我试着写了一下今年的小作文。每篇范文的分数应该是9分。里面90%的内容，都是来自于我们的功能句，也就是我们《写作背诵手册》里面的内容。
整理出来，其实目的就是，我一直给大家说的。写作呢，就写自己会的，然后和题目考的，我们寻找它们之间的关系。
有了框架，思考就轻松了。虽然可能被束缚了，但是也稳了，至少有了一个解决方案。绝大多数，有且仅有一个解决方案，其实是最好的情况。
周兆鑫
2025E1 回信
Read the following email from your classmate Paul and write him a reply.
Dear Li Ming,
I was really excited to hear that you'd invite some young craftsmen to demonstrate their innovative craft-making on campus. May I know more about what they'll show? Also, I'd like to help you with your preparation work. Please let me know what I can do for you.
Yours,
Paul
小作文八句作文法
写作目的段： | |
1介绍 | This is Li Ming. |
2目的 | I am writing this letter with my full heart for the purpose of expressing my sincere gratitude for your kind offer to assist with upcoming craft demonstration and inviting you to participate.
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完成提纲段： | |
3背景 | It is well known that craft-making and innovation matter profoundly for preserving culture and history. |
4衔接 | Thus, with regard to the upcoming demonstration, the key details are as follows. |
5提纲一 | At the very beginning, it is going to be held this Friday, from 2pm to 5pm, at our school gym. |
6提纲二 | What's more, all the people related, including volunteers and artisans, will assist in many various related things, in order to make it successful. |
7提纲三 | Last but not least, I have done some research and preparation regarding various things you may be interested in, including detailed arrangements/schedule, essential matters to know about the artists and their crafts, and necessary information about the demonstration. All these things are listed in the attachment. |
感谢结尾段： | |
8感谢 | 回复 | Thanks a lot for your interest and support to this event. I am looking forward to your coming and working with you.
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Dear Paul,
This is Li Ming. I am writing this letter with my full heart for the purpose of expressing my sincere gratitude for your kind offer to assist with upcoming craft demonstration and inviting you to participate.
It is well known that craft-making and innovation matter profoundly for preserving culture and history. Thus, with regard to the upcoming demonstration, the key details are as follows. At the very beginning, it is going to be held this Friday, from 2pm to 5pm, at our school gym. What's more, all the people related, including volunteers and artisans, will assist in many various related things, in order to make it successful. Last but not least, I have done some research and preparation regarding various things you may be interested in, including detailed arrangements/schedule, essential matters to know about the artists and their crafts, and necessary information about the demonstration. All these things are listed in the attachment.
Thanks a lot for your interest and support to this event. I am looking forward to your coming and working with you.
Li Ming
亲爱的保罗：
我是李明。我怀着满腔热情写下这封信，对您提出协助即将举行的手工艺展示活动并邀请您参加表示诚挚的谢意。
众所周知，手工艺制作和创新对于传承文化和历史意义深远。因此，关于即将举行的展示活动，主要细节如下。首先，活动将于本周五下午 2 点至 5 点在我校体育馆举行。此外，所有相关人员，包括志愿者和工匠，都将协助做好各种相关事宜，以确保活动圆满成功。最后但并非最不重要的一点是，我已经就你们可能感兴趣的各种事项做了一些研究和准备，包括详细的安排/日程表、了解艺术家及其工艺的基本事项以及有关演示的必要信息。所有这些都列在附件中。
非常感谢您对此次活动的关注和支持。期待您的光临和合作。
李明
2025E2
Suppose you are planning a short play based on a classic Chinese novel, write your friend John an email to
1) introduce the play, and
2) invite him to take part in it
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
小作文八句作文法
写作目的段： | |
1介绍 | This is Li Ming. |
2目的 | I am writing this letter with my full heart for the purpose of formally introducing our upcoming play and inviting you to participate. |
完成提纲段： | |
3背景 | As we both know, you love plays very much. I believe, this play, based on the classic novel “Journey to the West”, will align with your taste very well. Journey to the West 《西游记》 Dream of the Red Chamber 《红楼梦》 Romance of the Three Kingdoms 《三国演义》 Water Margin 《水浒传》 |
4衔接 | The necessary details about the play are as follows. |
5提纲一 | At the very beginning, the play is going to be performed next Friday, at our school gym, from 2pm to 5pm.
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6提纲二 | What's more, it tells us a touching story, which makes me know what really matters, before it is too late. Based on my experience, mundane things are often not your choice, so you must not miss it.
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7提纲三 | Last but not least, I have done some research and preparation regarding various things related to the play, including detailed arrangements, essential matters to know, and necessary information about the story. All these things are listed in the attachment. |
感谢结尾段： | |
8感谢 | 回复 | Thank you for your attention to this letter. I am looking forward to your coming. If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me. |
Dear Paul,
This is Li Ming. I am writing this letter with my full heart for the purpose of formally introducing our upcoming play and inviting you to participate.
As we both know, you love plays very much. I believe, this play, based on the classic novel “Journey to the West”, will align with your taste very well. The necessary details about the play are as follows. At the very beginning, the play is going to be performed next Friday, at our school gym, from 2pm to 5pm. What's more, it tells us a touching story, which makes me know what really matters, before it is too late. Based on my experience, mundane things are often not your choice, so you must not miss it. Last but not least, I have done some research and preparation regarding various things related to the play, including detailed arrangements, essential matters to know, and necessary information about the story. All these things are listed in the attachment.
Thank you for your attention to this letter. I am looking forward to your coming. If you have any further questions, please feel free to reach out me.
Li Ming
亲爱的保罗：
我是李明。我写这封信的目的是正式介绍我们即将上演的话剧，并邀请您参加。
我们都知道，你非常喜欢话剧。我相信，这部根据经典小说《西游记》改编的话剧会非常符合您的口味。该剧的必要细节如下。首先，该剧将于下周五下午 2 点至 5 点在我校体育馆上演。此外，该剧还讲述了一个感人的故事，让我在为时已晚之前明白了什么才是真正重要的。根据我的经验，平凡的事情往往不是你的选择，所以你一定不要错过。最后，我也做了一些研究和准备，包括剧中的细节安排、必知事项和必要的故事信息。所有这些都列在附件中。
感谢您对这封信的关注。期待您的到来。如果您还有其他问题，请随时联系我。
李明
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