图表作文之数据说明类
图表一般是对某个具体问题的调查统计,往往能反映出一个普遍的问题,同学们在描述完内容时需要过渡到普遍现象。写图表作文需要介绍图表中讲了什么,数据有什么变动,反映了哪些问题和趋势,并分析问题背后的原因,结合自身谈谈解决措施或给出观点。 图表作文写作可细分为三个部分
第一部分:引出话题并介绍图表内容。
第二部分:分析造成这一问题的原因。
第三部分:给出自己观点,提出相应的解决方案。
每一篇作文的要求会有所差异,部分作文不需要分析原因,给出自己的观点和理由即可,同学们在写作之前需要仔细阅读题干及要求,明确要点,避免遗漏。写作模板
As is shown in the chart, ___% of the ______, and ____% _______. Another _____%
______. The rest _____. (描述图表信息)
As we all know, _____do much harm to_____, even causing people to ________. At the same time, ________. But to our sadness, _________. (分析图表所反映现象带来的危害) How do we protect ourselves from_________? I think we should________. In addition, it's very important for us to_______. Do remember that_____________. (提出具体建议,以避免上述现象带来的危害)Recently I have conducted a survey on指出一种现象,while同时有别的情况发生. Hopefully, the result of my survey can draw the attention of ________. Firstly, 第一个原因. Secondly, 第二个原因. Apart from the above reasons, 第三个原因. By doing上文涉及之事, 将带来什么样的好处或者坏处. What's more, 介绍另一个好处或者坏处. (2023山西中考) 青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以 “我发现自己真的很好” 为主题,对1127名学生进行了问卷调查,下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生,请结合以上图表信息以 “I Find Myself Really Good” 为主题,用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括: 1. 简要说明图表内容; 2. 从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求: 1. 词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
【答案】例文 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain. As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为图表作文; ② 时态:时态综合使用 “一般现在时” 和 “一般过去时”; ③ 提示:要求以 “I Find Myself Really Good” 为主题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,介绍调查结果; 第二步,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 [亮点词汇] ① As for 至于 ② play a role in 扮演角色 ③ made an effort to 尽力去做某事 ④ all the time 一直 [高分句型] ①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. (which引导的定语从句) ②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. (强调句) (2023山东济南中考) 新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括: 1. 描述并评价调查结果; 2. 陈述你的选择并说明理由。 注意: 1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 【答案】例文 There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results. Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging. As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills. English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful. 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇看图作文; ② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时”; ③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果; 第二步,描述并评价调查结果; 第三步,陈述你的选择并说明理由; 第四步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① the number of ……的数量 ② as far as 就……而言 ③ had better do sth 最好做某事 ④ make full use of 充分利用 [高分句型] ①Here are the results. (倒装句) ②The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. (定语从句)
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