么心里不知所措。
26. 一阵 worry and fear in Ava’s chest tightened.
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情节二：父母得知手机丢失后的反应
1. On hearing this, her parents, however, didn't (发脾气)but suggested to find the phone together.
2. （虽然吃惊）, her parents listened carefully and patted her on the back to comfort her. Ultimately, they decided to take Ava to find her cell phone back.
3. Watching the nervous and abnormal Ava in front of them, they walked to Ava （去拥抱她） and asked her kindly that what had happened with her.
4. But to her surprise, her parents didn't （责备她）, but decided to help her find the phone at once.
5. Her parents chatted with her about the film, only to find as if her heart had gone to somewhere. （意识到她的奇怪状态） , her dad asked her what happened.
6. Confronted with her parents’ _______(亲切的话语), Ava found her words ______(卡住) in the throat. Noting that, mom asked tenderly, ”What’s wrong, dear? You are _______(愁眉苦脸).”
7. ____(犹豫的) as she was, Ava eventually poured out the truth, ____(挣扎着)between the mixed feelings. However, ______(预料中的) harsh words didn’t come, and silence conquered the room.
8.It was her dad’s voice that broke the silence...Witnessing Ava drooping her head _____(惭愧地), he continued, ”Never mind, Let’s set out to find you phone.”
9. Her parents ______(对视)with each other, comforted Ava and set out to fetch the missing phone.
10.To her surprise, what she confronted was not disappointed faces and harsh words, just caring words _____(询问) about the details.
11. Her parents realized that something wrong had happened, (相互交换了一个会意的眼神）
12. （时间仿佛凝固了） when her parents glanced at her after knowing the bad news.
13. Her dad delivered her a cup of hot water, ___________（示意） her to sit down and have a rest.
14. Noticing Ara's __________________________（避免与他们的眼神接触）, her dad seemed to feel something bad had happened.
15. Instead of scolding Ava, her parents _____________（宽慰） their daughter.
情节三 找手机的过程
1. (欣喜万分)Ava ran into the bathroom with her heart beating wildly.
2. So disappointed was Ava that (手掌出汗), totally at a loss what to do. It was just at that precise moment that she finally thought of something and dashed towards the bathroom.
3. There was Ava's phone lying beside the water tap, (平安无事). And Ava exclaimed when she finally found it.
4. 检查了 the seat she once sat and the bathroom thoroughly, they still got nothing. Guilt taking over, Ava couldn't help crying. Fortunately, when they were about to give up, a man who cleaned the floor caught up with them and gave back the phone he found to Ava.
5. The moment Ava caught the sight of the phone, she jumped to her feet, with a radiant smile _____(露出) from her face. She_____(大步地走向) the phone and picked it up, excitedly and joyfully.
6.Along the way to the cinema, Ava ______(一直想着) where she could leave the phone. On arrival, they _____(前往) the receptionist to consult about the lost phone, only to be told a negative answer.
7. Ava felt as if a rock in her heart ultimately settled to the ground, and ________(松了一口气).
8. They searched ____________（一寸寸地）, hoping to find ___________（痕迹） of the phone.
9. They_______________（搜寻） nearly every corner of the cinema, even into the narrow space between the chairs' arms, however, unfortunately, in vain.
情节四 找到手机后Ava的反省，主题升华
1. Noticing the old cellphone lying on the washing table silently, she （如释重负）. It dawn on her that the cell phone wasn't just a tool but a significant responsibility.
2. This unique experience still deeply （铭刻在心） , which reminds her the significance of taking responsibility for not only phone but also other things in life
3. A seed to be responsible began to grow up. Ava's heart （发芽开花）.
4. Smiling, her parents patted her on the shoulder and gave her the phone again, saying "we believe that you will be responsible for it this time. （又惊又喜）,Ava made up her mind to shoulder this significant responsibility.
5. Then she apologized to her parents It was not until then that she （意识到责任）behind the phone.
6． _________________________(目光停留在)her once-lost treasure, Ava promised to herself that she would be responsible for her phone and even her life.
7._________________(负责任的种子)began to___________________(发芽开花) in Ava's heart.
8. (正是)_____ through this experience ____Ava literally _________________(体会到责任的本质) as a phone owner.
9. Instead of initial half-listening, Ava ________(直视) in the eye and nodded with unvarying conviction深信, which added colour to her parents.
10. Tears _____(模糊了) her vision. How much pressure and anxiety she had suffered...”It is not just for fun. It is a great responsibility. ” Dad’s words still ______(回荡) in her head.
11. Dad's words (给了她巨大的鼓励） and this time , she fully listened.
12. Ava had embarked on a difficult yet fruitful journey to （变得成熟） and
.(肩负自己的责任）。
13. "I promised I won't______________（沉迷于） my phone," said Ava._______________（要不是） the unforgettable experience, Ava wouldn't indeed know how significant the responsibility and self-discipline are.
14. Dad's words _________________（深扎于心）, _______________（指引未来） to be careful of her own items.
15. This experience her that she should learn to be more responsible.
16. The sinking feeling disappeared and 一股幸福swept over her.
17. It occurred to Ava that life is always comprised with .起起落落
二、浙南名校应用文语料
一 开头：
1.Last Friday _________________________(见证了一个精彩活动) with the theme of Reading a book together, which was held by our class.
2.I’m thrilled to share with you our incredible reading activity “Reading a book together” , _________________________________（这活动结果大受欢迎）.
3. Delighted to know that our sharing-reading experience activity __________________（使你感兴趣）， I’m writing to share it with you.
二 活动介绍
4._____________________________ (作为活动的序幕) was our teacher’s ______________(生动而且有启发性的) introduction of the recommended book---Secret Garden.
5. When the activity ______________ (开始) , all of us ________________(沉浸在) the charm of the book.
6.Then followed the ______________________ (引人深思的研讨环节）, where we discussed the plot and poured our thoughts and feelings from two weeks’ diving into the classic.
7.Afterwards. several talented fellow students' _______________________(精心设计并表演的戏剧) drew an unforgettable finale to________________________(这个富有成效的活动).
8.Besides, the awesome performance truly allowed the characters to___________________(栩栩如生)before my eyes.
9.What deserves mentioning is that every group selected a student to make a presentation about his own ___________________________ (对这本书的深刻见解),which added a vibrant hue to ______________________(沉浸式体验).
10.After___________________(欢声笑语), the activity ended up with the conclusion session, which was about summarizing the harvest from the old man's story.
11.Featuring __________________(各种各样的活动) from reading the original in groups to exchanging reading notes, this activity definitely ______________________( 产生深远的影响) on both reading habit and cooperation.
12.The supporters as well as objectors________________________(展示了它们独到的见解) logically, ___________________________________(赢得了雷鸣般的掌声).
三 你的收获：
13.Classmate's feedback empowered me to ___________________________________(从不同的角度来感知和欣赏这本书).
14.The classic itself _______________________(加深了我对...的理解)friendship and love, _____________________( 让我瞥见了)the wonder land created by literature and British culture.
15.Not only______________________(它提供了一个绝好的机会)for us to escape and unwind from heavy schoolwork and dive into the book world, but it also helped me learn about ____________________(永不放弃的精神) from the hero in the book, which was definitely thought-provoking.
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