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国际比赛的冲突和理解

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Some people think that international competitive sports such as football bring conflict between people of different age groups and nationalities. Others think sport is helping reach understanding between people and nations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Step1: 技能1,确定结构模版-来自官方


开头:30字
改写观点:
对于国际体育比赛导致了不同年龄和国籍的人之间产生冲突还是理解有不同的观点
写出文章目的:
这篇文章将会讨论两边的观点并且在最后给出我自己的观点
There are conflicting views regarding whether international sports lead to conflict or understanding between individuals of different age groups and nations. This essay will discuss both sides and provide my own opinion at the end. 
Body1:  80字
那些认为这些比赛会导致不同年龄和国籍的人之间
产生冲突的人有以下的观点
Body2:  80字
然而,那些认为不同背景的人之间会产生理解的人
也能证明他们的观点
结尾:60字 我的观点:分类讨论

在我看来,国际体育比赛的影响似乎取决于事件发生的地点

在赛场上和观众之间,由于比赛的竞争性,冲突可能会发生

粉丝们可能因为爱国情怀或不同年龄段对体育的不同看法而产生分歧

然而,在赛场之外,这些赛事往往能够促进理解

因为接触不同的文化有助于培养同理心和对文化多样性的欣赏

In my opinion, it seems that the impact of international sports competitions depends on where the encounters occur. On the field and among spectators, conflicts can arise due to the competitive nature of the games, with fans clashing over patriotism or differences in how different age groups view the sport. However, outside the sports arena, these events often foster understanding because exposure to different cultures helps build empathy and appreciation for cultural diversity.

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Step2: 技能2,确定Body段落模版-来自官方


Body 1: AC  

A: 国际比赛

B:?

C:导致不同年龄不同国家的人产生conflict

Body 2: AC

A:国际比赛

B:?

C:导致不同年龄不同国家的人产生understanding

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Body 1:

第1句:核心词现象A1:  

不同国家的人通常支持自己国家的队伍

B1:如果输了,恼火

C:和对方观众之间产生冲突

核心词现象A2:

不同年龄的人对比赛的attitude不一样:

老年人更注重运动传统、运动员精神;年轻人更喜欢刺激、注重比赛结果

B2:对比赛的理解和反应react不一样

C:观众之间产生冲突

Body 2:

第1句:核心词现象A
不同国家不同年龄的运动员、观众 去host国家体验不同的文化
去当地景点旅游、当地酒吧餐厅与当地人交流
B: Difference-empathy
C: understanding
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Body 1:
Those who believe that these events can lead to conflict between people of different ages and nationalities may put forth the following arguments. There is no doubt that supporters from different countries often back their own teams. If their teams lose, they may feel frustrated, which could result in tension or even fights with fans of the other team. Moreover, different age groups may have different attitudes toward sports: older individuals may value tradition and sportsmanship, while younger people might prioritize excitement and results, thus potentially leading to conflict in how they perceive and react to the competition.

Body 2:

Those who think understanding can be promoted among people of different backgrounds can also justify their opinion. It is common that athletes and fans from different ages and nations who travel to the host country often explore local culture by visiting tourist attractions and communicating with local people in public spaces such as bars and restaurants. These encounters expose these individuals to different thoughts and ways of life, which would make them be aware that such differences are norms and respect them, thus learning to stand in other persons’ shoes. This process can cultivate their empathy, which contributes to social skills.

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