3名考生同时考到7分,竟靠同一个知识点?

文摘   教育   2025-01-14 18:00   新西兰  
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我们的写作1对1Coach Mirra
在3周时间内
连续有3位学生考到7分
这3位同学考到7分
是因为他们都领悟了1个问题
那么这个问题是什么呢?

我们来看一下

如何来写一个

A类段落的中文逻辑

例题:

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree ?


领悟了逻辑模版的要求

如何帮助3名不同困难的同学

6分到7分?

01

H同学:大陆考生,中文逻辑抽象、不具体


领悟了"具体性"

领悟前:

现在的生活和过去有相似之处

如果我们学习历史,当我们遇到问题时,就可以借鉴过去人的经验

(efficient problem solving-付费课逻辑链)

There is no doubt that our current life has something in common with the past. If we have an understanding about the past, when we encounter a problem, we may have more experience to draw on. This may help us find out what the best way is more quickly, saving our time spent on looking for solutions and making mistakes. As a result, we could solve it more efficiently and effectively.

领悟后:

现在人们和以前的人们都会面临很多

相似的问题:如何找到好工作,如何交朋友等

如果我们学习历史,当我们遇到问题时,就可以借鉴过去人的经验

There is no doubt that nowadays, people face many similar issues as our past generations: how to find a good job, how to make friends, and so on. If we have an understanding….

02

A同学:海外考生,缺乏动力完成作业


领悟了"核心词现象"的必要性

领悟前:

作业没动力

领悟后:

写了30多篇作文

03

Y同学:海外考生,挑错逻辑链


领悟了"Idea  map"和逻辑链的联系 

例题:
Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

领悟前:

However, those people who believe that students  should study practical subjects can also justify their opinions. Compared to the academic subjects, learning practical subjects has less studying pressure for students, allowing them to feel more relaxed. If students can learn practical subjects, they are more likely to link irrelevant contents together, helping them consider problems in an orginal way and think outside the box, which may lead to breakthrough innovations. These innovations enable students to become more competitive and stand out inof the school or future working environments, achieving excellent performance.

领悟后:

However, those people who believe that students should study practical subjects can also justify their opinions. These subjects allow students to develop more practical skills, such as cooking and fixing cars, and these skills are necessary to deal with problems that everyone will encounter in our daily life.  If students learn such subjects, they would be more competitive in the future job market and be more likely to land a  job and earn a higher salary, leading to a quality of life.

IDEA MAP如何使用:
1.明确核心方向
practical subjects可能对个人的哪些方面有益?
2.逐一排除不相关选项
是否跟motivation/accountability有关联?看起来不太相关
是否对physical health有直接影响?也似乎无关
3.找到最相关的逻辑链
最终,你会发现这个题目最贴合的方向是“金钱”(money)
因为学习practical subjects能帮助学生提升就业技能,从而增加收入
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