托福写作团试学| DAY8·文段展开方法(一)

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Day8 学习清单

 任务一: 工作类话题类素材学习

 任务二:展开方法(一)-因果解释

• 任务三:打卡作业



Day8 


任务一:工作话题句子积累(要打卡



学习方法: 
1. 学习思路,整理+背诵好的表达。 
2. 用语料的表达,完成推送最后的填空题。 


20. 日常工作的压力细节:Holidays  mean workers get more sleep by escaping the tyranny of the early-morning alarm. In addition, they no longer suffer the agonies of the daily commute: the cramped railway carriages or gridlocked roads. And best of all, there are no meetings to endure— no need to sit with a vaguely interested expression on your face while time seems to slow to a crawl. In short, holidays reduce stress. 
 
假期让人们还可躲避每日通勤中那拥挤的车厢或拥挤的道路。最重要的是,不用再忍受会议的煎熬—无需在简直度秒如年的会议上摆出饶有兴趣的表情。简而言之,度假可以减压。


21. (充分的休息可以帮助得到好想法: For those on vacation, the occasional work-related thought might occur when walking quietly along the beach, or through a wood. Often such ideas will be all the more original for being dreamed up in a moment of detachment.
 
对于那些去度假的人来说,在海滩或林间静静地散步时,脑海中偶尔会蹦出与工作有关的想法。由于是在不受他人影响的状态下想出来的,这样的想法通常更有新意。 

22. 在职培训的好处: Job training allows employees to stay updated with the latest industry trends and advancements. Through specialized training sessions and workshops, individuals can acquire new knowledge and enhance their skills, ensuring they remain competitive in the ever-evolving job market. An example of this is a sales representative attending a training program to learn about new sales techniques and strategies.

职业培训使员工能够跟上行业的最新趋势和进展。通过专门的培训课程和研讨会,个人可以获得新知识,提升技能,确保在不断变化的就业市场中保持竞争力。一个例子是销售代表参加培训课程,学习新的销售技巧和策略。







任务二:文段展开学习 development



(1)先自行思考下面内容,答案阐释在下方视频中。 


A. 思考下面分论点如何展开?
  • 分论点:Providing free childcare services would significantly alleivate the financial strain on families with children.
  • 分论点:  It is crucial to provide free childcare services for parents because these families face a significant economic burden. 
  • 分论点:  When students are passionate about their field, they are more likely to excel academically in college. 

  • 分论点:Requiring teachers to take courses to update their knowledge would further intensify the already heavy workload of teachers.

B. 思考下面展开思路是否有问题? 

1. 总观点:政府应该发展偏远地区旅游业。分论点:这个政策(发展旅游业)有利于当地经济发展。展开思路:偏远地区经济很落后,很多人都离开去大城市生活,医疗教育资料都很缺乏。政府最关心的事情肯定就是发展经济。发展旅游业有利于促进当地经济发展开。所以,政府就应该实施这个政策,发展旅游业。

2. 总观点:I agree with Claire's perspective that reading online reviews is invaluable when choosing products. 展开思路: 因为是买家的反馈. 能提供很多信息,我能买到合适产品。比如… 

3. 总观点:Increasing salaries is the most effective strategy for retaining  employees. 分论点+展开思路: The primary motive for most individuals to work is financial gain , aiming to secure a comfortable life for themselves and their families. Therefore, by offering the most competitive salaries, a company significantly increases the likelihood of retaining its workforce over a longer period.  +举例:我爸爸工资非常高,就一直呆在同一个公司。 


   (2) 视频学习·展开方法: 


解释展开·方法学习👇


(⭕️ 以后会反复多次回来看)

    

视频中参考范文:


    范文1: 

    分论点:Providing free childcare services would significantly alleivate the financial strain on families with children.  解释-原因:Providing childcare services for all children under the age of four is a substantial expense, not a small task. (细节)In our country, parents must pay at least $1,000 in fees to send their child to a well-equipped nursery with qualified teachers or to hire a certified babysitter. This cost is equivalent to an individual's average monthly income, forcing many parents to live frugally to manage these expenses. (解释-结果:By implementing such measures, the government would ensure that parents no longer need to cut back significantly on their spending to afford childcare. They can reallocate their finances towards improving their living standards, saving for the future, or investing in their children’s education beyond early childhood.) 


    范文2:

    分论点: This is crucial as these families face a significant economic burden. 解释-原因:Providing childcare services for all children under the age of four is a substantial expense, not a small task. (细节) parents are required to pay at least $1,000 in fees to…. Therefore, if the government were to proactively offer free or low-cost childcare services, parents would not have to live under such financial constraints.




    任务三:作业(要打卡)


    (1)学习任务一语料,并用语料内容完成下面填空练习。


    1. 在薪水较低但与同事或客户有频繁交流的工作中,员工可能需要挤出时间参加培训课程,以保持与不断变化的就业市场同步。


    填空:In a lower-paying job that allows for regular interaction with colleagues or customers, employees might need to ___________ for ___________ to ___________ the ever-evolving job market.

     

    2. 在高薪但人际交往少的工作中,员工可能会遭受孤独的痛苦,时间似乎变得异常缓慢。


    填空:In high-paying jobs with little human interaction, employees may ___________ loneliness, and ___________.

     

    3. 为了维持生计,许多人不得不选择薪水高但人际交往少的工作。


     填空:To ___________, many choose high-paying jobs with little human interaction.

     

     

    4. 低薪工作通常涉及长时间通勤,员工可能需要在拥挤的火车车厢或堵塞的道路上消磨时间。

    填空:Lower-paying jobs often involve long commutes, where employees spend time in ___________ or on ___________.

     

     

    答案:

    1. squeeze time, training sessions, stay updated with

    2. suffer the agonies of, time seems to slow to a crawl(名词)/ time seems too slow to crawl(动词)

    3. make ends meet

    4. cramped railway carriages, gridlocked roads



    (2)完成下面这个学术讨论作文. 

    要求:1. 计时; 2. 字数在100~200字以内


    来自托福线下考试真题


    Doctor Gupta
    This week we are discussing labor shortages. That's when there are more jobs in the economy than there are qualified people to fill those jobs. During a labor shortage, companies have to compete with one another to attract people to work for them. In your online discussion, please explain what you think companies can do to make themselves more attractive to potential employees.

    Andrew
    I think one thing that makes a company attractive is location. When companies choose a location for a facility, they should think about whether it's a place that employees want to be. For example, locating a workplace in a big city where there are lots of shops and entertainment options could be a good way to attract new employees. 

    Claire
    It might sound unimportant at first, but I have heard of companies that provide their employees with a variety of food options in their facility. These companies don't just have a cafeteria; they also provide coffee bars and free snack stations for their employees to make working there more enjoyable. I think this also makes employees feel appreciated.


    day8 试学内容结束。
    day8 作业作文, 将在day9有详细讲解和参考范文。 




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    2. 提分经验: 12.1日托福出分汇报| 写作29分是"把团里作文都写了3遍"


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