2024年英语新课标卷读后续写原题呈现

读后续写关键词：人与社会,人与陌生人,如约支付出租车司机车费,诚实守信,助人为乐

I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettableevening in September. I had planned to fly Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departureof the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.

That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.

Finally, with just two minutesto spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it, "he said.

Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.

At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry."

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I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.

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Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.

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试题分析：这是一篇记叙文。文章主题属人与社会之人际交往，描述了作者在九月一个寒冷的晚上，计划从维也纳飞往布拉格，但因风暴导致航班延误。在机场匆忙寻找出租车，遇到了Gunter。Gunter在朋友的建议下帮助解决了问题，最终成功将作者送到了巴士站。作者因没有现金且取款机出现故障无法支付Gunter的车费……。文章体现了真善美，体现信任和诚信的重要性，符合新时代社会主义价值观，适合高中生写作。

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His face fell with disappointment as he heard the words "Machine malfunction." Embarrassed and helpless, I froze there with my empty wallet and unusable bankcard, a deep sense of anxiety filling my heart. Gunter, however, waved my apologies aside with a generous smile, reachedinto his jacket pocket and handed me a stack of money. "Take this, though it’s not much. It should cover your bus fare, but return it when you're back in Vienna", he said steadily and reassuringly. Surprised, I hesitated for a while but accepted it gratefully, overwhelmed by his trust and generosity.I promised to contact him soon and we exchanged phone numbers. With a final push, Gunter sent me onto the bus at the last minute, and my newfound friends disappeared into the darkness of the night.

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Heseemed genuinely happy and agreed to meet at the same taxi rank half an hour later where we had first encountered. As I approached the stand, Isaw Gunter's familiar face peering out of the window of his taxi. I waved and he gestured me to get in, the wrinkles around his eyes seemingly deeper when smiling. I thanked him profusely for his timely assistance and handed him an envelope containing the money I had promised to pay him, along with a souvenir from Prague. “ Thanks for the delicate gift and I am proud for of your honesty and thoughtfulness!”He smiled and accepted it, but it was clear that the joy he derived from helping me was far outweighed than the value of the money. I also knew that no matter where I lived, Gunter's kindness and trust would be a beacon of hope and humanity on my journey, and I decided to pass it on.

01故事梗概

九月的一个难忘晚上，我因风暴导致航班延误一个半小时，匆忙下机赶乘去布拉格的末班车。在机场我跳上第一辆出租车，遇到了司机冈特。由于他没听过我要去的汽车站，他打电话询问朋友后送我到达目的地，到达时我发现没钱支付车费，而出租车上的刷卡机也无法使用，冈特指给我一台提款机，但机器却坏了。

02 文章分析

主要人物：

“我”：一个需要赶最后一班车去布拉格参加会议的人。

Gunter：一个友好的出租车司机，帮助“我”赶上最后一班车。

视角：第一人称视角

时间：九月的一个寒冷、潮湿且令人难忘的夜晚——四天后

空间：从维也纳机场到维也纳的长途汽车站，再到布拉格。

情节线：

1.“我”在一个寒冷、潮湿的夜晚到达维也纳，计划赶最后一班车去布拉格。

2.由于航班延误，“我”必须赶时间，匆忙跳进出租车遇见了Gunter。

3. Gunter帮忙打电话确认车站位置，并迅速开车赶到了车站。

4.在车站前，“我”发现没有现金支付车费，尝试用银行卡但失败。

5.“我”跑向ATM机却发现机器故障，陷入无奈。

语言分析：

1.使用了大量的描述性语言，如“a cold, wet and unforgettable evening”、“made a mad run for”等，营造了紧张和紧迫的氛围，也用了一些小词，如fish out, thin out等。

2.直接引语，即对话。因此，我们后文也可以使用一些对话描写。

主题：

后文有as promised，说明了诚实守信主题；同时，从第二段段首句得知，Gunter前面应该没让我付钱就走了，而是两人进行了约定，种种行为也体现了表现了陌生人之间的善意。

03思路引导

Para l I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.

Para 2 I called Gunter as promised. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna.

衔接他建议我先赶公交车，免了车费.我告诉 Gunter取款机坏了,他如何反应?衔接他感到惊喜，并同意在机场见面.我打电话给Gunter时，他如何反应?

过渡我感到非常感激和宽慰。我对Gunter的反应有何感受?过渡在机场我如何感谢Gunter?我给了他现金作为感谢，但他拒绝了.衔接我承诺回维也纳后还钱。我如何回应Gunter的善意?结尾意。 Gunter 的回应带给我什么启示?我感悟到善良的力量，并决定传递这份善良。

04情节构建

Para1 news. I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad

Para2 I called Gunter as promised. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna,

第一段：我跑向他告诉他坏消息

1.他听到提款机坏了的消息的反应：面部动作(脸一紧，对应前文笑容) + 询问我的想法

2. (心情紧急) 我说自己之后要回来 + 借公交车费 (坚定的眼神)；承诺之后把出租车费和借的钱连本带利还了 + 请他相信我

3.他犹豫了一会 + 从口袋掏出一些钱 + 让我留下电话

4.我给了电话 + 疯狂快速上了公交车 + 挥挥手告别

第二段：回到维也纳打他电话

1.我们约了一个地方机场附近

2.在那里我连本带利还了他钱 + 他接了钱

3.两人交谈(我分享了一些开会的故事)

4.两人拥抱告别

5.结尾升华：陌生人的善意(也可以聚焦陌生司机)

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【源自《中国考试》教育部教育考试院】

长难句分析

1. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.

