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在23年里，Elon老师共写了53场雅思考试的解析，基本覆盖了每一次考试的解析，其中有20次命中了我们的预测题目或者写作营的素材，小作文命中22次！

这是我们第237期雅思写作解析

706大陆A类考情

小作文：The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012（动态线图）

大作文：Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other, others believe that people have become independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

本文Tips:  

1. 这个题目是比较经典的一个题目，elon老师基本上每一次课上都会讲这个题目。题中的dependent 和independent是可以不冲突，两者兼而有之的。所以从方便写作的角度来看，可以写这两个都OK，论证然后给例子。

7+参考范文：

1.转述题目People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays.个人立场In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past. 

2.中心句There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now.原因一Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically.具体例子For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, 具 体 反 例 and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage.原因二 Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families.扩展结果This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for childcare. 

3.中心句+个人立场(支持B方)However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days.解释原因+背景In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to.解释原因We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns.泛例 For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, 扩展结果and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone.解释原因 Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.(一段多个观点，且中心句不明确，极其不推荐) 

4.重申立场In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.

7.5+参考范文：

In the contemporary world, the question of whether individuals have become more dependent on each other or more independent is a topic of considerable debate. Both perspectives hold merit, as societal dynamics have evolved, influencing how people interact and rely on one another. This essay will explore both viewpoints and present my opinion.

On one hand, some argue that individuals are more dependent on each other today than ever before. This view is supported by the increased interconnectedness brought about by globalization and technological advancements.For example, the rise of social media platforms has enabled people to maintain constant communication and seek immediate support from friends and family.Moreover, the prevalence of collaborative work environments and the gig economy often necessitate reliance on colleagues and networks for professional success. In this context, the interconnected nature of the modern economy means that individuals often rely on a vast network of others for goods, services, and information.

Conversely, others contend that people have become more independent. The availability of information online has empowered individuals to make informed decisions without relying heavily on experts or intermediaries. For instance, the DIY (do-it-yourself) culture has flourished, with countless tutorials available on the internet, allowing people to undertake tasks ranging from home repairs to cooking exotic dishes without external assistance. Additionally, advancements in technology have facilitated remote work, enabling individuals to work independently from anywhere in the world, thereby reducing dependence on traditional office environments and colleagues.

In my opinion, while both views have validity, the trend towards increased dependence seems more pronounced. The complexity of modern life, characterized by specialized skills and interconnected systems, inherently fosters a reliance on others. For instance, urban living often necessitates dependence on public services and infrastructure, and the interdependent nature of global supply chains underscores how individuals rely on myriad others for daily necessities.

In conclusion, although there are compelling arguments for both increased dependence and independence in contemporary society, the evidence leans towards a greater level of interdependence. The intricate web of social, economic, and technological connections today underscores the notion that people are more reliant on each other than ever before.

7月13日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下：

大作文:社会-媒体-教育

小作文：柱图-流程地图-线图

以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲！

1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?（教育）

2.A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at companies or organisation as part of their programs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?（教育）

3.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?（社会）

4.Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（媒体）

5.In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.（旅游）

6.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（犯罪）  

7.With the increasing demand for energy such as oil and gas, people start to look for their sources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?（环境）     

8.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （旅游）                            

9.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（社会）                

10.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?（媒体）              

11.Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to accept a simpler way of life. Others think that technology will solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（科技）         

12.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（环境）

13.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?（教育）      

14.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?（教育）

15.Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open spaces in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （社会）

