推荐这两篇主题语境为艺术的应用文,链接2024年6月全国卷真题,讲透相关语料

教育   2024-10-26 12:30   湖南  

命题评价:第一个要点按照高考对长度的把控,可以改成“大赛概况”“大赛基本情况”,也能助推促进教师在教学应用文各个体裁基本写作时,能够解构一些抽象概念,比如“概况”“介绍”一般会包含什么要素,如时间、地点、目的、人员etc.

 

语料储备:

【目的】

1.We aim to foster a culture of sustainability and inspire creativity through the upcycling of waste materials.

2.This contest is designed to challenge students to reimagine waste as a resource, promoting  artistic expression.

3.This contest aims to promote environmental awareness and creativity by transforming waste materials into innovative and aesthetically pleasing artworks.

【时间地点】

1.The contest will be held in the school’s art gallery on Saturday, November 5th, from 10:00 a.m. to 2:00 p.m., offering a full day of creative expression and environmental awareness.

2.The contest is scheduled for Wednesday, November 2nd, in the school’s outdoor courtyard from 10:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m.

 
【作品要求】

1.All entries must be created using recycled or repurposed materials. Examples include but are not limited to plastic bottles, cardboard, paper scraps, and other waste items.

2.Entries must be original works and not copies of existing art pieces.

3.While the theme is open, we encourage works that reflect environmental consciousness and the beauty of sustainability.

4.Participants should submit their entries to the Art Club room by [ deadline], along with a brief description of the artwork and the materials used.



命题评价:比较好的融合类体裁,融合了祝贺信和评价两种体裁,祝贺的要点考察了应用文功能层面的结构能力,评价这个要点更加指向学生语言输出运用的思维能力。

 

语料储备:

【祝贺】

I am writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on the exciting news that your painting has been selected for the "Beautiful China in My Eyes" art exhibition organized by our school's student union.

Your artwork’s acceptance into the exhibition is a wonderful achievement, and I am sure it will inspire many to view China with admiration and wonder that you have so beautifully depicted.

【简评】

1.Your artwork truly captures the essence of China's natural beauty and cultural richness.

2.The vibrant colors and intricate details not only reflect your deep appreciation for the country but also showcase your exceptional talent as an artist.

3.The way you’ve portrayed the landscapes and traditional elements is both captivating and thought-provoking, offering a unique perspective that resonates with viewers.

4.Your piece stands out for its ability to blend the traditional with the modern, highlighting the harmony between China's ancient heritage and its contemporary development.

5.The use of light and shadow adds depth to your work, drawing the viewer's eye through the composition with a sense of wonder and discovery.

 


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