托福学术讨论写作迄今最难题!附满分思路+范文~

文摘   2024-10-26 19:00   北京  

今天小咪老师想要跟大家分享一道,我认为是去年托福考试改革后,考过的最难学术讨论写作题之一,这道题的核心是:

Should we extend the same level of politeness and respect to AI and machines as we do to humans? Please provide your reasoning and discuss the potential consequences of adopting such an approach.


托福学术写作原题


Dr. Achebe:

In recent years, there has been a significant integration of advanced machines and artificial intelligence (AI) into our daily lives and work environments. I would like you to reflect on the following question: Should we extend the same level of politeness and respect to Al and machines as we do to humans? Please provide your reasoning and discuss the potential consequences of adopting such an approach.


Andrew: 

Al and robots play an integral role in our lives, assisting us in various tasks and making our lives easier. By treating them with respect, we not only acknowledge their contributions but also reflect positively on our own character. It's a small gesture that upholds our humanity and sets a standard for ethical interaction with technology.


Claire:

I think we don't need to treat Al and robots with the same politeness as we do humans. They are tools designed to assist us, and it's important to maintain that distinction. We should set clear guidelines and boundaries for their use to ensure they serve us effectively without overstepping their roles.


与AI沟通时是否需要保持礼貌?这个题目虽然聊到社会发展、科技进步这些我们熟悉的话题,但是切入点很特殊,让很多考生看到题之后愣住了…怎么不是讨论AI的利弊呢?
怎么不是讨论人们应该如何看待 AI 呢?
这属于「也不是完全没话说,但确实难以下笔」的话题。

今天拿这篇文章为例跟大家分享我的思路和写法。希望能给你的备考带来启发。

思路分析


首先,这是个封闭式的话题,做选择即可。

理论上,我们的选择有以下三种:

1.认为面对 AI 应该保持礼貌

2.认为面对 AI 不需要保持礼貌

3.视情况而定


但说实话,我并不认为这是一个适合写「视情况而定」的话题,因为我很难立刻想到什么情况下应该礼貌,什么情况下不需要礼貌。

于是我粗略决定选择一边倒,即我的态度是——跟 AI 交流也需要遵循基本的礼仪。


接着,我就得想一想怎么完善和展开我的论点

我第一反应想到 AI 是学习模型,是通过与人的交互进行学习。交互的质量越高,AI 就能越强大,能给我们人类带来的帮助就更大。

所以尽管 AI 没有感情,你骂它它也不会难过,但我更在意的是我们展现善意的目的——礼貌高效的沟通是在帮助 AI 成长,最终获益者是我们人类自己。

然后,我需要举例子说一说这个论点,不然显得有些虚。

我作为 ChatGPT 的最早一批用户,在使用它的近两年时间内感受到了它的成长和变化,特别是在使用中文的交谈中,它从最提供初漏洞百出的答案到现在体面正确的反馈离不开科技的发展,也离不开无数中文用户与 ChatGPT 一次又一次的交流。

最后,我在想,我还能有别的层次吗?

越来越多的人生活中离不开 AI,每天都花大量时间使用 AI 工作、学习等。我想,当我们习惯了对 AI 不耐烦和不尊重,很有可能我们会把这种习惯带入与人的交流中,最终伤害的是我们的家人朋友,是我们自己。

所以,我的思路非常清晰了。

我的核心观点是:

我们应该尊重 AI,目的是让 AI更好地为人类服务。同时,让我们通过和 AI 交流练习与人为善,也能避免伤害生活中我们在意的人。


希望我的思路能对大家有所启发,如果考场上碰到了不至于无话可说。
另外,我还给大家码了对应以上这个思路的范文供大家参考~

(说明:为了方便阅读,我进行了分段处理。考试时大家写的时候不需要分段。)

范文-1


My attitude is that basic etiquette should be followed when interacting with AI. Even though AI has no emotions and won't get upset if you insult it, what I care more about is the purpose of showing goodwill.


AI is a learning model that learns through interactions with people. The higher the quality of the interaction, the more powerful the AI becomes, and consequently, the more it can help us humans. Therefore, polite and efficient communication helps AI grow, and ultimately, the beneficiaries are we humans.


As one of the earliest users of ChatGPT, I have felt its growth over the nearly two years of using it, especially in conversations in Chinese. Initially, it provided flawed answers, but now it gives decent and correct feedback. This improvement is due not only to technological advancements but also to countless Chinese users interacting with ChatGPT time and again.


Furthermore, more and more people are becoming dependent on AI in their daily lives, spending a lot of time using AI for work, study, and other purposes. If we get used to being impatient and disrespectful towards AI, like never say “please” or “sorry”,  we are likely to carry this habit into our interactions with people in real life, ultimately hurting our family and friends, and ourselves.


范文-2


再分享一篇难度更高的持骑墙观点的范文,供参考↓

The question of whether we should extend the same level of politeness and respect to AI and machines as we do to humans is complex. While AI lacks emotions and consciousness, treating these systems with politeness could have positive societal implications.


Firstly, consistently practicing politeness, even with machines, could reinforce respectful behavior in human interactions. It cultivates a habit of courtesy that can translate into more harmonious human relationships. Moreover, as AI becomes more integrated into daily life, anthropomorphizing these technologies might help people feel more comfortable and reduce frustration when interacting with them.


On the other hand, treating machines with human-level respect could blur the line between humans and AI, leading to potential ethical dilemmas. It might cause people to overestimate AI's capabilities or attribute undeserved moral considerations to machines. This could divert attention from important ethical issues, such as the treatment of AI developers and the societal impact of AI deployment.


In conclusion, while extending politeness to AI can promote a culture of respect, it is crucial to maintain clear distinctions between human beings and machines to avoid ethical pitfalls and ensure a balanced perspective on technology.


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