【句式仿写+提升】2024全国新课标I/II卷读后续写

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【句式仿写+提升】2024全国新课标I/II卷读后续写

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【Part1 题目文本仿写】

a When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.

1 当我快要失去希望时,冈特掏出一张纸,草草地记下了一些笔记。

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2 当Anna快要哭出来时,他掏出了一块手帕,擦了擦Tina的脸。

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b After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.

1 在一场尴尬的沉默持续了似乎有一个世纪之后,冈特深吸了一口气,打破了僵局。

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2 在排队等待了似乎有一个世纪之后,冈特终于走到了柜台前,下了订单。

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c   A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.

1  当我看到演唱会前的人群逐渐散去时,一阵失望涌上心头。

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2 当她注意到交通开始变得稀疏时,一种如释重负的感觉涌上心头。

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下水文 1【Gunter让我先欠着打车的费用】

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Without hesitation, he shrugged, his eyes twinkling with a mix of mischief(顽皮) and generosity. "No worries," he assured(向.......保证)  me, his voice calm and steady. "Go catch your bus. We'll figure this out later. Just drop me a message once you're settled in Prague, alright?" He handed me his business card with a gentle pat on the shoulder, his kindness shining through his actions. Relieved yet overwhelmed((感情或感觉)充溢,难以承受) by his generosity, I hurried onto the bus, making it just in time as the doors closed behind me.

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Upon answering, his voice bubbled(洋溢着) with joy, and he immediately inquired about my safety and the journey. We arranged to meet at a local café the next morning. Over coffee, I handed him the fare, adding a little extra for his incredible help. However, he merely brushed it aside(不理会) with a wave of his hand. "Let's just share a coffee and swap stories," he proposed, his eyes gleaming(闪光) with sincerity. As we sipped(抿,小口喝our coffees, exchanging tales and laughter, I realized that Gunter's gesture transcended(超越;超出 mere assistance—it was a profound demonstration of humanity's warmth and connection, leaving a lasting impact on my heart.

【Part 2: 句式仿写】

aWithout hesitation, he shrugged, his eyes twinkling with a mix of mischief(顽皮) and generosity.   (without介词结构+ 独立主格)

1 毫无疑问,她笑了,声音中充满了喜悦和自信。

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2 没有丝毫犹豫,他点了点头,脸上露出了宽慰和希望的神情。

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b He handed me his business card with a gentle pat on the shoulder, his kindness shining through his actions. (with的复合结构+独立主格)

1 她脸上带着微笑递给我文件,她的喜悦显而易见(evident)。

                                                   

2 他向我打招呼,声音中充满温暖,他的善意显而易见。

                                                        

c   Upon answering, his voice bubbled(洋溢着) with joy, and he immediately inquired about my safety and the journey.   (upon + V-ing结构)

1 听到这个消息,她的眼睛闪烁着兴奋的光芒,并急切地与朋友们分享。

                                                    

2 进入房间时,他的表情因为松了一口气而变得柔和,并热情地向在场的每个人打招呼。

                                                     

dAs we sipped our coffees, exchanging tales and laughter, I realized that Gunter's gesture transcended mere assistance.   (as表背景信息+ V-ing做伴随状语)

1当我们在公园里漫步(scroll),享受着轻柔的微风(breeze) 和秋天的艳丽色彩时,我感到一阵深深的宁静(wash over)。

  

2 当我们一起做项目,合作并集思广益时,我意识到了团队合作的真正价值。

 


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