【雅思写作】Task 1

文摘   2024-11-26 15:08   英国  

雅思9分作文

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.


The diagram below illustrates the percentage of those students who apply to Manchester University over 80-year periods.

下图显示了80年来申请曼彻斯特大学的学生的百分比。


Overall, it is clear from the table that the total sum of student enrolments  significantly increased over 80 years,while in contrast the proportion of female, and male overseas and surrounding populations  changed throughout the reporting period. 

总的来说,从表中可以清楚地看出,80年来学生入学总数显著增加,而相比之下,海外和周边人口中女性和男性的比例在整个报告期内都发生了变化。


Observing the details, it is remarkable that junior applicants dramatically rose from 327 in 1937 to 6254 in 2017. Similarly, the fraction of overseas learners massively climbed from 6% at the beginning and remained at 32% in 2017. Comparably, the fractions of female and male students are shifted,  1937 Masculine populations were greater than feminine approximately 10% whereas in 2017 the feminine reached its peak at 55% followed by masculine around 45%. 

观察细节,值得注意的是,初级的申请人从1937年的327人大幅增加到2017年的6254人。同样,海外学习者的比例从一开始的6%大幅攀升,到2017年保持在32%。相比之下,男女学生的比例发生了变化,1937年男性人口比女性人口多约10%,而2017年女性人口达到顶峰,为55%,其次是男性,约为45%。


It is noticeable that at the beginning nearly 55% of all applicants were those individuals who lived within 40 miles of Manchester compared to the 20th century, there were only 1-2% that lived near the College.

值得注意的是,一开始,近55%的申请人住在离曼彻斯特40英里以内的地方,而20世纪,只有1-2%的申请人住在学院附近。


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