一．无灵主语句：（情绪描写万能通用）A wave of +常见的情绪名词（happiness, delight/sadness, sorrow/ fear, horror / surprise, astonishment/ shame, embarrassment /excitement /anger /despair /regret /anxiety / relief /disappointment/ satisfaction）+动词(took hold of/swept over)+ sb.
When the host announced that I won the prize, a wave of excitement and delight took hold of/swept over me. 当主持人宣布她得奖了的时候,她激动高兴得不能自已。
【2021年新高考全国卷】Jenna and Jeff jumped to their feet and a wide excitement took hold of them.(爸爸答应俩孩子帮助他们做母亲节早餐)
【2023年新高考全国卷】 When I knew I won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of me. （鼓励学生参加作文比赛得奖）
【2024年新高考全国卷】I froze there with my empty wallet and a deep sense of anxiety filled up my heart. （与出租车司机协商解决车费支付问题）
1) Jane turned pale and a wave of horror took hold _____ her.
2)Her previous calm______ (sweep) away by terror.
3)A wave of ______(excite) and delight swept over me.
4)A great sense of ______(relieve) and pride flooded over my father.
5)A mixed feeling of hope and delight ________ (surround) us when we headed for the river.
二. With 的复合结构：（情绪动作描写通用）with +n.+ adj/adv/to do/doing/done/prep-phrase
She hugged her husband as tightly as possible with tears in his eyes. 她紧紧地抱着他的丈夫，眼含泪水。
【2021年新高考全国卷】Mother was so surprised she froze with her mouth wide open.
【2023年新高考全国卷】With tears in my eyes I said to him, " I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your timely help.
【2024年新高考全国卷】I hugged him as tightly as possible with my eyes filled with tears of gratitude.
1．The boy dressed in dirty clothes looked up at me ,with his eyes full___ tears of gratitude.
2)With her daughter away from home, she was _____(worry).
3)He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms ______(fold) across his chest, glaring at me.
4)The boy looked up at me with tears _____(stream) down his cheeks .
5)With no one to talk to, John felt _______(depress).
三．So … that 句型（情绪描写万能通用）so+表示情绪的形容词angry/ sad/frightened/ moved/ surprised/ embarrassed + that +体现该情绪动作表情。
She felt so angry that she stormed out of the room, slamming the door. 她如此生气以至于一阵风似的冲出房间，重重地摔上门。
【2021年新高考全国卷】When they spotted their father, the twins were so embarrassed that they both dropped their heads in shame.
【2023年新高考全国卷】On hearing of the unexpected news, she was so surprised that she froze with her mouth wide open.
1） On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he ____(freeze) with his mouth wide open.
2） He felt so tired that he threw _____(him) into the sofa and fell asleep immediately.
3） He felt so frightenedthat he did not dare ______( move )an inch.
4） He felt so _____(embarrass) he dropped his head, daring not to look at his father.
5）I was so scared that my palms _____ (sweat) and my heart pounded.
四．动作链句型 : （动作描写万能通用）主语. + V, V and V.
The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and encouraged him never to give up. 他向前迈了一步,拍了拍他的肩膀并鼓励他永远不要放弃。
【2021年新高考全国卷】Father turned around, left the kitchen and tiptoed to the bedroom.
【2023年新高考全国卷】He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said softly, "where there is a will, there is a way. "
【2022年新高考全国卷】I stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and reminded him softly. “Whatever happens in our lives, we can’t give up or lose our faith and hope.” （鼓励David完成跑赛）
1)She looked around cautiously, slipped out of bed_____ tiptoed to the door.
2)She dashed forward, _____ (kneel) down and gathered her son into her arms.
3)The man stepped forward, patted him on_____ shoulder, and reminded him softly.
4)Taking a deep breath, he _____(step) onto the stage, adjusted the microphone, and began addressing the audience.
5)I _____(approach) Dad, proudly took out of my own money and handed it to him.
五．非谓语动词作状语（动作描写万能通用）： 主语＋V+非谓语动词 / 非谓语动词+主语+V
Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms. 一看见他的身影她就兴奋地冲了过去扑进他的怀里。
【2022年新高考全国卷】Eventually, finishing the running, he rushed to me with excitement and fell into my arms.
【2022年新高考全国卷】After tasting it, Mother hugged the twins as tightly as possible and her eyes were filled with tears of gratitude.
【2022年新高考全国卷】Hearing these words, he thought for a while and stood up without hesitation.
【2024年新高考全国卷】He simply said," My pleasure", wearing the shining smile on his face.
1） _______(look) around cautiously，my seven-year-old son slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.
2）____(dress) in a Santa Claus costume, she slipped into the room without being noticed.
3） Lucy stood there and didn’t dare to move an inch, _____(tremble) with fear.
4） _____ (use) its head, the dog touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked.
5） ______(depress) and low-spirited, he walked at the end of the line with his head dropping.
六．be doing/be about to…when 正在/刚要做某事, 就在这时（生动讲述故事发展通用）
I was walking along the river when I heard someone calling for help.我正 沿着河边散步这时我突然听到有人呼救。
【2022年新高考全国卷】I was about to say “come on” when the running began.
【2023年新高考全国卷】I was about to give up when my teacher encouraged me to keep going.
【2024年新高考全国卷】I was wondering what to do when he reached into his jacket pocket and handed me some money.
