英语作文私藏秘诀🤫考前也能快速提分,从此“从句”随便用!

文摘   2024-10-30 17:02   上海  

中 考

倒计时

228 Day

寒 假

倒计时

78 Day

中考按照往年的时间进行大致推算,确切时间公布后会随时修改。


一眨眼,期中考试已经到来

一模考试也进入了倒计时

那在这段时间里,

我们的英语还能提升吗?

Of course!

今天,

我们先来get最需要花时间提升的part

英语作文

这可是私藏秘诀哦~




Q:英语写作主要的注意重点有哪些?

1. 有开头,细节,结尾,有血有肉,符合年龄特征;

2. 平时注重通过brainstorm,积累素材,感悟,拓宽思路;

3. 流畅表达,与年龄相符的表达;

4. 主题鲜明,不说废话;

5. 学会列提纲。


Q:作文中的常见问题有哪些?

1. 动词错误多:时态,语态误用,词性错误,实意动词,系动词,瞬间动词,延续动词,及物,不及物动词,非谓语动词。

2. 母语干扰强:缺主语,缺谓语,缺连词,误用宾语,表语,介词,错误修饰等。



Q:文章的结构分(最后4分)

的评分标准是什么?

4分:上下文流畅,逻辑关系清晰,恰当运用关联词,指代清晰,话题有新意,表达有思想性,能够基于主题展开拓展或提升,用语丰富地道,句型句式多样,并且运用恰当。

3分:上下文比较通顺,适当运用一些关联词,话题有一定的独到之处,能够将事件建立联系,用语规范,句型句式富于变化。

2分:行文连续不跳跃,少见废话,句型句式有变化,无或少见中文式表达。

0分:通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般不给组织结构分。

常见问题:建立联系不够,事件和说理之间的关联度不够流畅,缺关联词,句式变化少




作文提分技巧

1. 写长句。如:宾从(that, if, what, wh...) 状从(when, where, so that, if, though...)定从(which, who, that)

eg:

(1) He is kind and helpful. I know it.

    I know that he is kind and helpful.

(2) I’m a girl. And I’m not good at sports.

     I’m a girl who is not good at sports.

(3) We got to the cinema. The film had already begun.

   When we got to the cinema, the film had already begun.

(4) Mom took an umbrella to school for me. She didn't feel well.

  Mom took an umbrella to school for me though she didn’t feel well.

(5) He still wrote a lot of songs and they were even more famous.

    He still wrote a lot of songs which were even more famous.

2. 写关联词:

  • Adding ideas: as well as, besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore

  • Showing effect: so, therefore, thus, as a result, in this way, for these reasons

  • Emphasizing: in fact, certainly, surely, no doubt, truly, obviously, indeed

  • Summarizing: in brief, in a word, in short, in conclusion, to sum up, generally speaking, in summary

  • 表示转折: but, however, while, otherwise, on the other hand, instead of

  • 表示举例: for example, for instance, such as..., take...for example

  • 表示原因: because of, since, now that, thanks to, due to, as

  • 表示目的: so that, ­­so as to…, in order to…, for this purpose, for this reason



Q:中考作文题材倾向于叙事

还是议论呢?

夹叙夹议是最讨巧的做法——通过写一件具体的事情(过去时),再阐述从中懂得取得的进步或某种技能的获得。

例如烧饭,游泳,骑自行车,英语演讲,体育锻炼等良好习惯的养成:健康饮食学习方法的掌握:比较弱的学科取得进步。

(1) Used to do/be…

(2) Try my best to do…

(3) Make progress in (doing)…



Q:有没有可以训练的通用主题?

(1) as long as I try hard...

(2) I learnt to be_____ from a failure.

(hardworking/careful/dependent/responsible/confident/brave/honest...)

(3) l am proud of myself: 

as we grow up, we all face different kinds of difficulties, however, I’m glad to say, I’ m a person who never give up.

(4) What I have learnt from mistakes:

careless: make foolish mistakes in the exam/ get low marks/ lose my wallet

lazy: get up late/ dislike doing sports/ not finish homework on time

dishonest: tell lies/ hide the truth/ cheat in the exam





   本周隔空喊话bot


有没有某个瞬间,

你突然觉得自己被“卡”住了?

或许是一道练习题,

或许是一本不知是否该扔掉的书,

又或许是升学择校的选择……

这些事的背后,

都映射了我们目前的人生状态

对此,

有走出来的办法吗?

或是与我们分享你的烦恼

也许在未来,

你也能说上一句:轻舟已过万重山。

💗  小编先答:

被“卡”住简直再正常不过了,做不出的数学压轴题,和同学莫名其妙的误会,对于选择高中的迷茫……走出来的办法就是一往无前吧!不要想太多有的没的,反正车到山前必有路(超乐观心态)~

⭐️ 大家点击我被「卡」住的瞬间或扫码提问箱或在评论区留言~

责编:张玮

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