【小学英语】6大类英语高分作文模板+分类写作指导

乐活   2024-12-25 20:50   浙江  

相信很多小学生考试时,最痛苦的就是写作文了。平时积累不到位,怎么憋都憋不出来。


为了提升孩子的英语预感和写作水平,今天老师整理了【6大类英语高分作文模板+分类写作指导,供大家参考,快转发给孩子背诵起来。


小学英语作文要求

作文要求:
1. 内容要点完整

2. 语法结构正确

3. 词汇运用准确

4. 书写整洁

(如书写较差,以致影响阅卷,分数将降低一个档次)

书写注意事项:
1. 作文答题纸一般为单线,我们应将单线作为"四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准写,不要把它作为第四线让字母吊在线上。
2. 不要在答题纸上乱涂、乱写,如需打草稿需申请额外的草稿纸。一旦写错,规范修改,用一条斜线划掉错误单词即可。


小学英语作文分类指导

01 人物类作文写作指导

范文一:Myself


涉及话题:
1. 姓My name is Wang Xiaoming./This is Wang Xiaoming.注意名字有两个字时,要连在一起,只大写第一个字如王小明 Wang Xiaoming
2. 年龄 I'm twelve. /I’m twelve years old.
3. 家庭构成 There are three people in my family:my father,mother and I.
4. 家人职业及爱好(简述)My father is an engineer. He likes reading books. He often asks me to go to the library with him.
5. 爱好及原因My favourite fruit/ food is …I like playing badminton. I often play badminton with my classmates after school. Because it’s good for my body.


范文示例:

Hi,boys and girls. It is my pleasure to introduce myself. My name is ***, I am 10 years old. I study in 学校名称.
There are 4 people in my family: father, mother, brother and I. My family are all very kind, welcome you to visit my family if you have time!
I love English. I like reading books、listening the tapes and watching videos.I believe I can speak good English !
大家好!很有幸能向大家介绍自己。我叫**,今年十岁了,在**学校上学。
我家一共有4位家庭成员:爸爸妈妈哥哥还有我。我的家庭成员都很友好,如果大家有时间的话欢迎来我们家做客!
我喜欢英语,我喜欢读书、听磁带和看光碟。我相信我可以说好英语!


范文二:My Friend
与Myself的区别:主语由I变He /She.动词由动词原形变为动词第三人称单数形式.代词由my变his /her

涉及话题:

1. 姓名 His name is Wang Xiaoming./He's Wang xiaoming.注意名字有两个字时,要连在一起,只大写第一个字 如王小明 Wang Xiaoming. 
2. 年龄 He's twelve./He's twelve years old.
3. 喜好 His favourite fruit food is......He likes playing badminton. Because it's good for his body.
4. 爱好He often plays badminton with me after school.
5. 结束语 We are good friend!


范文示例:

I have a new friend. Her name is Amy. She is twelve years old. 
She is beautiful. She has a round face and big eyes. She has long hair. She is tall and thin. She likes singing and dancing. Her English is very good. 
We are good friend!
我有一个新朋友。她的名字叫艾米。她12岁了。她很美丽。她有一张圆圆的脸蛋,大大的眼睛。她有长长的头发。她又高又瘦。她喜欢唱歌和跳舞。她的英语很好。我们是好朋友!

02 时态类作文写作指导

范文一:My Day

时态:一般现在时 
重要句型:
主语+动词原形+其它

涉及话题:

1. 在某个时间点做某事 I get up at 6:00. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I eat breakfast at 7:00. Then I go to school. I eat dinner at 7:00. Then I listen to music. I do my homework at 8:00. I go to bed at 9:30.
2. 一日安排I have seven classes every day. Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30. After school, I often play table tennis with my friends.

范文示例:

I'm a student and I am in Grade 5. I get up at six o'clock every day. I have classes from Monday to Friday. On Saturday,I often play ping-pong and watch TV. On Sunday, I do my homework and read books.
I like weekends very much.
我是一名学生,读五年级。我每天六点起床。星期一到星期五上课。星期六,我经常打乒乓球和看电视。星期天,我做家庭作业和读书。我非常喜欢周末。

范文二:Tom's Day

时态: 一般现在时
重要句型: 主语(第三人称单词形式)+动词第三人称单词形式+其它.
与My day的区别:1.主语由I变为He 2.形容词性物主代词由my变为his 3.动词由原形变为第三人称单数形式,简单记钇方法就是动词后加s或es

涉及话题:

1. 在某个时间点做某事Tom gets up at 6:00.Then he washes his face and brushes his teeth.He eats breakfast at 7:00.Then he goes to school.He eats dinner at 7:00.Then he listens to music.He does his homework at 8:00. He goes to bed at 9:30.
2. 一日安排He has seven classes every day.Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30.After school, he often plays table tennis with his friends.


