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考点：儿童；压力
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题和411 大作文预测：同侪压力peer pressure 机考高频 纸机考通用咋一看很像。
但注意其实是两个不同的题。
虽然都是pressure，peer pressure的pressure，来自peer同龄人；本题的pressure是来自society。范围更大。
不过peer pressure可以be one aspect，同侪压力是孩子所面临的各种社会压力中的一种。
除了同侪压力，还有父母的影响。
比如父母是否管得太严：358 雅思写作 11月机考预测 大作文：怎么忍心怪孩子犯了错，是父母给的自由过了火 纸机考通用
(parental压力嘛）
以及学习压力：564 雅思写作 9-10月机考预测 大作文：内卷#6 academic pressure纸考通用
可以把这几个方面的压力叠加，就能用来回答agree了：peer pressure；parental；academic~
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Position:
I strongly agree with the view that today’s children live under more societal pressure than their predecessors.
我非常同意这样的观点，如今孩子确实社会压力更大。
Body 1: peer pressure
Peer pressure has become a significant source of stress for children today, especially with the rise of social media. Unlike the past, where peer influence was limited to in-person interactions, children are now exposed to constant comparisons online. Social platforms often set unrealistic standards for appearance, behavior, and achievements, causing children to feel inadequate or left out. For example, seeing peers showcase material possessions or accomplishments can compel children to adopt behaviors or pursue goals just to fit in, even at the cost of their own well-being. This pervasive influence has heightened the societal pressures children face daily.
同侪压力已成为当今儿童的主要压力来源，尤其随着社交媒体的兴起。过去，同伴的影响仅限于面对面的互动，而现在，孩子们在网上不断被比较。社交平台经常为外表、行为和成就设定不切实际的标准，导致孩子们感到不足、被忽视。例如，看到同龄人炫耀物质财富或成就会迫使孩子采取行为或追求目标，只是为了融入，甚至以牺牲自己的幸福为代价。这种无处不在的影响加剧了儿童每天面临的社会压力。
Body 2: parental expectations + academic demands
In addition to peer pressure, parental expectations and academic demands add significant stress to children’s lives. Many parents today emphasize success, urging their children to excel in academics, extracurricular activities, and even social interactions. This is often compounded by competitive school environments where children face rigorous testing and the pressure to outperform their peers. For instance, children are frequently enrolled in after-school tutoring or intensive sports training, leaving little time for relaxation. While parents’ intentions may be positive, the constant focus on achievement can lead to anxiety, burnout, and a loss of interest in learning.
除了同侪压力，父母的期望和学业要求也给孩子的生活增加了巨大的压力。如今，许多父母都强调成功，敦促他们的孩子在学业、课外活动甚至社会交往方面表现出色。学习竞争激烈，孩子面临着严格的考试和超越同龄人的压力，这往往使情况更加复杂。例如，孩子们经常参加课外辅导或密集的体育训练，几乎没有时间放松。虽然父母的意图可能是积极的，但对成就的持续关注可能会导致焦虑、倦怠和丧失学习兴趣。
Conclusion
In conclusion, children today face unprecedented levels of stress due to peer pressure, parental expectations, and academic demands. These pressures not only challenge their mental and emotional well-being but also deprive them of the carefree nature of childhood.
总之，由于同辈压力、父母期望和学业要求，今天的孩子面临着前所未有的压力。这些压力不仅挑战了他们的精神和情感健康，也剥夺了他们无忧无虑的童年。
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