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这是我们第242期雅思写作解析
810大陆A类考情
小作文:柱图(The charts below show the protein and calorie intake of people in different regions.)
7.5+参考范文:
1.The given bar charts compare four different regions in terms of their protein and calories intake on average.
2.Overall, of all countries, citizens in North America consumed the largest amount of protein and calories on average, and it was also the only country that achieved an ideal meal intake for these two essential nutrients. What also stands out from the charts is that protein from animals accounts for a larger share than that from other sources in almost all countries surveyed with the exception of India.
3.As far as protein intake is considered, in North America, around 62 units of protein is from animals, almost triple that from other sources, the total of which exceeds the ideal amount, at nearly 70 units. This was followed by Latin America as the total amount of protein consumed stood at 45 units, with animal-based protein making up a third of the total. The average intake of Indian and East African citizens was relatively similar, ranging from 28 to 31 units. The ratio of protein from animals to others was almost one to one in these 2 countries.
4.Regarding calories intake, North America recorded the highest amount of calories consumed, at nearly 3500 units, surpassing the ideal amount by nearly 500 units. The total intake of an average person in Latin America almost reaches the ideal level, standing at nearly 3000. The figures for East Africa and India were significantly lower, at 2300 and 2000 respectively.
大作文:Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
提示:这个题目之前也考过不少次了,又是属于典型的工作类题目,最近6次考试,应该已经考了4次了;这个题目比较好写的当然就是直接写senior manager 相较于普通员工的价值,同学们更需要关注的是题目里面出现了much higher,就是要不要给“高很多的”薪水;
中文提纲:
1. 开头
2. 的确给senior manager更高工资有2个好处:1. 首先,资深员工更加专业。这是因为资源员工更有经验+更高级的技巧+处理高压情况的能力。+ 例子 2. 此外,更高工资能够留住更好的员工。这样的话既然能够提升本身公司的竞争力,也能够让竞争对手不能招募到好员工;
3.但问题是,much higher 这里有比较大的问题。这样的话会导致员工之间的心理不平衡,导致公司内部不稳定。+例子
4.总结
7.5+参考范文:
1.The debate over whether senior managers should earn significantly higher salaries than other workers in a company is a contentious issue. While some argue that this disparity is justified due to the managers' responsibilities, others contend that it fosters inequality and demotivates lower-level employees. I believe that while there is merit to compensating senior managers generously, the extent of the salary gap should be carefully considered to ensure it remains fair and equitable.
2.Firstly, senior managers often bear the brunt of decision-making and strategic planning that directly impacts the company's success. Their roles typically demand more experience, advanced skills, and the ability to handle high-pressure situations. 这些是很重要的下位词For instance, a CEO's decisions regarding mergers, acquisitions, or business expansion can make or break a company’s future. Consequently, it is reasonable to offer them higher compensation for their significant contributions. Additionally, attractive salaries can help retain top talent, as skilled managers are often sought after by competitors.
3.However, the issue arises when these salaries become excessively higher than those of other workers.An excessively wide pay gap can create resentment among employees and erode morale. For example, if a senior manager earns ten times more than a lower-level employee, it may lead to feelings of injustice, particularly if those employees are essential to the company's day-to-day operations. In such cases, the focus should be on narrowing the gap to foster a more inclusive and motivating work environment.
4.In conclusion, while senior managers deserve higher salaries for their expertise and responsibilities, it is crucial to strike a balance. The salary disparity should not be so vast that it undermines the morale of the broader workforce.
8月24日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下:
大作文:社会-媒体-教育
小作文:饼图-流程地图-表格
以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲!
1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?(教育)
2.Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open spaces in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (社会)
3.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?(社会)
4.Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(媒体)
5.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(犯罪)
6.With the increasing demand for energy such as oil and gas, people start to look for their sources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?(环境)
7.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (旅游)
8.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(社会)
9.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?(媒体)
10.Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to accept a simpler way of life. Others think that technology will solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(科技)
11.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(环境)
12.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?(教育)
13.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?(教育)
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