托福综合写作精讲·第14期 | tpo65:听力没有反驳阅读,而是....

文摘   2024-10-25 12:00   湖北  

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TPO综合写作范文系列
第14期·TPO65

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今天继续分享TPO64的综合写作范文。

这是一篇关于渔业的文章。 关于在海洋里人工养殖金枪鱼tuna(单复数都是tuna). 





需要注意的点: 

阅读和听力内容都比较适中。

唯一需要注意的是,听力并不是严格意义上的反驳阅读,而是对阅读中提到的问题,进行了逐一的解决。这也是官方指南中明确提到过的,阅读·听力关系中的一种。 


所以大家在写作的时候,要注意用词。可以写听力不同意阅读的观点,但是后面展开的时候要解释,是因为找到了解决办法。 







阅读文章





Wild tuna, a species of large ocean fish, have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently, attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale. However, tuna farming has faced several problems and criticisms.

First, female tuna do not lay eggs in captivity, so tuna farmers must capture large quantities of young wild tuna to stock their farms, further reducing wild tuna populations. These young tuna are caged and fed until they are large enough to be sold. Since the captured females in tuna farms cannot lay eggs to replace the tuna that are sold, tuna farmers continue to catch young wild tuna to keep their farms going and so worsen the decline in wild tuna populations.

Second, tuna raised on farms are very expensive because they depend on a costly, high-protein food derived from other fish. Tuna feed almost exclusively on small fish, which supply them with the proteins and nutrients they require. A single tuna can grow more than four meters long, weigh close to 700 kilograms, and eat 70 kilograms of food a day! It is unlikely that tuna farms can remain profitable while supplying so much expensive food for the tuna.

Third tuna confined to ocean cages are likely to become infested with parasites, organisms that feed on and weaken the animal they attach to. Tuna farmers off the coast of southern Australia have had problems with infestations of blood flukes, a type of parasite that lives within the blood vessels and heart of infected fish. Parasite infestations weaken tuna, slow their growth, and can even cause death, usually by making them susceptible to other diseases. Tuna farms in southern Australia have had 10 percent of their tuna die before they could be sold.





听力+ 笔记






(红色笔记,是第二次听听力做的笔记修改)






参考范文





公众号里回复tpo50~64收到相关综合写作讲解和范文。 

比如,回复tpo50, 收到tpo50的范文。





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