雅思写作,最难小作文类型,地图对比,15分钟模考,稳上7分

文摘   2024-11-05 18:04   新西兰  
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写一篇剑桥19 TEST 2的地图对比题

在15分钟的模考时间内
写出小作文最难类型题目
稳上7分
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Step1: 审题&确定时态和结构


开头:改写

In 2000,过去时

currently,一般现在时/现在完成时
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Step2: 改写题目,写开头段


The maps compare the layout of Porth Harbour in 2000 and its current transformation.
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Step3: 计划写的内容,使用7天免费课提供的模板


In 2000, 过去时
Harbour be situated to the east of main road
Parking at both northern and southern ends
北parking 从main road进出,有showers
东Marina
继续东,dock accommodating passenger ferries
With  a public beach along eastern shore
南parking 从小路进出(连接main road & lifeboat station)
东fishing boats
Southeast corner be covered by a disused castle, beside which public beach

currently,一般现在时/现在完成时
Fishing boats & marina调换 swapped
1dock be constructed 北边
南parking直接连main road,newly built showers
Between .. and..中间空白区域 be replaced by cafe shops
Castle be converted to hotel with an extended path from road
旁边beach变成private
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Step4: 翻译英文,增加summary(也可放在结尾)


Overall, the harbour has been modified to enhance its capacity for boats and provide additional facilities.


In 2000, Porth Harbour was situated to the east of Main Road, with parking lots at both northern and southern ends. For the northern car park which is accessible to Main Road, showers and toilets were located next to it. Its east area was used as a marina for private yachts. Moving further east, there was a dock accommodating passenger ferries, with a public beach along the eastern shore. However, the southern parking facility can only be accessed via a small road connecting Main Road and the lifeboat station. In the east was an area allocated for fishing boats. The large space in the southeast corner of the harbour was covered by a disused castle, beside which was another public beach.


Currently, the positions of the fishing boats and marina have been swapped and an additional dock has been constructed on the northern side. The southern parking now directly connects to Main Road, and like the northern one, has been upgraded with newly built showers and toilets to its north. The empty space between the relocated marina and the lifeboat station is now replaced by cafes and shops. Additionally, the former castle has been converted to a hotel with an extended path from the road and its neighbouring beach is now designated as a private area for hotel guests.

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