读后续写最新模拟 --一辆自行车的故事
1.(2023·江苏泰州·统考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Bicycle
When I was nine I needed to earn some money, so I asked Mr. Miceli, the newspaper publisher in my Chicago neighbourhood, about an after-school paper route. He agreed only if I had a bicycle.
My dad bought me a used bike, but right after that he fell ill and couldn’t teach me to ride. Mr. Miceli, however, merely asked to see the bike. So I walked to his garage, showed it to him and got the job.
At first, I filled my delivery bag with rolled papers over the handlebars and walked my bike down the sidewalks. But pushing a bike with a load of papers was awkward; after a few days I borrowed Mom’s two-wheeled shopping cart.
It took me longer to make my deliveries by cart, but I didn’t mind. I sent each paper to its proper destination. In rain or snow, I put Dad’s old raincoat over the cart to keep the papers dry. I got to meet everyone in the neighborhood — working-class people of Italian, German or Polish origins who were invariably kind to me.
When Dad returned from the hospital, he was too weak to resume his original job. Now we needed every penny we could raise to pay bills, so we sold the bike. Mr. Miceli must have known I wasn’t using a bike, but he said nothing about it to me.
On the Thursday evening before Christmas, 1951, I rang my first customer’s doorbell. Even though the lights were on, nobody answered, so I went on to the next house. No answer, nor did anyone respond at the next family on my route, or the one after.
I was very worried; I had to pay for my papers every Friday. And while it was almost Christmas, I never thought that everyone would be out shopping. So I was very happy when, going up the walkway to Mr. Gordon’s house, I heard music and voices. I rang the bell.
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The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside.
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After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes.
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The door flew open, and Mr. Gordon dragged me inside. Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! In the center of the room, I saw a new bicycle, a canvas bag packed with colorful envelopes on its handlebar. “A Christmas present our best paperboy!” Mr. Gordon said. Sensing my confusion, he continued, “We’ve all seen you in the rain and snow with that little shopping cart, so we suppose you ought to have a bicycle.” Deeply touched, I felt tears of gratitude filling my eyes.
After walking the bicycle home, I opened those envelopes. They held Christmas cards from every subscriber, along with their subscription fees and tips. Kindness did not end there, though. The next day, when I got to Mr. Miceli’s garage, he was waiting outside. “Bring your bike tomorrow morning, and I’ll teach you to ride,” he offered. When I felt comfortable on a bike, Mr. Miceli asked me to deliver a second route. Delivering both routes on my new bike, I really appreciated the kind Chicagoans’ love and support.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者儿时通过送报纸来挣钱补贴家用,但由于父亲突发疾病,不得不卖掉了作者送报纸用的自行车,后来邻居们自发为他买了一辆自行车作为圣诞节的礼物来感谢作者每日送报纸的辛劳,歌颂了作者踏实认真的品质,赞扬了邻居们热心善意的举动。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“门突然开了,戈登先生把我拖了进去。”可知,第一段可描写作者进去之后看到的景象(邻居们自发为他买了一辆自行车作为圣诞节的礼物)及感想。
②由第二段首句内容“推着自行车回家后,我打开了那些信封。”可知,第二段可描写信件的具体内容及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:被戈登先生拖进去——邻居们送自行车——感动——回家看信——邻居的善意继续——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看见,发现:see/spot
②充满:be packed with/be full of/be filled with
③到达:get to/arrive at/reach
情绪类
①感谢:gratitude/appreciation
②感动:touched/moved
【点睛】[高分句型1] Jammed in his living room were all my subscribers! (运用了完全倒装句)
[高分句型2] When I felt comfortable on a bike, Mr. Miceli asked me to deliver a second route. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)