【Before Writing, Answer Some Questions】What are the main challenges or inconveniences you face in your daily school life that could be addressed by a smart screen at the classroom door?What features do you think would be most beneficial for students in terms of academic performance and campus life?在学校日常生活中遇到的主要挑战或不便之处是什么，可以通过教室门口的智慧屏解决吗？【即开发什么功能比较合适？参照的尺度是什么？】开发的功能应以学生为中心，满足学术和日常生活的需求。比如，及时通知传递，点名签到，以及食堂食谱公布等。我们应参照的尺度包括促进高效学习，便利日常生活，以及增强校园沟通。【开头语言表达】难点主要在于现状描述，即如何表达“拟在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏”，“拟在”可以用plan 或schedule等词表达动作的计划性，“安装”学生主要考虑的词汇选择是install/set up/establish，多功能智能屏则是一个复合概念，最佳的概念对应可以是multifunctional smart screen，如果学生不知道multi-functional, 也可以用简单的概念进行同义替换，比如a smart screen with various functions.开头段可以这样写：I hope this email finds you well. As a student of our esteemed international school, I am excited to hear about the plan to install a multifunctional smart screen at the classroom door. I would like to offer some suggestions that I believe would greatly benefit us students.【建议开发的功能及原因对应】这种类型的要点设置我们也碰到很多次，即要点1和要点2 的内容是需要对应的，在要点1给出的功能建议，要写对应的原因。比如建议功能是公布通知，那么原因自然就是能更好地让学生知道学校动态，及时调整日程和安排。具体功能可以是：Timely Notifications:Displaying important announcements, homework assignments, and exam schedules to ensure that students are well-informed.Attendance Checking: Allowing us to sign in and out of classes with a quick scan of our student IDs, which could streamline the process and reduce paper usage.Cafeteria Menu Display:Updating us on the daily menu to help us make informed decisions about our meals.对应的原因：Efficiency in Information Dissemination:With the screen displaying real-time updates, students can quickly glance at the information they need without having to search through emails or bulletins.Convenience in Daily Routines: The smart screen's features can save time and effort, making our daily routines smoother and more efficient.Enhanced Communication:It would foster better communication between the school and students, ensuring that everyone is on the same page.【结尾】结尾是很常规的建议信结尾，希望对方能考虑自己的建议，同时表示感谢。在实际写作中，高水平的学生是能够通过不同的语境要求，写出不一样的适配语境的结尾的，比如这篇文章除了感谢建议采纳，还可以表达对学校项目的期待和祝愿，因为题干中提到“拟在”，说明项目还未开展，可以适当期盼项目的圆满完工，进而希望项目能够便利学生的生活。如：I hope you will consider these suggestions. I am confident that the installation of the smart screen with these features will greatly enhance our academic experience and overall school life.
