这里是
Eva托福学习团
考情分析
第523期
今天推送的是
9月21日· 托福·考题分析.
以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
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综合写作回忆
@168期 J.
学术写作分析
教授:
do you prefer to get news from traditional sources like television or newspaper or so social media.
审题注意点
(1) 这又是一个新题!这个月也是狂出新题~🤣
不过也正常,毕竟是改革后,题库有更新是正常的。而且news媒体话题,在改革前也是一个小话题,也会考察。
只是现在,结合了当今的趋势,把social media 融入进来。跟同学们的日常生活,美国这几年的局势很贴近,也算不难。
在2020年美国大选的时候,据传Facebook 和twitter上都有很多fake news,影响了民意,导致特朗普落选。之后由于国会山事件,特朗普被社交媒体封杀,自己创办了Truth social 平台,自己发布自己的消息。
(2). social media: 比如Facebook, X(Twitter),TikTok …等。
特点是:所有人都可以在上面发布信息,信息面全。而且时间快,有图文有视频,非常方便吃瓜群众第一时间吃瓜。还可以看到评论在。内容也很多,从政治到娱乐八卦。
问题:没有审核,假新闻层出不穷。民众容易被误导。
(3). traditional sources like television or newspaper:
特点是:专业,严谨,有审核,假新闻少。更全面深入报道。
问题是:速度相对慢。新闻报道主要是政治,经济科技等主流方面。
👩🏻🏫:当然美国的媒体也会受政党影响,报道不那么公正。--这一点老师就不建议大家写了,我们托福写作还是尽量避免触碰敏感的政治话题。
双反的优缺点都很明显,大家可以挑选自己喜欢的内容写。注意观点的清晰,对比明确。
参考范文:
I prefer getting news from traditional sources, such as television and newspapers, primarily because they provide reliable information and in-depth analysis. Unlike social media platforms, where anyone can post without fact-checking, traditional media rely on professional journalists and experienced editors to ensure the accuracy of their reports. This process gives me confidence in the news I consume and helps me gain a full understanding of the events.
For example, after the Wenchuan earthquake in China, numerous users on social media spread false stories and edited photos, causing public panic. However, professional journalists, who traveled with the rescue teams, provided clear and accurate reports, reassuring people that the government was actively responding and thousands of lives were being saved. This stark contrast domenstrates how traditional media play a crucial role in providing trustworthy news during crises.
In conclusion, traditional media, with their professional standards, offer a more reliable source of information than social platforms.(154字)
9.15日出分汇报
18->27分
写作20-->27分
👉【精批+润色】第169期托福写作团(9.15~10.5)·开放报名