雅思8分名师小课堂 | 12.21雅思大作文解析及高分范文

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要想在雅思考试中取得理想成绩,就必须在听说读写四个部分都表现出最佳水平。其中,雅思写作和口语经常被考生认为是考试中最具挑战性的部分,尤其是雅思写作,对于绝大多数中国学生来说都是不小的挑战,想要拿高分更难!JULIARD美途国际中心推出【雅思8分名师小课堂】,用高效方法教你学会写雅思作文!



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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?


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12月21日的雅思大作文考到了工作效率与生活方式关系的大作文,实际上Working Efficiency是最近两年上升势头迅猛的热门考点,且考查类型非常多变。


创作此类题目的主要原则平衡好工作业绩和生活节奏(balance work performance and pace of life)之间的关系;例如人们在工作方面参考的指标是更快更好地履行自己的任务,提升办事效率,这也就回答了题目中的第一个小问题——为什么人们会要求自己和他人在第一时间把手头工作做完。但同时大家感同身受的是,快餐式的工作模式(instant work patterns)势必造成质量的不稳定或下滑,后期可能还会反复、多次地去弥补它。


正如题干所举的information的例子,当代人走马观花式地浏览新闻会造成知识获取的碎片化、片面化,长久下去会受到偏见报道的误导(misled by biased reportage);因此文章后半段在评价此类现象的时候可以强调,现代人在追求高效率的同时要做好心理预设(mind preparation),清楚“没有最好只有更好”,防止形成激进式处理问题的心态;与此同时劝诫事情的其他参与者沉着冷静(urge other participants to be level-headed),保证工作成果、准确性以及成功率。


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In contemporary society, it seems that everyone with an ambition, from freelancer to foreman at giant corporations, demands matters to be solved instantly; So much so that many people neglect the detrimental impacts of this phenomenon. As a matter of fact,. a couple of worrisome effects would ensue when people turn to a summary approach for handling problems.


To begin with, the core of this trend lies in the nature of this industrialized society we live in. Every department is pigeonholed to fulfill its unique tasks, and every personnel is responsible for his duties to be completed sooner rather than later. In a given period of time, the staff who can finish the greatest share of assignment would be considered as the most competent by the superior. Even the employee himself is eager to trouble-shoot all the difficulties expediently so that he wouldn’t need to work overtime. Gradually the index of finishing all sorts of work with the least time is what everyone in a work environment pines for. What’s more, after people return home from work, their mindset might become even more anxious, as they are hell-bent on reviving their depleted body. That’s why they have no intention of waiting a second for their pizza delivery to arrive, viewing commercials before live streaming services on their screen, etc. People hold this pristine thought that as long as they can complete their daily chores fast enough, everything would start afresh the next morning.


The more pertinent question is, what should we make of this instantaneous style? In my opinion, a non-partial perspective is the right approach for assessment. On one hand, everyone has his own potentials to be exploited, and sometimes an extra push from outside can activate our hidden aptitude, making us excel in whatever endeavors we are embarking on. That sensation of adrenaline rush is what drives innovation and social reforms in many nations throughout our history. On the other hand, everything worthy of doing in life takes time and patience. Imagine someone working on a project, if he is constantly rushed to the deadline, chances are high that he will miss key elements and whatever conclusion he reaches would be futile in the end. Therefore, for our own skill improvement and others’ work proficiency, we ought to allow a little margin of error and wait until every component about a task comes in handy.


In sum, modern era dictates that people always bring out their top-notch game level. But quantitative parameters must come with thoughtful quality inspection. Patience is the ingredient that never goes out of style when we brew a pot of fine wine.




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