【翻译】下飞机的那一刻，我疯狂地穿过机场大楼，不假思索地跳上了第一辆出租车。

【分析】the moment是名词短语用作连词，引导时间状语从句，表示“一……就”。

2. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.

【翻译】在持续了看似一个世纪的激烈讨论之后，冈特放下手机，启动了汽车。

【分析】that lasted for what seemed like a century是定语从句，修饰先行词discussion；what seemed like a century是夸张的修饰手法，引导宾语从句。

读后续写满分作文1

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.The desperation in my eyes must have been evident, because his expression softened. He glanced at the bus, then at the queue that was now almost gone, and back at me. "Don't worry," he saidin a reassuring tone, "I'll figure something out." He pulled out his phone again and started dialing another number. This time, it was a call to his bank. With a few swift moves, he managed to transfer some funds to cover the fare. "Here," he handed me a handful of euros, "take this. Let's get you on that bus."

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. His voice was warm and welcoming when he answered, "Ah, my friend from the airport! How was your conference?" I thanked him for his help and told him aboutthe success of my presentation. "I'm glad to hear that," he replied. "And don't worry about the money. I'm just happy I could help." I insisted on repaying him, and we arranged to meet at a café near the airport. Over coffee, we exchanged stories and laughter, and it turned out that Gunter had not only been a lifesaver but also a wonderful friend.

读后续写满分作文2

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.I finished my words with difficulty, stared at the card in my hand, and then looked up into his eyes with shame and embarrassment. To my surprise, Gunter comforted me with a big smile, which calmed me down. Plucking up my courage, I explained my situation to him and promised to pay off the fare and some extra tipfour days later when I was back in Vienna. “No problem!” he smiled. Having left my phone number, I hurried to catch the bus. When I looked back, I saw him waving me goodbye. 

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.The moment I saw Gunter, I strode to him, and gathered him into my arms with a strong embrace. Happy and excited, He laughed and said he thought this little phone wouldn't show up. I gave him some extra tip as promised but he refused. So I treated him to a cup of coffee instead. Before we parted that day, Gunter fished out his little phone again, patted on my shoulder and smiled “Let's take a picture together, my friend!” This photo is still on my desk today, which serves as a reminder of trusting others and offering kindness. Every time I think of cold, wet evening, a warm current still flows through my body. 

读后续写满分作文3

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.My heart sank with every passing second. His smile faded, replaced by a look of concern. "Don't worry," he said reassuringly, "We'll find a solution." Gunter, with his kind heart, suggested we ask around if anyone could help with a cash withdrawal. Miraculously, a kind traveler agreed to withdraw money for me in exchange for the equivalent in euros. With the freshly acquired cash, I paid Gunter, adding a generous tip for his unwavering help. As I boarded the bus, he waved, his smile brighter than ever, "Safe travels!" 

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. His voice, warm and familiar, greeted me on the other end of the line. I thanked him once more for his incredible kindness and insisted on meeting him to return the` favor. We met at a local café, where I presented him with a small token of appreciation-a book on Prague, where our unlikely journey had aimed.Over steaming cups of coffee, we shared stories and laughter, forging a friendship born out of a stormy night's chaos. Gunter's act of kindness had not only gotten me to my destination but had also opened doors to a friendship that transcendeds borders.

读后续写满分作文4

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I had no choice but to give him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight.In this way, we became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter who has a heart of gold.

读后续写满分作文5

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His face fell for a moment, reflecting the frustration and disappointment we both felt. However, he quickly regained his composure, waving off my apologies with a warm smile. "No worries," he said in his thick accent, his voice steady and calm."Just make sure you catch your bus." I hesitated, my heart heavy with guilt, but his reassuring nod gave me the push I needed. "Go! You have a conference to attend." With a final, heartfelt thank you, I grabbed my bags and sprinted towards the bus. As I settled into my seat, the reality of the day's chaos hit me like a wave. Despite everything, a profound sense of gratitude for Gunter's kindness filled my heart.

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He sounded surprised but genuinely pleased to hear from me. "I didn't expect you to remember," he chuckled, a hint of joy in his voice. We arranged to meet at a cozy café near the airport.When I arrived, I handed him an envelope with the fare and a little extra as a token of my appreciation. Gunter shook his head, a gentle smile on his face, and refused the extra money. "Just the fare is fine," he insisted kindly. We shared a cup of coffee, and as we talked about our lives, I learned about his family, his dreams, and the challenges he faced as a taxi driver. As we parted ways, I realized that in the midst of a stressful journey, I had found not just a helper, but a friend. This experience taught me that even in the most chaotic times, the kindness of strangers can shine through, creating friendship that transcend the ordinary.

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