810七夕节雅思写作命题晚生小孩!+817大作文写作预测范文分享!

文摘   2024-08-10 23:59   美国  

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在23年里,Elon老师共写了53场雅思考试的解析,基本覆盖了每一次考试的解析,其中有20次命中了我们的预测题目或者写作营的素材,小作文命中22次!

这是我们第241期雅思写作解析

810大陆A类考情

小作文:动态柱图(The charts below give information about the world's top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012)

7.5+参考范文:

1.The bar chart presents data on the dairy production of milk, cheese, butter, and milk powder by the top three producers in 2012, with quantities measured in metric tonnes.

2.Overall, the European Union emerged as the predominant producer in the realms of milk and cheese, whereas India and China respectively secured the top spots in the production of butter and milk powder.

3.In milk production, the EU’s output reached 142,970 metric tonnes, constituting a notable 40% of the total production by the three leaders, surpassing India by approximately 15,000 metric tonnes and the United States by over 50,000 metric tonnes. Cheese production mirrored this trend, with the EU producing 7,120 metric tonnes, more than half the combined output of the next two largest producers.

4.Conversely, India dominated butter production, yielding 4,500 metric tonnes, a figure more than double that of the EU’s and substantially higher than the United States’ production of 810 metric tonnes. The production of milk powder showcased a different leader, with China at the forefront with 1,200 metric tonnes, marginally exceeding New Zealand’s production and significantly outstripping the EU’s output of 770 metric tonnes.

大作文:In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?(重复17/4/8老题)

中文提纲:

1. 开头

2. 有2个原因。首先,这可能因为人们观念的转换改变的。这是因为,以前人们可能要先成家立业。现在的话年轻人可能更想要先追求自己事业上的成功,然后再考虑成家以及生娃。 此外,这是由于生活成本提升导致的。 由于生活成本的提升,年轻人觉得成家立业的压力变大,比如他们的衣食住行,生娃住房医疗的压力很大,所以他们会延迟生娃。

3. 这个现象会导致不少的后续影响。首先,晚生娃对于女性来说有更多的生理很心理压力。这是因为晚生娃的话,相较于年轻的女性,她们需要更久的时间恢复她们的身体和精神状态。而且在育娃的过程中也会担心自己的职业发展受到影响。毕竟正常来说,年纪大的员工在职场上会有不少劣势。此外,这会导致社会的老龄化。由于科技发展,人均寿命增加,但是新生儿没怎么增加,所以合适的劳动力比例在下降,这会导致不同程度的养老金压力和劳动力短缺。

4.总结

7.5+参考范文:

In recent years, more people in various countries are choosing to have children at a later age than in the past. This shift is driven by several factors, and while it presents both advantages and disadvantages, the benefits often outweigh the drawbacks.

This trend can be attributed to several factors, including the pursuit of higher education and career aspirations, as well as the increased availability of family planning options. As individuals prioritize their professional development, they often delay parenthood to secure financial stability and career advancement, which are deemed essential for raising a child in today’s competitive world. For instance, many professionals in urban areas decide to postpone having children until they have established themselves in their careers, ensuring they can provide a better quality of life for their offspring.

While this development offers significant advantages, such as increased financial security and greater emotional maturity among parents, it also brings certain drawbacks. On the one hand, older parents are generally more prepared, both financially and emotionally, to handle the responsibilities of raising a child. This preparedness often results in a more stable and nurturing environment, which can positively influence a child’s upbringing. For example, studies have shown that children born to older parents tend to have better educational outcomes due to the enriched environment provided by their parents.

On the other hand, the decision to have children later in life can lead to potential health risks for both the parents and the child. Advanced maternal age is associated with a higher likelihood of complications during pregnancy and childbirth, including an increased risk of genetic disorders. Additionally, older parents may face challenges in keeping up with the physical demands of parenting, which could affect their overall quality of life. However, the advancements in medical technology and the growing awareness of health-related issues have mitigated many of these risks, making late parenthood a more viable option.

In conclusion, while there are disadvantages to having children at a later age, such as potential health concerns, the advantages, including financial stability and emotional maturity, often outweigh the drawbacks. As long as individuals are mindful of the associated risks and take appropriate precautions, the benefits of delayed parenthood can lead to positive outcomes for both parents and children.

8月17日大陆区雅思大小作文预测如下

大作文:社会-媒体-教育

小作文:饼图-流程地图-表格

以下的文章大家至少要考前写个提纲!

1.Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?(教育)

2.Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open spaces in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (社会)

3.More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?(社会)

4.Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(媒体)

5.Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(犯罪)  

6.With the increasing demand for energy such as oil and gas, people start to look for their sources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?(环境)     

7.In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (旅游)                            

8.Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(社会)                

9.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?(媒体)              

10.Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone to accept a simpler way of life. Others think that technology will solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(科技)         

11.Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(环境)

12.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?(教育)      

13.In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?(教育)

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