2025读后续写:情感描写高分句式

教育   2024-12-31 20:35   河北  

情感一直是我们独有的

能够外露表达的东西

好的情感描写

能让我们从文字就看出一个人的喜怒哀乐

所以

今天我们就来学

读后续写之

情感描写!

01
高分秘诀

1.发出者升级(用情绪名词代替)

2.情绪程度修饰词升级(更形象具体的形容词副词)

3.句式升级(非谓语、独立主格结构)

02
高分笔记

🚩高级词块

to one’s excitement/thrill  令某人激动的是

with/in excitement  激动地

flush with excitement  激动得满脸通红

contain one’s excitement  抑制内心的激动

can’t conceal one’s excitement  难掩激动

a ripple/surge of excitement  一阵兴奋

a scream of thrill/excitement  激动的尖叫声


🚩万能句式

句式一:

adj.1 and adj.2, 主句,doing… / 独立主格结构


【举个例子】“他站起身来领奖。”

He stood up to accept the prize.

句式升级:Surprised and delighted, he stood up to accept the prize, feeling proud. 

又意外又开心,他站起身来去领奖,感到非常自豪。


句式二:

量词+表情感状态的名词+动词 + sb.


常用量词:a burst / wave / flood / surge / sense of…

常用动词:take hold of/seize/grasp 抓住、握住,crawl/creep爬,swallow吞噬,well up涌出,surge 涌动,sweep over 冲;卷,overwhelm充溢,压倒


【举个例子】“她伤心不已。”

She felt extremely sad.

句式升级:She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.

她突然感到一阵悲伤,禁不住痛哭起来。


句式三:

(doing…), so+adj./adv.+部分倒装 +that…, (doing…)


【举个例子】“Jane忍不住哭了。”

Jane couldn’t stop crying.

句式升级:Recalling the scene, so regretful was Jane that she couldn’t stop crying, tears sparking out her eyes. 

回想起那一幕,简非常后悔,忍不住哭了起来,泪水夺眶而出。

03
高分干货

1.喜悦之情

Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着微笑。
(Unforgettable were her eyes→主语her eyes,这里①为了强调她像钻石一样的眼睛多么令人难忘,②结构的紧凑:定语从句、引导词与先行词在结构上的紧凑。
② She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
③She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
④Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
(sparkle v.闪闪发光,闪耀→The jewels on her fingers sparkled.她手指上戴的首饰闪闪发光。)
⑤ She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
(be overflowing with a feeling 洋溢着(情感))
⑥ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
⑦There is always a smile of contentment on her face. 她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
⑧ Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction. 看到任务完成了,他们感到很满意。

2.愤怒之情
① He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。
(sb fume over sth/sb. sb因为……生气)
② His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。
(sb be boiling with anger 怒火中烧)
③He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
④ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑤ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑥ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。

3.悲伤烦恼之情
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③ Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息,他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
④ A frown now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑤They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里,带着一脸忧郁。 
⑥ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
⑦They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。

4.恐惧之情
①Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
②Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/ 恐惧淹没了他。
(well→v. 涌出,冒出同well up)
④She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。

5. 感动之情
①  Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们……
②  Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
(独立主格结构)
③  With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她脸上留下来,她……
④The old woman was moved with tears flowing down the cheek. 老妇人感动到泪流满面。

6.紧张之情
① I nervously waited for my grades, with my heart in my mouth. 我紧张地等待着我的成绩, 心提到了嗓子眼。
② I could feel my heart beating wildly. 我能感觉到我的心在狂跳。
③ His heart almost leaped into his mouth. 他的心几乎要跳出来了。
 My stomach was full of butterflies and my hands were sweaty. 我心里直打鼓,手心直冒汗。

1. 强调坚持和努力的升华/克服困难

I.关键词:perseverance 努力

1.Perseverance is permanent enjoy.拥有恒心才能一直坚持。

2.Perseverance and patience ,although painful, is the sweetest fruit.

坚持和耐心或许非常困难,但是在你收获成功以后将会知道,那是最甜的果实。

3.People with perseverance can squeeze water from the rock.

拥有恒心的人能够如滴水穿石一般坚持。

4.Victory belongs to the most persevering.胜利属于坚持到底的人。

5.As long as we hold on with a strong perseverance, we will surely live our life beyond our limits.只要我们坚持到底,我们就能够不断挑战生命的极限。

6.Faith and perseverance can remove the thorns on the road.

信念和坚持是移开思想道路上巨石的关键。

II.走出舒适区

1.Great things happened when you step out of your comfort zone and you should be surprised on how many chance exist if you take pains to try.

当你踏出你的舒适区的时候,你会发现原来只要努力,就有这么多机会在前方等着你。

2.We are bound to overcome all the obstacles with indomitable willpower.只要有不可战胜的信念,我们就能做成任何事情。

3.Miracles can be made made only by sweating.奇迹来源于一点一滴汗水的积累。

4.One who can endure the pain temporarily will get a permanent delight.

