小学英语作文写作技巧！
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2024-11-17 05:46
福建
大部分学生都是在第二档（4-5分）或第三档（6-8分）内徘徊，如何提升至第四档（9-10分）呢？英语写作和语文写作其实一样，只是换一种语言表述内容。若使用第三人称，要注意其在一般现在时中的用法。动词后需加s或es。She likes apple. 还要注意人称代词的格式（主格和宾格）He feels blue. I don t like him. 主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时、现在进行时，最常用的是前面三种。in 的本意是“在……之内”，表示在地点名词内部。on 用于表示地点的时候，表示接触的“上方”（与表面接触）。Korea lies on the northeast of China． 朝鲜位于中国东北方。Where: 1. room, 2. home 3. lake, 4. countryside, 5. cinemaWhat：1. cleaning，2. washing， 3. boating， 4. sight seeing， 5. watchingHow：学生自己填充，如何完成？独立做事吗？开车去吗？等等。逻辑清晰只是第一步，高分文章除了逻辑清晰，用词也很“赏心悦目”。比如形容快乐，很多学生万年不变的无论什么场景都是“happy”。说到底还是词汇量的匮乏导致只想到了“happy”。It was very delicious. Thank you.It was a wonderful dinner.例如上图中的文章，对于香蕉的描述，可以加上颜色“yellow”，或者可以形容它的颜色“like my favorite coat”，内容就会充实很多。She is beautiful，charming and wise.类似情况下，最后一个逗号后可换成and，这个逗号可省略。还有一个小细节，正确的英文日期可用月-日-年的次序或日-月-年的次序，日和年之间加逗号而月和年之间不加逗号。What is your favourite colour?
My favourite colour is blueHow many pens do you have?
May I have two books， please?
6、two big red hens 两只大红母鸡They are my grandparents.也就是对第二句的中的my grandparents的提问。】Whois that little boy?It`s Tom.2、They are my grandparents.They were young，then.【这两个句子的结构是“主语(代词、名词)+be(amisarewaswere)+表语(名词、形容词等)”4、But your hair was so short.5、She was fat.Now she s thin.【第一个句子是说明过去的事，be用过去式(was、were);第二个句子是说明现在的事，用一般现在时be(am、is、are)】6、They weren t old then .They were young.【这两个句子是同义句，划线部分是一对反义词，第一个句子用否定句，第二个句子用肯定句。】7、Was it fat ?No，it wasn t.·It was thin.【这是be的一般过去时的一般疑问句，是把be的形式(was、were)提到句首。注意答语。用“yes、no回答后，再用一个反义词的肯定句回答。”】小升初英语写作思维导图掌握住，英语作文想不得满分都难！一提到写英语作文，很多同学都无从下笔，总是“信手写来”，没有规划。这样做的后果是，作文篇章结构不清晰，内容选择可能会脱离主题，从而影响作文的总体得分。朗读君为了帮助大家解决这一难题，带来了英语写作思维导图，让你以后作文提笔前胸有成竹，次次稳拿满分！以《How to learn well?》为题，写一篇作文，那么我们应该如何入手开始写作呢？来看看以下几张思维导图，能够帮你整理好一篇作文的写作框架。
即使知道了写作框架，但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑：如何选材？3．对照思维导图自我批改，注意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用。很多学生在写作时，使用的句式比较单一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏个性。1．对相同意思，注意不同句式的表达法，选择更好的句式。2．短文写作，表达力求精悍、生动、丰富，避免重复用一样的句式。1. 审题、理清思路：考虑写什么（挑选关键词，搭建作文框架）。2. 选择词语：根据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语料（词块和语块）。3. 遣词造句：根据思维导图中的语料，用合适的句型写作。4. 语篇定稿：根据思维导图修改润色作文——紧扣主题、表达准确，关联自然，语篇流畅。假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明，参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。1.认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服1.努力学习，向别人请教；赛前两天腿受伤，但不放弃参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 English Speech ContestLast Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn t do well in the contest because she hadn t got ready for the contest.But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn fromMingming.Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn t need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.In the end, Fangfang didn t get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.请你以 “My Hobby”为题，结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。（词数80个左右）Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema,Iwas attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.如果这份学习资料对孩子们的学习有所帮助，点个【在看】，给朗读君一个奖励吧！
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