雅思官方说:小作文7+的基本点题要求

文摘   2024-10-14 23:03   广东  

下面是雅思小作文Task 1 固定不变的要求:‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

应对这个要求,雅思官方觉得点题的7+的文字要包含以下几个方面‍‍‍‍‍‍

  1. Write an introduction 

  2. Write an overview (a summary of what you see) 

  3. Present and highlight the key features with figures (data) 


# introduction

一般就是题目的paraphrase,具体官方给出下不同类型Task 1 的introduction 示范‍‍‍

  • Table = The table illustrates employment numbers in Australia over a thirty-year period from 1970 to 2000.

  • Chart = The chart compares the number of cars that were made in France, Germany and Norway over a decade from 2000 to 2010.

  • Diagram = The diagram shows how car parts are assembled.

  • Process = The cycle shows how man-made fibres are produced.

  • Map = The maps illustrate changes in an English village over a century from 1915 to 2015.

  • Graph = The graph presents data from Ireland showing cinema attendance in major cities in 2016.

  • Two charts = The pie charts show the main energy resources used to generate power in a town in Australia, while the table shows how much energy was consumed by the community in 1989.


overview

官方建议overview 的时候概括以下元素‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

  • Trends  

  • Changes 

  • Developments 

  • Stages 

  • Noticeable features 


以下是不同类型小作文的overview 示范 【注意连接词的使用】‍‍

  • Table = Overall, it can be clearly seen that the numbers of people employed have increased over the period, whereas the unemployed figures have remained stable.

  • Chart = In brief, Germany was the major producer of vehicles over this period followed by France and Norway.

  • Diagram = It can be seen that there are four main stages to car manufacturing. To be specific, these are moulding, machining, joining and shearing.

  • Process = It can clearly be seen that there are six steps involved in the production of cloth starting with the raw materials and ending with the final product.

  • Map = In summary, in one hundred years, the village has experienced major changes transforming it from a small farming village to an industrial town.

  • Graph = To summarise, it can be seen that the younger age groups visit the cinema most, whereas older people rarely attend.

  • Two charts Overall, by looking at the charts it can be seen that oil is used the most as an energy source in this town and that most power is required for domestic cooling.


# key features

如果从图表里面选出来一些重要的点来描述,以下是官方的建议‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

如果图表是Graph showing 5 age groups over two years,那么Key features 是

  • 5 age groups

  • Major trends

  • Outstanding figures (E.g. highs, lows)

  • Two years

如果图表是Pie chart showing 5 types of fuel,那么Key features 是

  • 5 different types of fuel

  • Major fuel type

如果图表是Map showing a town 50 years ago and a town now,那么Key features 是

  • 2 maps

  • Things that have remained the same

  • Things that have changed (E.g. location, renovation, removal)

  • Things that are new (E.g. building, roads, facilities)

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如果图表是Process showing 7 stages,那么Key features 是

  • Each of the 7 stages

  • Any extra step that is part of the process

如果图表是Chart showing three products over 3 years,那么Key features 是

  • Three products

  • Three years

  • Numbers that are noticeable (E.g. highest, lowest, unusual trends)


以上,再加上注意做数据之间的comparison,拿7+ 就比较稳了。


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