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2024.5.11雅思大陆纸笔题目：The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuels (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这篇文章里：immidately, all nationas, gas and oil十分关键，写作如果得7+操作必须得当，首先是立减减少，这个点可以据理力争。然后是不是all nationas, 这个点可以有话可说。另外这篇文章对于fossil fuels也有一个限定，特别举例了gas and oil,所以最好不要写别的化石燃料。
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8分范文：
The proposition that the international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuels is contentious. I disagree with this assertion, as the complexities involved require more nuanced and graduated responses.
I dissent from the international community's insistence that all countries immediately curb their fossil fuel consumption, as it could precipitate social unrest, especially in underdeveloped areas. Many developing countries heavily depend on these energy sources. An abrupt global reduction could precipitate severe economic disruptions and societal unrest in these regions. For instance, in nations like Nigeria and Venezuela, oil revenues underpin the national economy, and an immediate cut could lead to economic collapse and social instability. This cascade effect illustrates why global policies should consider gradual transitions rather than abrupt mandates.
I contest the notion that the international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuels. Instead, wealthier, technologically advanced countries should exploit their economic and scientific strengths to lead by example in adopting new energy solutions. They should prioritize the reduction of fossil fuel usage through innovative technologies, ensuring that their own societies remain stable and prosperous. By doing so, developed nations can establish robust models of energy transition that other countries can later adopt. For instance, the transition to renewable energies in Scandinavian countries has been both effective and socially harmonious, demonstrating that economic health does not need to be sacrificed for environmental sustainability. These success stories can pave the way for global benefits, fostering a gradual and sustainable shift away from fossil fuels worldwide.
To some extent, I agree that the international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. Immediate action by all countries can indeed mitigate some urgent climate issues, such as global warming. Rapid reductions in fossil fuel use could slow the progression of climate change, potentially staving off severe consequences like rising sea levels and catastrophic flooding. This global collective action, therefore, is crucial for preventing some of the direst predictions of environmental science from coming to fruition.
Although an immediate reduction in the use of fossil fuels by all countries could have an instantaneous and beneficial impact on the environment, such action should neither be precipitate nor universally mandated, owing to a multitude of factors.
8分表达：
contentious - 有争议的
nuanced and graduated responses - 细致和逐步的回应
dissent from - 不同意
precipitate social unrest - 引发社会动荡
an abrupt global reduction - 突然的全球减少
economic disruptions - 经济中断
cascade effect - 级联效应
underpin the national economy - 支撑国家经济
economic collapse - 经济崩溃
social instability - 社会不稳定
gradual transitions - 渐进过渡
technologically advanced countries - 技术先进国家
innovative technologies - 创新技术
robust models of energy transition - 坚固的能源转型模式
environmental sustainability - 环境可持续性
中文大意：
首段：文章讨论国际社会是否应立即要求所有国家减少化石燃料消耗。
第一段：反对，发展中国家依赖化石燃料，快速减少会导致经济和社会问题。
第二段：反对，发达国家应首先减少化石燃料消耗，以弥补历史责任。
第三段（折中）：支持，所有国家应即刻行动，以缓解全球气候变暖和其他严重气候问题。
尾段：总结提出应根据国家实际情况分阶段减少化石燃料消耗。
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