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Unit6高分写作点拨
Unit 6 Rain or Shine. (话题写作指导）
【话题分析】
本单元的话题为“天气”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关天气情况、人们正在进行的活动和人们感受的短文。在写作过程中，首先要能准确使用描述天气的形容词及句型，并要能正确使用现在进行时描述人们正在进行的活动。
常用句型：
How's the weather in...?
What's the weather like in...?
It's...
The weather in...is...
...am/is/are doing sth.
Now...are having a good time.
【写作实例】
“一轮皎洁月当空，佳节团圆欢笑多”。假如你是李华，Jane是你的笔友。今天是中秋节，请写一封信告诉Jane你如何度过中秋节，并根据以下提示完成本文。
【思路点拨】
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【教材典句】
1.Climbing is hard...(SB,1b)
2.I’m sunbathing at the moment!(SA,2a)
3....many people here are still in high spirits.(SB,1b)
4.Is the weather making Grandpa Sad ?(SA,1c)
【经典范文】
Dear Jane,
Today is our traditional Mid-Autumn Festival.Getting together with our family is reallyexciting! It's a cool autumn night. The moonis shining in the sky.We are eating a big dinner now. My grand-parents are looking at the moon. My parents aretalking with each other. My younger brotheris eating mooncakes at the moment. He is inhigh spirits!When it is Mid-Autumn Festival, everyoneis enjoying their wonderful time! The Mid-Autumn Festival makes everyone happy.【亮点点评】
①用动名词(短语)作主语概述中秋节的特点。
②用现在进行时结构 bedoing 和时间状语 at themoment描述中秋节活动。
③用 be in high spirits 描述“我”的弟弟的情绪状态。
④"make sb adj."描述中秋节给大家的感受。
【同步检测】
1.假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，不少于60词。
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Dear Li Tao,
【参考范文】
Dear Li Tao,
How is it going with you? I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It’s winter here now. It’s cold and it’s snowing really hard. What a beautiful white world it is! The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skiing and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. What’s the weather like in Shanghai? Are you studying hard or having fun?Please write back to me soon.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方及活动；
第二步，阐明天气情况，正在进行的活动及内心的感受；
第三步，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。
[亮点词汇]
① snow hard 下雪下得大
② be just right for 正适合……
③ really 确实
[高分句型]
What a beautiful white world it is! (感叹句)
2.假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。
(1)What are your family doing?(2)What do you think of rainy days?Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. ______________________________
【参考范文】
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. It’s raining outside, and all of my family are at home. My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living room. My brother Dale is making a model plane in his room. He likes making things very much. My mother is cooking in the kitchen for us. And I’m watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedroom.I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together.【总体分析】
① 题材：本文为材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；
② 时态：现在进行时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不要遗漏要点；可适当添加语句，使文章连贯。
【写作步骤】
第一步，描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情；
第二步，描述自己对下雨天的看法。
【亮点词汇】
① rain下雨
② all所有的
③ play chess下棋
④ very much非常
⑤ watch TV看电视
⑥ because因为
【高分句型】
① My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. (use sth. to do使用某物做某事)
② I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3.假设你是李华。上周Anna给你写了一封信。Anna在信中介绍了她的家乡并希望收到你的回信。请根据以下表格内容提示，给网友Anna写一封e-mail，向她介绍广州冬天的情况以及你和家人过春节的活动和感受，并邀请她来广州。
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(1) 字数：不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；Dear Anna,
I was happy to hear from you last week.Winter is coming. In winter, Guangzhou is a beautiful city. __________________【参考范文】
Dear Anna,
I was happy to hear from you last week.Winter is coming. In winter, Guangzhou is a beautiful city. It’s not cold here. It never snows here, but it rains sometimes. We climbed Baiyun Mountain, visited the flower market and had morning tea. During this festival, people in China get together and have a big meal. In many places people like to set off firecrackers and fireworks to celebrate it. And dumplings are the most traditional food during the festival. It is my favorite festival because I don’t have to go to school, and I can get some new clothes, eat a lot of delicious food, get some red envelopes, too. I’m very happy.Welcome to Guangzhou. I look forward to hearing from you.【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料介绍广州冬天的情况以及春节的活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍广州冬天的天气。
第二步，介绍春节的活动。
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① set off firecrackers 放鞭炮
② a lot of 许多
③ look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
[高分句型]
① In many places people like to set off firecrackers and fireworks to celebrate it（动词不定式作宾语）
② It is my favorite festival because I don’t have to go to school, and I can get some new clothes, eat a lot of delicious food, get some red envelopes, too（because引导原因状语从句）
4.请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
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(1)认真观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。(3)作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。__________________________________【参考范文】
Today is Sunday. It’s sunny. I am playing in the park with my friends. Look! Mary is playing the violin and Kate is singing songs. Peter is taking pictures of trees. Lily is riding her bike. Mike and Sarah are playing role-play. Mike is acting the doctor. Sarah is acting the patient. We are all happy.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，注意时态的正确使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍今天是星期日，天气很好；
第二步，具体描绘公园里每个人正在做些什么；
第三步，最后进行总结，今天很开心。
[亮点词汇]
①in the park在公园
②take pictures of拍……的照片
③ride one’s bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
Look! Mary is playing the violin and Kate is singing songs.（and并列句）
5.现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
Dear Jim,
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the kitchen. What am I doing? Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will you do on a rainy day?【详解】
(1)题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
(2)写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
