震惊！我收到短信后，竟发现10岁的他做出这样的事......

Some think most crime is the result of circumstances (eg. poverty and other social problems). Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

拿到这道剑桥CPE和雅思的最新作文题后，为师陷入了深深的沉思。数年前在校区里，我的一个黑色钱包不见了，里面还夹杂着各类票据和证件等，着急上火忙碌了一晚上找校区的同事翻查各处和监控也无果。结果第二天的下午，我收到了一条诡异的短信，是来自银行的提醒：“您尾号为XXXX的银行卡，在ATM机因密码错误输入三次，被暂时冻结”。我去！果然我是遭遇了盗窃！于是乎我以光速打电话给银行，立刻长期冻结此银行卡，同时兵分两路分别向警方和线下银行ATM机网点进行调查录像取证，结果发现了震惊的一幕。盗取我银行卡的，居然是一个10岁小男孩，因为穿了和之前一样的红色体恤衫，我和同事们一眼认出这就是前一天和其父亲来咨询的一个学生。因为家长也正好在校区留下了电话，所以警方和银行也便轻而易举请他们来喝茶了。原本我也并不想太大动干戈，毕竟孩子也是未成年人，真要是印记上了一个盗窃的罪名，对双方没有眼下实质性的任何好处。但更离谱的事情在派出所发生了，父亲不仅没有让孩子真诚道歉，反而指责我们小题大做，连民警同志都石化大跌眼镜......以上所说句句属实，首先很庆幸我们中心当时没有接纳这样的学生和家庭来报名学习，否则后面必然会造成更多的幺蛾子。其次大家结合我们学习的话题，可以思考一下，到底这个孩子的犯罪行为是天生的，还是原生家庭影响的，还是说本身遗传了家长的不良品行？也许教育感化人的力量是有限的，法治的贯彻落实才是维稳社会的关键之一。

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There is widespread agreement that "crime is an ever-present condition, akin to sickness, disease, and death." In criminology, understanding why individuals commit crimes is crucial in the ongoing debate on how to manage and prevent criminal activities. I personally believe that both environmental factors and innate predispositions play significant roles in shaping individuals' violent and aggressive behaviors.

It is often argued that mental illness, abnormal brain chemistry, and even evolutionary rewards for aggressive criminal conduct are among the explanations for crime. As humans, our genetic makeup—comprising genes, cells, and other biological components—varies across individuals, predisposing some to criminality. The role of heredity and genetics in influencing a person's overall character can explain why some individuals exhibit violent and aggressive behaviors, while others are completely passive and non-violent.

While crimes vary in their nature, most are the result of certain risk factors, such as poverty, unemployment, or other less obvious causes like the influence of violence in the family or in movies. Individuals develop the motivation and skills necessary for committing crimes through their associations and the environments in which they are immersed. In situations where people experience intense stress and constant exposure to violent behavior, they are more likely to resort to crime. For example, a neighborhood characterized by deteriorating social structures, evident in vacant and vandalized buildings and high unemployment rates, is likely to experience elevated crime rates.

In conclusion, although both biological factors and environmental backgrounds have been demonstrated to shape individuals into criminals, it remains baseless to assert which factor exerts a greater influence.

补充写作词汇

widespread agreement 广泛一致

ever-present condition 永恒存在的状况

ongoing debate 持续的辩论

environment and nature 环境和天性

violent and aggressive behaviors 暴力和侵略行为

bad brain chemistry 不良的大脑化学作用

evolutionary rewards 进化奖励

predisposing people to 使人倾向于

heredity and genetics 遗传和基因

risk factors 风险因素

motivation to commit crime 犯罪动机

fraying social structures 破败的社会结构

vacant and vandalized buildings 空置和被破坏的建筑

high unemployment rates 高失业率

elevated crime rates 提高的犯罪率

biological factors 生物学因素

environmental backgrounds 环境背景

remains baseless to assert 仍无根据地声称