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写作体裁：活动投稿
对标教材：职业规划选择方向
主题语境：人与自我-做人与做事
写作注意：确保文章围绕“体验的一项职业”和“你的感受”这两个要点展开，不能厚此薄彼，职业的体验不能一笔带过，只点出职业是什么是不够的，要能够围绕选择的职业谈活动经历，突出参与感。人称上，使用第一人称“我”来叙述个人经历。时态则为一般过去时。
【话题导入】
Last month, I had the opportunity to participate in our school's “My First Experience in Career” program.Last month, I got involved in the “My First Experience in Career” practice activity organized by our school. This experience was truly eye-opening and enlightening for me.【要点融合】
选择1：医生
（简述）For my first career experience, I delved into the world of medicine by shadowing a doctor at the local hospital.（经历扩展）During my time at the hospital, I observed various medical procedures, and interacted with patients. The highlight of my experience was assisting in a minor surgery. *Although I was initially overwhelmed by the intensity of the operating room, the doctor’s guidance and support helped me overcome my nerves.（感受）Being a doctor, I realized, is more than just treating illnesses. It’s about comforting patients, alleviating their fears, and sometimes, even providing a shoulder to lean on.The feeling of being able to make a difference in someone's life is indescribable. Witnessing the gratitude in patients’ eyes as they recovered under the doctors’ care filled me with a sense of pride and accomplishment.选择2：教师
（简述）I was assigned to a local primary school to experience the career of a teacher.（经历扩展）During my time at the primary school, I assisted the teachers in various activities, such as preparing teaching materials, conducting classes, and grading homework. The highlight of my experience was when I was given the chance to teach a class of third-graders. Although I was nervous at first, the enthusiasm and curiosity of the students boosted my confidence and made the teaching process enjoyable.（感受）The feeling of being a teacher was both challenging and rewarding. On one hand, it required a great deal of patience and dedication to cater to the diverse learning needs of the students. On the other hand, the sense of accomplishment I felt when the students understood a concept I taught was incredibly fulfilling. It made me realize the significant impact a teacher can have on shaping a child's future.选择3：公司实习（范文）
（简述）I was assigned to a local company for a one-week internship.（经历扩展）Initially, I was nervous and unsure about what to expect. However, the friendly staff and supportive environment quickly put me at ease. I was involved in various tasks, from simple data entry to assisting in meetings, which allowed me to gain a comprehensive understanding of the daily operations of a business.（感受）This experience provided me with a glimpse into the real world of work. I learned about the importance of teamwork, communication, and time management, skills that are essential for any career. Moreover, it also helped me clarify my career goals and interests. It made me realize that I have a passion for this particular industry and inspired me to pursue further studies and training in this area.上述3个体验职业共同的写作亮点是：他们都抓住了目标职业的独特点，而非泛泛而谈，比如教师职业，用了preparing teaching materials, conducting classes, and grading homework一系列主题语块，使得职业体验的真实性得以增加。具体在写作中，我们要避免全篇都是抽象的概念，比如“协助当地教师工作”，我们要指出具体是如何协助的，在哪些方面协助；我们不仅要写“给我们一种自豪感成就感”，也要写这种感觉来自何方，为什么会这么感受，我们更深层次的思考在哪里。
