25年考研英语(一)写作解析

教育   2024-12-23 11:59   北京  

小作文:说明+感谢

Directions: Read the following email from your classmate Paul and write him a reply.

Dear Li Ming,
    I was really excited to hear that you'd invite some young craftsmen to demonstrate their innovative craft-making on campus. May I know more about what they'll show? Also, I'd like to help you with your preparation work. Please let me know what I can do for you.
Yours,
Paul

题干翻译

指令:阅读以下来自同学Paul的邮件,并给他写一个回复。

亲爱的李明,
       我非常兴奋地听到你将邀请一些年轻的工匠到校园来展示他们创新的手工艺制作。我能了解更多他们将会展示什么内容吗?另外,我想帮助你进行准备工作。请告诉我有什么我可以帮上忙的地方。
此致,
保罗

 范文:

Dear Paul,

    I'm quite pleased to receive your email and I'm writing for the purpose of introducing details about the upcoming innovative craft-making show.

   China is characterized by its time-honored history and advanced AI technology. Thus, we've invited renowned craftsmen to display the combination of AI with craft-making, such as paper cuttings, embroidery and Chinese knots. This show is scheduled to start at 9:00 on June 10 and last approximately 3 hours. I hope that you can help us apply for a site for demonstration, like the Center of Students' Activities.

    I, on behalf of all craftsmen involved, am deeply grateful to you and we are convinced that with your help, this show will be successful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 译文:

亲爱的保罗,

     我很高兴收到你的邮件,并且我写这封信是为了介绍即将举行的创新手工艺展示的详情。

     中国的突出特征在于其悠久的历史和先进的AI技术。因此,我们邀请了知名工匠来展示AI与传统手工艺相结合的作品,比如剪纸、刺绣和中国结等。此次展示定于6月10日上午9点开始,持续大约3个小时。我希望您能帮我们申请一个展示场所,例如学生活动中心。

     我代表所有参与的工匠们,对您深表感激,并且我们相信有您的协助,这次展示一定会取得成功。

此致,

李明

 提示:小作文没有落款,基本不影响整体得分,顶多扣1分。

大作文:耐用消费品保有量


Directions: Write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following chart. In your essay, you should

1)describe the chart briefly,

2)explain the intended meaning, and

3)give your comments.

Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)     

     

 范文:

This is a simple but meaningful table, which displays the average numbers of major durable consumer goods owned by each hundred residents at the end of the year from 2014 to 2023 in China. To be specific, the number of air conditioners increased most significantly, from 75.2 to 145.9. Meanwhile, the numbers of washing machines and refrigerators showed the similar trend, from 83.7 and 85.5 to 98.2 and 103.4 respectively.  

Such changes, apparently, can be associated with the economic boom and prosperity of China recently. Admittedly, compared with the past years, an increasing number of Chinese families enjoy a richer life and they possess extra income to purchase various household appliances, such as TV sets, air conditioners, washing machines and fridges. This phenomenon is particularly worth attention for the reason that it is people's diligence that enables them to create a better and happier life for themselves. A case in point is my family. All my family members work hard every day, which brings us wealth, inspires our passion for the promising future, and help us enjoy happiness.

As a youngster, I am convinced that materialistic wealth is merely a part of our happy life and society as a whole is supposed to foster a positive atmosphere to educate and encourage citizens to read more books for the purpose of acquiring the mental wealth.

这是一张简单却有意义的表格,它显示了中国2014至2023年每百户居民年末主要耐用消费品的平均数量。具体来说,空调的数量增长最为显著,从75.2台增加到了145.9台。同时,洗衣机和冰箱的数量也表现出类似的趋势,分别从83.7台和85.5台增加到了98.2台和103.4台。

显然,这些变化能让人联想到中国近年来经济的繁荣和蓬勃。不可否认,与过去相比,越来越多的中国家庭享受到了更富足的生活,他们拥有额外的收入来购买各种家用电器,如电视机、空调、洗衣机和冰箱。这种现象特别值得关注,因为正是人们的勤奋使得他们为自己创造更好、更幸福的生活。一个典型例子就是我家。我们家的所有成员每天都努力工作,这给我们带来了财富,激发了我们对美好未来的热情,并帮助我们享受幸福。

作为一名年轻人,我坚信物质财富只是我们幸福生活的一部分,整个社会应该应该积极氛围去教育和鼓励市民多读书以获得精神财富。

提示:直播时,有同学说,自己写作文时,由空调想到了环保或全球变暖类似的主题,这么写算不算跑题?

答案是:如果全文没有谈家电,只谈环保或全球变暖,那就完蛋了,只要提及家电并结合其他任何相关主题,不属于跑题。

还有人问:如果冰箱、空调和洗衣机等关键词都没写对,会扣很多分吗?

答案是:如果只是这三个家电名称不会写,其他部分都能写对,不影响整体得分,但我担心的是,如果你这个家电名称不会写,其他单词可能也会有写错或硬着头皮瞎写的可能性。


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