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2024.5.25. 题目
It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这个题目是一个双命题,同意的话so的前后命题都要同意,且因果关系要成立。不同意的话,so前后的命题任意不同意一个就可以。
然而,so 前后的命题真的可以不同意吗?你还真的没法反驳!且听我娓娓道来。
下面是我手敲的8分范文:
It is frequently contended that the aspiration to extend assistance on a global scale is impractical, thereby necessitating that governments prioritize their own constituents. I subscribe to this perspective primarily because a government’s foremost obligation is to serve and safeguard its electorate, judiciously allocate its finite resources, and foster national progress through education and innovation.
Fundamentally, it stands to reason that a government, elected with the mandate to serve its citizens, should place their needs above international aid. Within a democratic framework, the electorate bestows upon the government the responsibility of ensuring their wellbeing and addressing their concerns. By concentrating on its citizenry, a government fulfills its intrinsic role, thus legitimizing the confidence vested in it by the populace. If a government were to excessively redirect its focus and assets toward international assistance, it could neglect domestic obligations, culminating in citizen discontent and potential disturbances. Hence, ensuring national priorities safeguards the government's legitimacy in serving its electorate effectively.
I firmly assert that a government cannot simultaneously cater to global needs and must prioritize its inhabitants, especially regarding resource distribution. A nation’s resources are inherently limited and must be judiciously allocated to confront internal predicaments, such as economic crises and natural calamities. For instance, the COVID-19 pandemic compelled governments to navigate arduous decisions on vaccine distribution, necessitating the prioritization of their own populace to domestically manage the virus before extending aid internationally. This methodology optimizes the utilization of finite resources, guaranteeing that the populace's needs are addressed foremost, culminating in a more stable and affluent society.
I emphatically concur that a government is incapable of assisting the entire world; consequently, it must prioritize its own citizens to cultivate an adept workforce, propel national advancement, and augment global competitiveness. By concentrating on the welfare of their own citizens, including ensuring equitable access to education, augmenting income levels, bolstering social security, and expanding job opportunities, governments can nurture the development of successive generations. When citizens receive exemplary education and adequate economic backing, they become increasingly productive and proficient, contributing substantially to national progression. This strategic emphasis not only ensures the nation’s progress but also averts it from being overshadowed or exploited by more dominant countries. Therefore, it is imperative for governments to prioritize their own citizens to construct a robust, self-reliant, and globally competitive nation.
In summation, while it is a laudable aspiration to assist everyone globally, practical limitations mandate that governments prioritize their own citizenry. By focusing on their electorate, optimizing the distribution of resources, and enhancing national education and innovation, governments can fulfill their primary obligations and foster a stable, prosperous, and competitive nation.
8分词汇:
aspiration - 抱负
constituents - 选民
judiciously allocate - 明智地分配
finite resources - 有限资源
electorate - 选民
intrinsic role - 固有角色
vested - 赋予
excessively redirect - 过度转向
potential disturbances - 潜在骚乱
legitimacy - 合法性
resource distribution - 资源分配
inherently limited - 本质上有限
arduous decisions - 艰难决策
prioritization - 优先考虑
methodology - 方法论
culminating - 最终导致
affluent society - 富裕社会
augment global competitiveness - 提升全球竞争力
equitable access - 公平获取
bolstering social security - 增强社会保障
substantially - 大幅度地
中文思路:
首段:政府的首要责任是服务和保护其选民,确保其福祉。
第2段:资源有限,政府应优先满足国内需求,以避免公民不满。
第3段:确保国内资源分配,提升社会稳定和富裕。
第4段:通过优质教育和经济支持,促进国家进步和全球竞争力。
第5段:实际限制要求政府优先国内,才能实现稳定繁荣。
只能说,这次考试的苦主们,你们辛苦了
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