最近这两个大型联考都考这个类型!简析江浙皖联盟+天域名协10月联考应用文

教育   2024-10-08 10:03   广东  


以上两则分别是10月最新两份大型联考的应用文,非常有趣的是,他们的应用文写作都指向了经历分享,一个是线上跨文化展示交流活动,另一个是户外露营。事实上都是对2024年6月全国卷高考应用文的复刻。
从设问尺度上看,江浙皖联盟的试题更倾向于全国卷干练的命题风格,而天域名校协作体的语言组织稍显拖沓,提示部分(书法、武术、剪纸)很显然有引导性质,希望学生向文化元素方向进行写作。根据往年高考应用文的设问,这种类型的命题是稍显啰嗦的,我们更希望学生能自觉调动自身的文化意识和对文化的理解,去联想探索出合理的写作内容,创设自己的思维框架,提示意味过重的写作可能更适合高一高二的学生,对于高三的学生来说,我们更要用开放式命题去进行思维激发引导
从要点设计尺度上看,天域名校联考的题看似是两个要点,实际上第一个要点包含两个要点,总体需要考生写三部分内容,内容稍显多,学生很难在限制性的字数中完成。江浙皖联考的应用文则围绕“过程+感想”展开,比较自然。
从话题熟悉度和写作难度上看,二者各有千秋,跨文化交流的情境搭建很好,学生很容易联想运用到教材中学到的各种有关中国文化的表达,而户外露营很多学生并没有体验过,和今年高考的公园艺术课类似,从过程联想来看富有挑战性。
以下是两篇应用文的助写语料。
天域名校联盟10月联考应用文

【角度1:书法

At the event, I presented the art of Chinese calligraphy. I chose this because it's not just an art form, but a reflection of our history and philosophy. Holding the brush and seeing the ink dance on paper was a mesmerizing experience. It was rewarding to see the fascination in the eyes of our foreign peers as they tried their hand at it.

The exchange was a profound lesson in cultural appreciation. It made me realize how much we can learn from each other and how art can bridge the gaps between cultures. It was a reminder that despite our differences, we share a common humanity.

【角度2:武术】

I demonstrated a routine from Kung Fu, one of the most recognized martial arts in China. I chose to showcase this because it embodies not only physical strength and discipline but also the spiritual and philosophical aspects of our culture. Practicing Kung Fu is about harmony, balance, and the pursuit of inner peace.

Participating in this exchange was an eye-opening experience. It allowed me to connect with people from different backgrounds and share a piece of my heritage. I was struck by the universal appeal of martial arts and how it can be a language that transcends borders.

江浙皖县中发展共同体10月联考

It was a refreshing break from the hustle and bustle of city life.

We set off early on Saturday, armed with tents, sleeping bags, and a sense of adventure. Upon reaching the campsite, we were greeted by the serene beauty of nature. The process of pitching tents and starting a campfire was both challenging and fun. That night, we cooked simple meals over the fire and shared stories under a sky full of stars.

The experience was incredibly humbling. Being surrounded by nature made me realize how small we are in the grand scheme of things. It also highlighted the importance of family bonding and the simple joys of life. I came back with a renewed sense of appreciation for the natural world and the moments we share with loved ones. 

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