Felicia Brittman通过编辑200多篇中国理工科研究生撰写的英文论文,观察和总结了一些最常见的语法错误和表达习惯问题。她在文章中对这些问题举例说明,并给出了示范文本和修改建议。
本系列基于Felicia Brittman的文章 The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering Students (www.SciEI.com),将这些易错点一一道来,帮助JDIS用户避免这些问题,提高英语论文的写作水平。
第十讲 一些建议
掌握中英写作的细微差别
• literature(指研究时)
• equipment(设备)
• staff(一群人)
• faculty(全体教职员工)
避免 | 可以 | 或者用 |
Research work | research | work |
Limit condition | limit | condition |
Knowledge memory | knowledge | memory |
Sketch map | sketch | map |
Layout scheme | layout | scheme |
Arrangement plan | arrangement | plan |
Output performance | output | performance |
Simulation results | results | simulation |
Knowledge information | knowledge | information |
Calculation results | results | calculation |
Application results | results | application |
不要写 | 使用 |
Different node | Different nodes |
Various method | Various methods |
Two advantage | Two advantages |
Fifteen thermocouple | Fifteen thermocouples |
No:
How to find the optimal parameter is the main objective.
Yes:
Determining how to find the optimal parameter is the main objective.
不能写 “The graph shows t, a, and C as a function of time” ,应写 “The graph shows t, a, and C as a function of time” 。
No:
Obviously, detecting regimes by means of PMH maps is a novel method.1
Yes:
Detecting regimes by means of PMH maps is a novel method.1
尾注:
1.CHEN YongGuo, TIAN ZiPing, MIAO ZhengQing, ‘Application of Time-frequency Analysis to Fluidization Regimes Recognition in CirculatingFluidized Beds’, School of Mechanical and Power Engineering, Shanghai Jiao Tong University, Dongchuan Road 800, Shanghai, P.R. China, 200240, 2003
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