高分书面表达范文
中考英语最后冲刺书面表达无疑是努力一分钟多提一分的存在，特别是高分范文的学习和背诵，很容易就能够在考场上遇到，或者掌握相应规律，就可以比以往多提几分。
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高分范文模板？
第一篇：风土人情类
1、假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom要到中国来，他想了解中国的风俗习惯，请你写一篇短文向他介绍中国的风俗习惯。包括：表达问候，与人就餐，参加聚会等。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. Now, let me tell you something about them. China is a country with a long history,____________________
When in Rome, do as the Romans do. And you’ll have a great time in China.
高分范文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. You know,China is a country with a long history and there are many customs in China.Now, let me tell you something about them.
Firstly,you should greet each other and just say “hello”when you meet friends, instead of shaking hands frequently. Secondly,it’s really important that you should use your right hand to hold chopsticks when you eat at a friend’s home. Finally, If your friends invite you to the party, you’d better arrive a little earlier, 5 to 10 minutes in advance. You can bring a small gift to your friends to express your politeness.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do. If you obey these, I think you’ll have a great time in China.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍中国的一些风俗习惯，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，本文应该用第二人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
第二篇：手机类
假如你是李华，你发现有些父母在该陪伴孩子的时候，却选择沉迷于手机。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文，谈谈对这种现象的看法。内容要点如下；
1. 家长花大多时间玩手机以至于不关注孩子；
2. 家长应该为孩子树立榜样，少玩手机；
3. 家长可以有更多空闲时间陪伴孩子：
4. 良好的沟通可以加强亲子关系，有利于孩子的成长；
5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。
注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：60-80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：accompany v陪伴 strengthen v. 加强 do good to有益于
Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and seeing movies on their smartphones. ________
高分范文：
Nowadays, it's well known that many parents spend a lot of time playing games and watching movies on their smartphones. However, they pay less or even no attention to their kids. so I have one suggestion to parents.
I believe parents should set good examples for their children, so they should turn off their phones or spend less time on them. By doing so, parents will have more spare time to accompany their children and engage in various activities with them, such as playing games, watching movies, or playing sports. These activities provide good opportunities to communicate with their children. Good communication can not only help strengthen the parent-child relationship but also support children's development.
In conclusion, parents should use smartphones in a balanced way and pay more attention to their children's lives.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇关于父母沉迷于手机而不关注孩子的英文短文，要求包含给出的要点并补充一两点有关信息或想法。
2.写作指导：写作时，时态应用一般现在时，人称综合采用第三人称和第一人称。文章按照题目所给思路展开即可，最后补充一两点相关信息或作者的想法。文章应做到层次分明、条理清晰、不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。
第三篇：关于努力的意义
人的一生要面临各种各样的选择，选择的方向正确，努力才有意义。所以，我们在面临选择时，要客观理性地分析。请以“A choice that I made”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
（1）你做出了什么选择；
（2）你是怎样做出选择的；
（3）它给你带来怎样的影响和变化；
2.要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名
（2）词数100左右
高分范文：
A choice I made
There is no doubt that it is important for us to make reasonable choices in life.
Last year. I fell in love with volleyball. Then I chose to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to spend more time on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard in the club. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got satisfying results not only in the matches but also in the tests.
All in all, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作；要求我们从“我做出的选择”这个主题出发，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；结合实际，根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨；应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
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其他类型模板？
保护环境类高分句型：
1.We have only one earth and it is our home.
我们只有一个地球,地球是我们的家园.
2. Without water, human beings can't survive.
没有水,人类就无法生存.
3.It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment and save the earth.
保护环境、拯救地球是每个人的责任.
4. Of all the water on the earth, only about 3% is fresh water. The water which can be easily utilized mainly comes from rivers and lakes.
在地球上,淡水大约只占总水量的3%,可直接利用的水多来自河流和湖泊.
5.One of the biggest problems in the world is environment pollution.
世界上最大的问题之一是环境污染.
6.People find it important to live with nature harmoniously instead of fighting against it.
人们发现重要的是与自然和谐相处而不是与大自然抗争.
7.The most important thing we have to do is to make people understand the importance of the environment.
我们要做的最重要的事是让人们明白环境的重要性.
8.It's time for all of us to take action. Saving the earth is saving ourselves.
是我们该采取行动的时候了.拯救地球就是拯救我们自己.
9.People are called on to make full use of energy and natural resources.
号召人们充分利用能源和自然资源.
10.Air problems and environment protection have become a concern for the whole nation.
空气问题和环境保护问题已成为全国关注的问题.
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