上周六的雅思大陆纸笔大作文不知大家感觉如何，乍一看很简单，但是不知道你有没有注意到：increasing business and cultural contact ，这里有一个and, 说的是business 和cultural contact 两者带来的benefits和两者causes the loss of national identities.
具体听听9分学长的思路讲解吧：
题目：2024.6.7 Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects . Others say it causes the loss of national identities.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
九分学长手敲的8分范文
The escalating commercial and cultural interactions among nations have spurred a contentious debate regarding their implications. Some individuals contend that these exchanges yield substantial benefits, while others argue that they precipitate the erosion of national identities. In my estimation, the burgeoning business and cultural contacts between countries foster global harmony.
Proponents assert that the augmentation of cultural and commercial exchanges among nations can engender significant economic advantages. In our increasingly interconnected world, international business transactions, encompassing imports and exports, have become ubiquitous. This dynamic not only cultivates economic ties but also facilitates cultural understanding, which in turn promotes further business interactions. Developed nations can export their state-of-the-art technology, infrastructure, and expertise to developing countries, while the latter can provide agricultural products and other resources to advanced economies. This reciprocal trade enables both parties to reap benefits by capitalizing on their respective strengths. Moreover, cultural exchanges forge trust and amity, ensuring the longevity of business collaborations.
Conversely, detractors maintain that these interactions precipitate the attenuation of national identities. As countries become more enmeshed through business and cultural exchanges, the dominant culture often exerts a profound influence on the host nation. This phenomenon is conspicuous in the pervasive impact of Western media and lifestyle on East Asian societies, molding local cultures and societal norms. For instance, the ubiquity of American fast food chains and Hollywood films in these regions has engendered a transformation in indigenous dietary habits and entertainment preferences. Such cultural hegemony can induce individuals in the host country to disregard their own cultural heritage, embracing the adopted foreign culture instead. This erosion of national identity can eventuate in a homogenized global culture and a diminution of cultural diversity.
In my judgment, the escalating business and cultural contacts between nations engender global harmony. As countries engage in commercial and cultural exchanges, they cultivate an appreciation and understanding of each other's differences, mitigating misunderstandings and conflicts. For example, international business conferences and cultural festivals furnish platforms for nations to showcase their cultural heritage and discuss mutual interests, nurturing a sense of global community. This enhanced mutual understanding and respect can conduce to more peaceful international relations, as countries are more inclined to resolve disputes amicably. Fostering global peace and stability constitutes a significant benefit of augmented international interactions.
8分词汇：
escalating commercial and cultural interactions - 日益增加的商业和文化互动
spurred a contentious debate - 引发了一场有争议的辩论
erosion of national identities - 国家认同的侵蚀
engender significant economic advantages - 带来显著的经济利益
capitalizing on their respective strengths - 利用各自的优势
ensuring the longevity of business collaborations - 确保商业合作的持久性
attenuation of national identities - 国家认同的减弱
cultural hegemony - 文化霸权
homogenized global culture - 同质化的全球文化
fostering global peace and stability - 促进全球和平与稳定
enmeshed 是一个形容词，意思是被卷入或陷入某种复杂情况或关系中。
中文思路：
首段，商业和文化交流增多引发关于其影响的争议。
第二段（一些人），支持者认为，这些交流带来经济利益并促进文化理解。
第三段（另一些人），反对者担忧，这会导致国家认同的削弱和文化同质化。
我看来（第四段），这些互动促进了全球和谐与和平。
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