【真题链接】
1.下面是公园一角人们的活动场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane 和人们的活动。
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(1) How’s the weather today? (2) What are people doing?(3) What does Jane look like?（3）词数不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）It is Sunday today. _______________________【参考范文】
It is Sunday today. It’s sunny and warm. There are many people in the park. Look, some boys are playing basketball. Some are playing soccer. They are playing happily. There is a man and two women standing under the tree. They are watching boys playing basketball. Where is my friend Jane? Can you find her? She has big eyes and short curly hair. Oh, I see her. She is eating an apple and she is talking with a boy right now. Next to Jane, a girl is reading a book. How happy they are!【详解】
(1)题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane 和人们的活动。
(2)写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先从今天的天气入手；其次描写人们在公园里的活动；接着描述简的外貌和活动。保证行文连贯，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
2.假如你是来自澳大利亚的Alice，暑假期间你正在哈尔滨旅游，请向你的妈妈介绍一下你在哈尔滨的情况，并向她介绍你的新朋友。
d.一个女孩正在拍江边的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。Dear Mom,
How are you? I am in Harbin now. _________________________Yours,
Alice
【参考范文】
Dear Mom,
How are you? I am in Harbin now. I will introduce you to my life here. Now Harbin is in summer. The weather is fine today, but windy. I feel very comfortable. I am playing football in the park. I see a girl taking pictures. Some boys are swimming in the river. I make a new friend here. Her name is Wang Ying. Wang Ying looks very beautiful. She is wearing a yellow dress. She likes to sing.I am fine here, you do not need to worry. Yours,
Alice
【详解】
(1)题干解读：本文主要是根据题干提示向妈妈介绍自己在哈尔滨的旅游情况以及自己交到的新朋友，可适当增加细节。
(2)写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段进行总述；第二段描述天气、今天的活动以及介绍自己的朋友；第三段告诉妈妈自己很好，不用担心。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
3.假设你正在和你爸爸妈妈，妹妹在三亚度假，你在朋友圈晒的旅行照片被你的美国朋友Jim看到。他对你去的地方很感兴趣，发微信让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包括以下内容：
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【参考范文】
Hello, Jim! I am on summer vacation in Sanya with my parents. We are having a great time here. Let me tell you something about Sanya. The weather here is sunny and windy. It’s comfortable to travel here. Now we are taking a walk and we can go swimming in the afternoon. Sometimes I draw pictures on the beach. And my mother sings songs with other tourists. There are many people on the beach. We can also play games together. I like Sanya. It’s really beautiful and relaxing. I think my summer vacation is wonderful.【详解】
(1)题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己暑假在三亚旅游的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
(2)写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4.在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
_____________________________【参考范文】
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
5.假如你是李华，你和你的美国朋友Helen正在网上聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。
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Hi, Helen, good evening. Now, ________________【参考范文】
Hi, Helen, good evening. Now, my grandfather isn’t at home. He is taking a walk in the park. My grandmother likes flowers very much, and she is watering the flowers in the living room. My father is in the living room, too. He is reading a newspaper. My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My sister is doing her homework in our bedroom. She always studies hard.【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第二步，具体介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at home在家
②very much非常
③read a newspaper读报纸
④study hard努力学习
[高分句型]
①He is taking a walk in the park. (运用现在进行时)
②My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. (介词短语作地点状语)
6.请根据表格中的信息，进行场景描述，字数不少于50，可适当扩展。
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【参考范文】
Today is Sunday. It is sunny and a bit hot. In the afternoon, Wang Hua’s family go to the park near his house to play.His father and his elder brother are playing chess under the tree. His father plays chess very well. His father often teaches his elder brother how to play chess. Wang Hua and his little brother are playing football. This is Wang Hua’s favorite sport. What is his mother doing? Oh, his mother is taking photos. She likes taking photos and she always takes some beautiful photos.They are all very happy. They all have a great time.【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍周日的天气情况并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍王华一家人在公园的活动情况；
第三步，最后总结他们玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① play chess下棋
② take photos拍照
③ have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①What is his mother doing? （特殊疑问句）
②She likes taking photos and she always takes some beautiful photos. （and连接的并列句）
7.看图说话。请你仔细观察上面的图画，之后以 “A Happy Sunday” 为题写一篇英语短文，向大家简要介绍一下图片中的内容，包括天气情况、地点、人们正在进行的各种活动。
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遛狗：walk the dog；野餐：have a picnic；照相：take photos；放无人机：fly a drone；长凳：bench；躺：lie；草地：grass；在湖边：by the lake(1)对图片中的活动可以有选择地加以描述，不必面面俱到。A Happy Sunday
【参考范文】
A Happy Sunday
It’s Sunday today, and it’s also sunny. There are many people in the park. What are they doing? A man is running, and two women are walking their dogs. A man and a woman are having a picnic (with their dog) by the lake. Two men are playing the guitar, and a woman is singing. A small boy is flying a kite. A boy and a girl are riding bikes. An old man is reading a newspaper on the bench. A man and a woman are lying on the grass. Oh, they are flying a drone. There is also a man taking photos! They are all very happy.【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：考生注意根据图片内容描写，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述图片内容；
第二步，具体介绍图片上人物的行为；
第三步，书写结语，总结图片上人物表现出的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①by the lake湖边
②on the beach在沙滩上
③lie on the grass躺在草地上
④take photos照相
[高分句型]
①There are many people in the park. (运用there be句型)
②Two men are playing the guitar, and a woman is singing. (运用现在进行时)
