2024.6.22雅思大作文It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
本周6.22的题目是论述类，题目很常规 ，新手烤鸭注意不要论述错误，因为人家问你同意不同意的是第二句“There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?” 不是第一句的“It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos, etc.)”
当然 也有同学认为：这两句话是因果关系 ，感觉动物的灭绝并不是完全的一个natural process，很多动物是由于 人类行为导致灭绝的，因此人类要去prevent。
上述观点是跑题的：
因为第一句话是个背景，是大自然的一个fact, ，第二句才是一个观点。
还有的跑题同学会去写的很具体，比如我们要 保护环境，我们要少打猎，都是跑题。因为这个题目问是时要不要 prevent动物灭绝，这是一个上位逻辑，不是 details,不是方法论
类似于每个人都要结婚你同意不同意，没问你具体同不同意和王源结婚，还是和王俊凯结婚。
最神奇的是，这个 同学自述，他机构老师就是这么讲的，纯纯跑题：
如下是我对这个题目的语音讲解，大家可对照我的手敲范文听
8分范文：
The extinction of animal species, often perceived as a natural component of evolutionary processes is a phenomenon that some argue should not be impeded by human intervention.In my opinion, this perspective is misguided and that humanity has an obligation to prevent such extinctions.
I oppose the notion that people should not prevent animal species from becoming extinct, as the intricate web of interdependence among species forms a complex and vital biological chain,
where the extinction of one species can trigger a cascading effect that ultimately jeopardizes human survival. In a balanced ecosystem, each species fulfills a crucial role, whether as predator, prey, or symbiotic partner. The extinction of bees, for instance, which are vital pollinators, would not only impact the plants that rely on their services but also the animals and humans that depend on those plants for sustenance. This interconnectedness underscores the potential for the extinction of one species to disrupt entire ecosystems, thus necessitating human intervention to maintain ecological equilibrium.
Also, the idea of ignoring the extinction of certain animal species to advance human technology and civilization is misguided and detrimental. Throughout history, humans have derived invaluable insights from the diverse fauna that inhabit our planet, drawing inspiration from their unique adaptations and behaviors to drive innovation across myriad domains. From traditional medicine to the study of dragonfly aerodynamics in aviation and the butterfly effect in chaos theory, our co-inhabitants have consistently catalyzed scientific breakthroughs. Moreover, countless medical advancements have emerged from animal experimentation, underscoring the vital role these creatures play in expanding our understanding of biology and disease. The extinction of animal species would undoubtedly deprive humanity of essential sources of inspiration and hinder progress in technology and medicine.
Rather, I support that the principle of survival of the fittest dictates that species unable to adapt to environmental changes should naturally fade into extinction, thereby facilitating the evolution and emergence of new species. This process of natural selection, they contend, drives biodiversity and fosters resilience within ecosystems. The extinction of certain species has historically allowed others to flourish and evolve, resulting in a more adaptable and robust biosphere. By refraining from interfering with this natural process, we enable the course of evolution to enhance species diversity and ecological resilience.
In conclusion, ignoring the survival of other species endangers humanity and hampers progress, and I strongly disapprove of such opinions.
8分表达：
intricate web of interdependence - 错综复杂的相互依赖网络
cascading effect - 连锁效应
jeopardizes human survival - 危及人类生存
maintain ecological equilibrium - 维持生态平衡
misguided and detrimental - 被误导且有害
derive invaluable insights - 获得宝贵的见解
myriad domains - 各个领域
catalyzed scientific breakthroughs - 催生了科学突破
essential sources of inspiration - 重要的灵感来源
enhance species diversity and ecological resilience - 增强物种多样性和生态韧性
中文大意：
首段：动物物种灭绝被认为是自然进化的一部分，但人类有责任防止这种情况。
第二段：反对，对动物灭绝置若罔闻会破坏生态平衡，影响人类生存。
第三段：反对，对动物灭绝置若罔闻会阻碍人类自身科学和文明的发展
第四段：支持，有些人认为自然选择应决定物种生存，但这可能导致生态系统脆弱。
尾段：防止物种灭绝对生态平衡、科学进步和地球的未来至关重要。
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