1） I ______(look) at the photos on the noticeboard when I heard a voice behind me.
2） We were enjoying the wonderful sight when a loud noise _____(catch)our attention.
3） I was organizing my words in my head when the girl next to me_____(give) me a nudge.
4） I was thinking about a question _____my mother entered my room.
5） I was about to go out when ____unexpected friend came to visit me.
七．.“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. （语言描写万能通用）:某人以…的声音、 语气说到
“All that we have suffered will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he said in a firm voice. “我们已经遭受的一切终将会让我们变得更好。不要放弃直到幸事发生。” 他坚定地说。
【2021年新高考全国卷】They presented the breakfast and said in a happy voice , “Happy mother’s day”.
【2022年新高考全国卷】“Don’t be afraid of being laughed at.” I continued in a firm voice.
【2023年新高考全国卷】“Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he said firmly (in a firm voice).
1）“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured ____a low voice.
2） “I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” He said in an ______(excite) voice.
3） The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down____ said in a soft voice, “It's yours now.”
4） “I would love to,” said Emily in ____pleasant tone.
5） “I don't want to go with you.” said Emily in a tone of ______ (patience).
八． From the experience/From then on/ After that,（主题升华万能通用）
From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and value as a volunteer, which inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.从这次经历，我充分认识到作为志愿者的责任和价值，而这个也激励我继续追求我的梦。
【2023年新高考全国卷】From the experience ,I come to realize that hard work pays off.
【2024年新高考全国卷】From the unforgettable experience, I realize that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. I should pass on the kindness.
1）From the unforgettable experience, I have really realized____ meaning of friendship.
2）From the unforgettable experience, I realize that helping others is the source of ______(happy).
3）After that, our relationship became closer and I was more like a friend ____a teacher to them.
4）Many years have passed, _____ the experience is still deeply engraved in my mind.
5）From then on, I was determined to try my best to protect animals. Only ____this way can we live in harmony with nature.
九． Only then did sb. realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”（主题升华万能通用）
Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。
【2023年新高考全国卷】Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that can overcome all the difficulties.
【2024年新高考全国卷】Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
1） Only then did I realize that a sincere heart was _______( significant) than money.
2） Only then did I realize that we should never take love ____ granted.
3） Only then did I realize that how much my mom____ (love) me.
4） Only then did I realize that it was bravery _____can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
5） Only then did I realize that it's never too late ____(be)all you can possibly be.
十．画面定格, 寓情于景:故事结尾万能通用, 留白式结尾
Bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way home happily.沐浴着温暖 的阳光，我们高高兴兴的朝家走去。
【2022年新高考全国卷】He hugged me as tightly as possible and his eyes were filled with tears of gratitude.
【2023年新高考全国卷】After that, bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way to the award presentation.
【2024年新高考全国卷】My newfound friends disappeared into the darkness of the night.
1） The pure snowflakes were dancing gracefully in the air,____( make) a beautiful picture.
2）The sky cleared up_____ Dawn had come.
3） No matter how cold the winter was, all that they could feel now was the surpassing _____(warm).
4）The wolf ran away off the road and ____(disappear) in the distance .
5） Speechless and happy, she held her son_____( tight) into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
实战演练：读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Aliand his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.
One day, Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes. Zahra's school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.
Ali heard about a long distance racethat was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph1. Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
_____________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. _____________________________________________________________
范文:Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys
rushing ahead. Refusing to
give up, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as possible. He dashed forward, rushed
across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let his sister
down, he was so sad that tears streamed down his cheeks. Just then the
host announced that he won the third prize, as
the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for
breaking the rule. When he held the shoes close to his chest during
the award ceremony, a wave of excitement and relief swept over him.
Paragraph 2: Filled with delight, Aliwalked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the
thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was
waiting outside. “Zahra, look at what I have got for
you.” Ali said in
an excited voice. Seeing the shoes, Zahra rushed to him with excitement and
fell into Ali’s arms. She hugged her brother as tightly as possible with her
eyes filled with tears of gratitude. “Thank you! Ali.” she
said in a happy voice. From the experience , Ali has realized that hard work pays off and never
give up.
参考答案
一．无灵主语句：1. of 2.was swept 3. excitement 4. relief 5. surrounded
二. With 的复合结构
1. of 2. worried 3. folded 4. streaming 5 depressed
三．So … that （情绪动作描写万能通用）
1.froze 2. himself 3. to move 4. embarrassed 5. sweated
四．动作链句型 :主语. + V, V and V.
1.and 2.knelt 3.the 4. stepped 5. approached
五． 主语＋V+非谓语动词 / 非谓语动词+主语+V
1. Looking 2. Dressed 3. trembling 4.Using 5.Depressed
六．正在做某事, 就在这时（突然）be doing……when （1. was looking 2. caught 3. gave 4.when 5. an
七．.“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. 某人以…的声音、 语气说到（语言描写万能通用）
1. in 2. excited 3. and 4. a 5. impatience
八． From the story/experience,（主题升华万能通用）
1. the 2. happiness 3. than 4. but 5. in
九． Only then did sb. realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”（主题升华万能通用）
1. more significant 2. for 3. loved 4. that 5. to be
十． 寓情于景，画面定格（留白式结尾）
1. making 2. and 3. warmth 4. disappeared 5. tightly
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