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 请看我们最新2407期21天雅思写作营的介绍！

本期2407期雅思写作营，内含5篇雅思批改3大2小，或4大1小。  

21天内含1126分钟录播课（不包含音频讲解时间），平均每小时19.9元，

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来看看往期同学们反馈如何吧？

往期学生反馈：

一开始的时候，同学们就知道“日进一寸，方可提升",一切都是贵在坚持！

之后同学们就知道，有些重要的视频，还需要看两次哦！

当然我们也有北大学子的鸡汤文！

同学们的这种批评和自我批评还是很不错的！

复习课也是要有滴！

周末了也还是要学哦！

最搞笑的还是同学们对于每天五分钟音频的反馈：

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言归正传，我们来看看21天写作营的课程

课程概况：

1.本期开课时间：24年7月13日-24年8月5日，适合24年7-8月份考试的同学。

2.本次写作课程为录播课，学习时间为间隔的21天，会有2天休息时间；课程内容涵盖大小作文的全部考点+语法+词汇+技巧。

3. 每天的学习材料会以视频+音频+文本的形式在小程序呈现。

4.本期赠送的口语素材为Elon老师原创的当季24年5-8月P1-2-3完整题库+素材。

5.本次课程内含五篇写作批改。

十大课程特点：

1.课程内容按雅思写作官方评分标准设计；

2.21天课程平均每天学习1-1.5小时左右，可碎片化学习，学习时间自由；

3.课程内容安排合理，难易结合，也适合从零开始的小白同学；

4.课程涵盖所有大作文的话题问法类型以及小作文的类型；

5. 大量语料库积累（80个高分话题例句+200个核心词汇)；

6. 大量中文提纲+英文全篇写作操练（学习10篇大作文+自己写6篇大作文+4篇小作文）；

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8. 全国首创成长雅思学习营，在21天里，Elon老师每天会以5分钟音频的形式，给同学们分享：如何坚持早起+如何提升抗压力+如何把一件有意义的事变成习惯+如何提升自律性+如何倍增你的时间+如何学会坚持-最终成为学习高手！

9.全国首创诵读式雅思写作学习，结合口说和听觉，发挥语言学习的协同作用。课程里所有的大小作文，高分例句+词汇，都有Elon老师的录音。

写作营2.0版更新内容如下：

以下是新版写作营里教育类的一个升级版素材：

“A computer can inundate a child with mountains of information. However, all of this learning takes place the same way: through abstract symbols, decontextualized and cast on a two dimensional screen. Contrast that with the way children come to know a tree- by peeling its bark, climbing its branches, sitting under its shade, jumping into its pile up leaves. Just as important, these frsthand experiences are enveloped by feelings and associations muscles being used, sun warming the skin, blossoms scenting the air. The computer cannot even approximate any of this. （电脑相较于大自然的局限性）”

课程总纲：（点击可看大图）

以下是同学们每日学习的SOP:

以下是21天课程每日部分内容：

视频试看1：雅思大作文特殊结构之绝对词结构

视频试看2:小作文地图题讲解Demo

常见问题答疑：

1.雅思写作营适合什么样的学生呢？

答：1. 雅思小白（对于雅思写作完全不了解的同学）；2. 雅思半小白（听过一些课，但已经还给老师，对写作核心内容不熟悉的同学）；3. 学过其他完整写作课程，但就是没怎么动手写过文章，不懂坚持的同学 ；4. 考过几次雅思，但是分数一直上不去的同学，这个时候你需要来我们的课程看看是不是你的方法有问题。

2. 课程每天的学习时间是多少？ 

答：如同上面提到的，我们的课程是21天不间断的，每天大家都要学到新的技巧+方法+素材，并完成作业，基本上平均在1-1.5小时，当然基础比较薄弱的同学可能需要2小时以上。

3. 每天的课程需要完整的1-2小时来学习么？

答：不一定，我们每天的文本学习和视频学习其实都是碎片化的，是分成好几个语言点切片的，逻辑+词汇+语法+素材都可以是相互独立的，所以可以在一天的不同时间段里学习，当然还是建议大家统一时间学习。

4.有课程内容的问题可以问老师么？

答：当然，同学们可以私信Elon老师关于每日写作营学习内容的问题；每日学习内容里面潜在的高频问题也会在次日以音频或者视频的形式统一在群里大答复。

5.上完写作营的课程后，就可以马上去考试么？

答：这取决于你对于我们课程的吸收效果，以及其他三门课的学习情况，毕竟雅思考试是一个整体，也不能拼分。一般建议同学们学完后1-2周内考。

6. 同学们的作业能得到批改么？

答：Elon老师和高分助教老师会在后台看同学们的答案给一些建议，但是没法保证每天同学们的作业都能看到，毕竟市面上一对一的价格已经收到了600-1400不等。同学们如果后面有进一步的其他的需求可以和我们联系。

收费情况：

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4.需要连续21天哦！坚持就是胜利！

课前需准备内容：

1.学生自己可准备剑4-剑桥18真题集，我们也会发送电子版

2.3本笔记本，草稿纸若干

3.每天高效学习时间1-2小时

4.对于成功的渴望！

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• 英国伦敦大学亚非学院应用语言学硕士；

• 主教雅思写作和口语；

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