能忍受暂时的痛苦的人可以享受那些永久的高级快乐。

5.The achievement of any cause has to go through trails and errors which is where the significance of process lies.成功来源于不断地试错。

III.困难后的启示

1.A fall into pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。

2.He who does not advance falls backward.逆水行舟,不进则退。

3.Life is not all rose.生活不是一路玫瑰盛开的。

4.Little steps add up to big dreams.不积跬步无以至千里。

2. 关于人生态度类升华

I.自尊和自我欣赏

1.Self-appreciation gets you to be positive to move you towards success.自我欣赏让你积极的走向成功的道路。

2.Nothing profits more than self-esteem.没有什么东西比自尊自爱更重要了。

3.We should go out of our way to boost the self-esteem of our personnel.我们应该竭尽全力提高自己的自尊心。

3.Whether you regard yourself as a towering tree or a blade of grass,or whether you think you are a high mountain or small stone,you represent a state of nature that has its own reason of existence.If you truly admire yourself,you will be courageous.无论你认为,自己是一棵参天大树,亦或是一片草叶,无论你自己认为你是一座高山还是一块小石头,你都代表了一种特殊的存在,你都有自己存在的理由。如果你真的相信自己并且热爱自己,你就是勇敢无畏的。

4.Self-confidence and self-reliance are the mainstays of a strong character.自信和自强是强大自我的支柱。

II.生活信念类

1.Belief then,is a great guide of human life.信念是人生的指明灯。

2.People who have faith are invincible/are likely to withstand any form.拥有强大信念的人可以承受任何困难。

3.Nothing is impossible to a will heart.对于一个愿意努力的自我来说,没有什么不可能。

4.Don’t throw in the towel, because you still have a dream.不要放弃,因为你还有梦想。

5.Life is challenging,meet it.Life is various,make it.

III.学会以...的态度去生活

慢节奏/享受生活/热爱生活

1.Happiness doesn’t means perfection, but a heart to appreciate the beauty of surroundings, which may give you mental satisfaction.生活并不是我们把一件事做得完美我们就会变得开心了,而是时时刻刻欣赏沿途中的美景,那些才是真正给予我们满足的东西。

2.The truth of happiness is holding our dream tightly but never failing to enjoy the fascinating scenery around us.快乐的秘诀是时时刻刻坚持我们的梦想的同时不忘欣赏沿途的美景。

3.Life is not a race ,but a journey to be enjoyed slowly.生活不是一场比赛,是一个慢慢享受和欣赏的旅途。

4.Don’t throw life so fast that you forget not only where you been, but also where you are doing.不要如此快节奏的去过你的生活,那样你可能不仅会忘记自己到达了哪里,还有可能会忘记自己为什么而活。

5.Thanks to ... I got to push my boundaries and improve my capabilities ,which shaped the “talented” me today.感谢...我得以超越我自己的极限,去创造今天独特的我。

6.It’s important to be grateful for the things we have in our live and never cry for what we don’t have.一个很重要的事情是,去感激我们生活中所拥有的,而不是去难过那些我们所没有的东西。

7.When we let those moments slip by without embracing them in true gratitude,we’re missing out on how blessed we are.当我们失去拥抱那些瞬间的机会,我们同时也忘记了我们是在被生活祝福着的。

8.If you choose only to complain and escape from a misfortune,it will always follow where you go.如果你选择逃避和抱怨你所遇到的苦难,那么这些苦难会一直跟随在你的生活中成为你的阴影。

9.But if you decide to be strong,it will turn out to be fortune on which new hope will arise.但是如果你选择去变得强大的话,你会非常感激你身边存在的那些可能性。

10.I sent the violin to the one in need and I hope this violin will make another person’s dream shine brightly. 我最终把我的小提琴给了那个需要的孩子,期望他能点亮另一个孩子的梦想。

4. 艺术起源于生活,创造力走出新天地

1.Art originates from life.艺术起源于生活。

2.We would rather have a mind opened by wonder than one closed by custom.我宁愿拥有一个充满想象力的脑袋,而不是被习以为常的思考习惯困扰住的我自己。

3.We must remember that the cocoon silk worm will not see the world outside the cocoon shell.我们必须知道,茧里的蚕宝宝不会看到茧壳以外的世界。

4.Constantly changing and innovating will be full of youth vigor.Otherwise ,it may become rigid.持续的创新会使你充满活力,否则你的能力将会变得僵化。

5.You can’t make an omelette without breaking eggs.不打破鸡蛋就不成做煎蛋。

4. 助人为乐,有关他人的Kindness

1.The simple act of kindness really makes a person’s day.

简单的善举可以使一个人的一天变得独特。

2.Only if we can understand can we care; Only if we care can we help;Only if we help shall all the life be hopeful.

3.Love can conquer anythings and work miracles.爱是可以在人间创造奇迹的。

4.You can never ignore the power of love.It’s a fire once lit,may burn forever.

你从来都无法忽视爱的力量。爱就像一团火焰,一旦点燃,将永远的燃烧下去。

5.Additionally,no one should ignore the power of kindness.此外,真诚也是。

尊重他人

1.Honesty has no class.Respect everyone regardless of their financial and social status.真诚没有阶级,无论其经济和社会地位如何,尊重每一个人。

2.We can’t judge people by their appearance.我们不可以根据相貌来评判一个人的好坏。


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