第一波浙江一模已经结束，产生了很多优质的英语试题，包括笔者很喜欢的杭州一模、温州一模，也产生了好几篇让笔者眼前一亮的高质量应用文，这些应用文一扫9—10月部分联考对高考拙劣模仿的应用文套路风，为新一届应用文备考和命题注入活力。笔者收集了目前8个地市一模卷的应用文部分，汇编成合集。（其中湖丽衢考一张卷，舟山与宁波同卷，台州则每年都是中旬开考）第一梯队笔者认为是杭州和温州，出的非常好，全国卷所有学生都值得写。第二梯队是宁波和湖丽衢，笔者认为这两个地市的应用文也很好，只是相对杭温有点逊色，但放到很多省都是一流的水平，金华的应用文中规中矩，和其他的相形见绌，然后框定的范围也较大，有些宏观。
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2024年11月浙江各市一模应用文合集
★★★★★【2024杭州一模】
第一节（满分15分）
假定你是李华，上学期你校发起了一项活动，倡议每个班级都养绿植(greenery)。请你给曾经的外教Linda写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 活动的效果和反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
I'm delighted to share with you an exciting initiative we've launched at our school—"Greenery in Every Classroom."The project kicked off with each class selecting a variety of plants to cultivate. We began with a special planting session where students enthusiastically potted seeds and saplings. The subsequent weeks were filled with a shared responsibility as we watered and nurtured our tiny green friends. This hands-on experience with nature has not only brightened our classrooms but also sparked a genuine interest in botany and environmental conservation. The initiative has been met with widespread enthusiasm and even made the headlines in the local newspaper.★★★★★【2024温州一模】
第一节（满分15分）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jasper对你在“科学三分钟”(3-minute Science Speech Activity)中介绍的生物多样性研究很感兴趣，想了解你如何应对研究中的挑战。请你写一封邮件回复，内容包括：
1．研究困难；
2．解决方法。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
Dear Jasper,
I’m glad that you thought my presentation on biodiversity research at “3-minute Science Speech Activity" interesting. It’s been a really cool project, and filled with challenges.The biggest problem l encountered was the limited experimental conditions and equipment, making it difficult to analyse the data I collected. To address this issue, l sought help from my biology teacher who was incredibly helpful with several alternative methods for data analysis.Then, l adopted a creative approach, computer modeling, to estimate the impact of different environmental variables on species diversity and distribution within a specific ecosystem.As you can see, it wasn't plain sailing, but I worked it out eventually.Isn’t that what science is all about?Yours,
Li Hua
★★★★【2024宁波一模】
第一节(满分15分)
学校英语俱乐部将组织关于“生活中具有重大影响的科技产品”的讨论，请你作为代表发言，内容包括:
1.介绍一项产品及其影响;
2.对该产品的展望。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone.
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone.
Today, I am thrilled to share with you a technological item in our life: Artificial Intelligence (AI). AI involves the development of computer systems designed to perform tasks that normally require human intelligence.By automating routine tasks and providing innovative solutions to complex problems, AI has already made waves in various aspects. It is transforming healthcare with personalized treatments, enhancing security with facial recognition, and even teaching languages with unmatched efficiency.Looking ahead, AI is bound to become an indispensable part of our lives. I anticipate significant advancements in AI’s ability to interact with the world, leading to breakthroughs in robotics, autonomous transportation, and even creative fields like art and music. While the future with AI holds immense promise, it’s also crucial to address ethical issues to make sure it benefits humanity.★★★★【2024湖丽衢一模】
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华，你校将举办英语节“戏剧之夜”(Drama Night)活动，并且进行网络直播(live-stream)，请你给英国好友 David 写一封电子邮件，邀请他观看，内容如下:
1.活动介绍;
2.观看时间和方式
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
I hope this email finds you well! I'm excited to invite you to watch our live-streamed Drama Night, which is scheduled at 7 p.m. (Beijing Time) next Friday.The event will feature a range of performances by my fellow students, from classic plays to some adapted pieces, providing a fantastic platform where we can showcase passion and talent.You’1l surely enjoy experiencing our creativity and seeing how we interpret English drama from a different perspective.You can watch it on the school's official website. I’ll send you the link as soon as it’s available. Hope you can join us online!★★★【2024金华十校一模】
你校上周举办了主题为 “Embrace English, Show Ourselves” 的英语周系列活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1. 你印象最深的一个活动；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Embrace English, Show Ourselves |
【参考范文】
Embrace English, Show Ourselves
Last week witnessed huge success of our school's English Week themed “Embrace English, Show Ourselves”.Among the many events, the one that has left a lasting impression on me is the “English Drama Night”. Students from different classes grouped together to perform English plays, ranging from classic Shakespearean tragedies to contemporary pieces. I was not only impressed by my fellow students’ excellent command of the English language, but also deeply moved by their vivid portrayal of the characters.The week serves as a reminder that learning English is not just about mastering grammar and vocabulary. It is also about self-expression. Now, I'm more motivated than ever to continue improving my English to bring out the best in myself.
