新人教‖单元应用文写作话题4:健康生活

文摘   2024-11-27 12:17   陕西  

【话题呈现】

假定你是李华,你校英文报号召学生健康生活,请你写一篇以“健康的生活”为题的短文进行投稿。


Step 1 要点提示

1.我以前不注意我的日常饮食。例如,我经常不吃早餐或者吃一些垃圾食品。

I didn't pay attention to my daily diet in the past.For instance,I usually skipped breakfast or ate some junk food.

2.我很少锻炼,也不注意健康,结果导致肥胖。

I did little physical exercise and didn't take notice of my fitness.It caused my obesity.

3.我决定摆脱这些坏习惯。

I determined to get rid of these bad habits.

4.我开始均衡饮食而不再吃垃圾食品。

I started to have a balanced diet rather than eat junk food.

5.合理的锻炼,比如慢跑,也很有用。Proper exercise like jogging is also of great use.

6.与以前的我相比,我现在更加健康,也更加快乐了。

Compared with/to the former version of myself,I have become both healthier and happier.


Step 2衔接成文(注意使用适当的过渡衔接词:what's worse、to begin with、secondly)


Healthy Life

I didn't pay attention to my daily diet in the past.For instance,I usually skipped breakfast or ate some junk food.What's worse,I did little physical exercise and didn't take notice of my fitness,causing my obesity.

I determined to get rid of these bad habits.To begin with,I started to have a balanced diet rather than eat junk food.Secondly,proper exercise like jogging is also of great use.

Compared with/to the former version of myself,I have become both healthier and happier.

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