范文示例:A day in my life 
My family lives on this street. In the morning, my father goes to work and all the children go to school. 
My mother takes us to school every day. She does the housework. She always has her lunch at home, and sees her friends in the afternoon. 
In the evening all the children come home from school. My father goes home from work and he is often late. After supper my two brothers and I do our homework. We go to bed at ten.
我家住在一条街道上。早上,爸爸去上班,所有的孩子都去上学。妈妈每天都送我们上学,然后在家做家务。她在家吃午饭,下午去见她的朋友。晚上,所有的孩子都早早放学回家。爸爸去工作所以他回来的很晚。吃过晚饭后,我和我的两个哥哥做家庭作业。我们在十点上床睡觉。

范文三:下周末怎么过

时态:一般将来时
重要句型:主语+be+going to do sth.主语+be+going to 地点
I am going to have a busy/happy weekend. On Saturday morning. I'm going to.....In the afternoon,...In the evening,....


范文示例:

Hi, this is Liu Yun. I'm going to have a busy weekend!
On Saturday, I'm going to the bookstore by subway. I'm going to buy a new CD and some story-books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books.
On Sunday, I'm going to the supermarket with my mother. We're going after lunch. In the evening, I'm going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together.
That will be fun! 
大家好,我是刘云,我即将开始一个忙碌的周末!周六,我将乘地铁去图书商城购买新的CD和图书,而后我将回家去阅读新书。周日,我将和我的妈妈去商场并用午餐。晚上,我们将一起去看我的姑姑并一起看电视。这将会很有趣!

03 空间类作文写作指导

范文一:My bedroom

重要句型:There be + 介词词组(on, next, to, behind, over, under等) It's.....The...is on the...
注意主要物品是作为参照使用的。所以,我们一般先说bed, desk, table之类的主要物品。然后再说其它物品与其的位罝关系。
I have my own room. It's small but nice. There is a bed, a desk, a closet and a shelf. There are two end tables near the bed. The computer is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. I like my bedroom.


范文示例:I have my own room now. It is small but cozy. There is a bed, a desk, a big closet and a shelf. There are two tables near the bed. The computer is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. The bin is behind the door. The clothes are in the closet. I love my new room very much!
我现在有自己的房间了。它不大但很温馨。有一张床,一张书桌,一个大衣橱和一个书架。床边有两张桌子。电脑在桌子上,书也在那上面。垃圾桶在门后面。衣服在衣橱里。我很喜欢新房间!


04 介绍家乡

范文一:My Hometown

重要句型:There be....主语+ be +表语.
假设小鸟飞过时从天空上看到的主要情景,如果在农村的话,可以看到是山川河琉,蓝天白云。然后才是一些具体的情景。假如在城市的话,可能看到高楼大厦公路交通甚至工厂等。
I live in a small village.It’s beautiful.The air is fresh.The water is clean.The clouds are white.There are many trees and flowers. There are many fish in the rivers.I often go fishing with my parents on weekends.I like my village/hometown.


范文示例:

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

我的小山村很美丽,那里有很多人家。在村子旁边有一片森林,一条小溪在村前蜿蜒,水很清澈,我们可以看到很多水中的游鱼。小溪旁是一座山,野花盛开在山间。我喜欢我的家乡,欢迎来我的家乡做客!


05 介绍动物

范文一:A Pet Dog

由于主语是第三人称单数形式,大部分句子构成是“主语+动词第三人称单数”


主要句型:

It’s got....

主语+ be +形容词


I have a pet dog.

It's cute and naughty.

It's my best friend.

It's got a black nose and a long tail.

It likes playing with balls.

I often take it out for a walk.

I like it very much!


范文示例:

I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu.It is 9 years old.DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. 
My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?
我有一只狗。我的狗的名字叫嘟嘟。嘟嘟9岁。嘟嘟胖。它穿着一件白色外套。嘟嘟有两个大眼睛和两个小耳朵。它有一个短嘴。我的狗是聪明的。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢吗?


06 给笔友的信

1. 注意邮件格式 

2. 自我介绍作文加信件格式.

注意:当写家人如父亲时,使用主语+动词第三人称单数形式


重要句型: 

主语+ be +表语 

I like doing sth.

He likes doing sth.


范文示例:

Dear Alice,

I am happy to have a new penpal. I live in China with my mom and dad. I don't have a sister or brother. My mom is a singer. She likes swimming.My dad is a TV reporter. He likes listening to music. I like playing the violin and writing emails.

Your friend Li Lei.

亲爱的爱丽丝:

我很高兴有了新的笔友。我和我的父母定居在中国,我没有兄弟姐妹。我的妈妈是为歌唱家,她喜欢游泳。我的爸爸是位电视工作者,他喜欢听音乐。我喜欢拉小提琴与交友。
你的朋友李雷。


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