2024.7.6雅思大作文(8分范文+词汇)

文摘   2024-07-08 11:59   海南  

2024.7.6大作文Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Some people think individuals are more and more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

7月6日的 雅思考试可谓是近几次以来最简单的一次 ,我们的题库也是分别压中了听力两篇 和阅读1篇。本次的大作文难度也相对简答,考双边讨论,写法上只需两个主体段,支持各方观点,然后陈述自己支持哪一方即可。话题也是老生常谈的,都在观点库中。


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8分范文:

The evolution of human society has precipitated a contentious debate regarding the trajectory of individual autonomy versus collective interdependence. In my opinion, while there are strong arguments on both sides, the reality is that individuals are indeed more interdependent due to the complexities of modern life.

Proponents of heightened interdependence highlight that technological advancements have rendered contemporary work paradigms increasingly interdependent. The proliferation of remote work capabilities has engendered a global workforce model wherein expansive projects are routinely partitioned among geographically disparate employees. This decentralized approach necessitates an unprecedented level of coordination and mutual reliance. For instance, in the realm of software development, it is not uncommon for team members distributed across multiple continents to collaborate on discrete components of a singular project. This mode demands constant communication and seamless integration of disparate elements, fostering a symbiotic relationship among participants. The ramifications of this shift are profound, cultivating a global workforce that thrives on collective expertise and synchronized efforts.

Conversely, advocates of increased independence argue that technological progress has empowered individuals with unprecedented access to information and artificial intelligence tools, enabling singular entities to accomplish tasks that previously required collective effort. A salient example is the field of data analysis, where AI-powered tools now allow a solitary analyst to process and interpret vast datasets, a task that historically demanded a team of specialists. This augmentation of individual capability ostensibly diminishes the necessity for collaboration, potentially fostering a milieu of heightened autonomy in decision-making and task execution.

Notwithstanding these arguments for increased independence, I posit that the balance has shifted decisively towards greater interdependence. This assertion is substantiated by the emergence of global challenges that transcend individual or even national capacity to address effectively. The COVID-19 pandemic and the ongoing climate crisis serve as paradigmatic examples of issues that demand unprecedented levels of human collaboration. The global response to the pandemic, for instance, necessitated a coordinated effort among scientists, policymakers, and healthcare professionals worldwide, encompassing information sharing, resource allocation, and strategy formulation. This imperative for collective action underscores the formation of a global community wherein mutual dependence is not merely beneficial but essential for addressing existential threats. Ultimately, these collective challenges illuminate the growing interconnectedness of human society and the ineluctable need for coordinated efforts and shared responsibility in navigating the complexities of our contemporary world.

8分词汇:

·  precipitated - 引发

·  contentious - 有争议的

·  trajectory - 轨迹

·  autonomy - 自主性

·  interdependence - 互依性

·  advancements - 进步

·  proliferation - 激增

·  engendered - 产生

·  geographically - 地理上

·  disparate - 不同的

·  necessitates - 需要

·  unprecedented - 前所未有的

·  coordination - 协调

·  seamless - 无缝的

·  integration - 整合

·  symbiotic - 共生的

·  augmentation - 增强

·  paradigmatic - 范式的

·  existential - 存在的

·  transcend - 超越

中文大意:

开头段:文章讨论了个人自主性与集体互依性的辩论。

第二段:技术进步使现代工作更具互依性,全球化工作模式要求高度协调。

第三段:尽管技术也增强了个人能力,减少了对合作的依赖,但全球性挑战如疫情和气候危机表明,集体合作和互依性更为重要。

尾段:这体现了现代社会中个人和集体之间的复杂关系。

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