这里是
Eva托福学习团
考情分析
第526期
今天推送的是
10月12日托福·考题分析.
以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
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综合写作回忆
重新引入狼
1.恢复生态平衡，
2.不会造成经济损失，
3.对人危害没那么大
学术写作分析
Doctor Achebe:
一个人应该尽可能多地交朋友(large group，but not deeper)
or
专注于和一小群人维持深度关系
同学一:
小group好，因为可以和信任的人讨论challenging是问题，这个是valuable的
同学二:
略
审题注意点
(1)这道题应该重复了23.11.15日的考试原题。
(2) 选择哪一种朋友？ 主要还是对比这2种朋友的好处。如果题目问的是：prefer? than.. 建议在文段中进行对比。
好处1： 能够真心理解和帮助我。当我需要帮忙的时候，不管是在工作还是学业上，他们会真心地提供帮助，也不会求回报。
好处2：会很放松。 不用担心他们会judge 我。跟他们在一起展现真实的自我。
参考范文：
I prefer having a small group of close friends, mainly because they provide unconditional trust and support, qualities seldom found in casual acquaintances. Life inevitably presents various challenges, from academic struggles to work-life balance issues. In such times, close friends often become our primary support system.
Unlike newer friends who might hesitate to offer help, close friends typically prioritize our needs. For instance, they willingly assist with complex problems, care for our children when we're delayed at work, and share valuable advice based on their experiences.
[对比] While a broader social circle can broaden our perspectives, offering insights from diverse backgrounds, this advantage often pales compared to the profound support and understanding offered by close friends. These intimate connections, forged through shared experiences and interests, provide a unique depth of companionship that is crucial during life's challenges.
Therefore, despite the benefits of a wider network, the irreplaceable support of a few close friends holds greater value for me, making a small, tight-knit group of friends my preferred choice.（167字）
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