高中人教英语选必四【写作指导】UNIT 2介绍中国特有的动物

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如何介绍中国特有的动物

【写作任务】

假定你是李华,你校英语报 Iconic Animals 栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍一种中国特有的动物,并投稿。
注意:词数100左右。

【写作指导】

一、审题定调

本写作任务要求介绍一种中国特有的动物,属于说明文。介绍动物可从其外形、栖息地、生活习性等方面展开介绍。

二、谋篇布局

本写作任务可以分为三部分:
第一部分:开门见山,引出话题;
第二部分:介绍动物的外形、栖息地、生活习性及它的独特之处;
第三部分:介绍动物的生存现状等。

三、组织语言

第一部分:开门见山,引出话题。

There are a variety of iconic animals in China, among which is ...

Talking about iconic animals in China, the first thing that comes to my

mind is ...

Of all the iconic animals in China, ... is one of the most popular species.

... is considered to be one of the most popular iconic animals in China.

第二部分:介绍动物的外形、栖息地、生活习性及它的独特之处。

... is a kind of ... that looks like ... with ... on its ...

With ... on its body and ... around its ..., ... is regarded as one of the ... animals in China.

Characterized by its ..., ... has a body covered with ...

... is coated with ... and it is the size of ...

... lives / is mainly distributed in ...

... inhabits ...

The species feeds mainly on ...

Living in groups, it feeds on various foods, including ...

As one of the most intelligent creatures on earth, ... is known for its intelligence, which is comparable to that of a gorilla (大猩猩).

The unique / most attractive / special thing about ... is that it has a remarkable capability to ...

It is ... that makes ... unique.

... is different from others in many aspects, such as ...

第三部分:介绍动物的生存现状等。

Threatened by ..., ..., which numbers ... in the wild, is considered critically endangered.

... is losing its habitat due to ..., making it an endangered species ...

Over the past ... years, the population of ... has suffered a rapid decline.

Several factors lead / contribute to this result, one of which is that ...

Another reason lies in ..., which has caused many of them to leave their homes.

【范文展示】

范文一

There are a variety of iconic animals in China, among which is the Yangtze finless porpoise.
The Yangtze finless porpoise is a kind of small whale that looks like a dolphin with a lovely smile on its face. It is mainly distributed in the Yangtze River at present. The species feeds mainly on fish. As one of the most intelligent creatures on earth, the Yangtze finless porpoise is known for its intelligence, which is comparable to that of a gorilla.
Threatened by overfishing, pollution and ship movement, the Yangtze finless porpoise, which numbers around 1,000 in the wild, is considered critically endangered.

范文二

Talking about iconic animals in China, the first thing that comes to my mind is the Golden Snub-nosed Monkey.
With golden fur on its body and darker markings around its crown, outer arms and tail, the Golden Snub-nosed Monkey is regarded as one of the cutest animals in China. It inhabits the thick forests of the high mountains in Yunnan, Sichuan and Guizhou. Living in groups, it feeds on various foods, including fruits, leaves and seeds. The unique thing about the Golden Snub-nosed Monkey is that it has a remarkable capability to produce 18 types of calls, showing no visible sign of moving its mouth.
The Golden Snub-nosed Monkey is losing its habitat due to human activities, making it an endangered species under first-class state protection in China.

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