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Difference - empathy
更多empathy>更好的social skill
如果老年人继续工作,和同事、客户建立更好的关系>帮助公司提高profit
如果政府允许老年人继续工作
他们觉得自己经济和精神上的需求
be valued & understood - belonging - social cohesion
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Body 1:
One of the key benefits of elderly people staying in their workforce is their contributions to the company. There is no doubt that compared with young people, older adults have more experienced interactions with individuals from different cultural, age and economic backgrounds. This exposure to different thoughts and behaviours helps them be aware that such differences are norms and respect them, thus learning to stand in other persons’ shoes, which would lead to greater empathy and advanced social skills. If these elderly people continue to work, they are more likely to build stronger relationships with both colleagues and clients, ultimately contributing to the overall profit and success of the company.
Body 2:
Another important advantage is related to social cohesion. It is undeniable that work provides individuals with both financial stability and a sense of purpose. If governments allow elderly people to work, they will feel that their economic and emotional needs are being valued and understood, which makes it likely for them to relate to society, improving our sense of belonging. In turn, they would be willing to cooperate with each other to make the society a better place, improving social cohesion.
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