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教育   2024-11-21 18:59   上海  



写作是综合考查考生英语能力的有效手段。大学英语四六级考试大纲要求,考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等,写出一篇(四级)120~180词、(六级)150~200词的短文。写作题占四六级总分的15%。答题时间为30分钟。


作为四六级考试开篇,写作状态的好坏可能直接决定了后续做题心理状态和节奏。但是很多同学反映没有英文写作思路,无从下手;网上模板太多,背不完……


本期,我们就来说说关于写作那点儿事儿,总结写作精华,掌握万能功能句!


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 重要的事情说三遍:

 审题!审题!审题!


通过评分细则可知符合主题时基本要求,无论你的语言有多高级复杂,如果写作方向就错了,也属于低分档。因此写作审题至关重要,尤其是六级写作,出题相对比较抽象,一定要认真琢磨~


*四六级作文评分细则


审题三维度


1.体裁,一般都是“write an essay”。


2. 话题+内容要求,重要!决定写作主体内容!


3. 字数要求: 150 词~200 词 ,建议写 160 词~180 词。写的过多,容易出现更多的错误,影响分数。


如果题目中出现不认识的生词,可根据已知的名词、动词、形容词和副词去猜测生词的大方向(积极、消极)。


 常见作文类型及基本思路 


对于四六级写作,要提前搭建几种常见的分析角度:描述事件、说明重要性、说明弊端、建议、措施,然后根据实际题目类型与要求,来有侧重点地组织文章结构。


 常见四六级写作类型

 名言评论类


名言评论类表达相对比较抽象,理解难度较大,审题中需要认真琢磨名言的含义。一般在开头段引出名言,揭示寓意,简明化核心含义,再进行论述。

 

(2015年12⽉) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.


 意义阐述类


意义阐述类表达较为直接,理解难度一般不大,多以why发问。行文要侧重从原因、利弊角度入手,结尾段也可以延申措施等,以丰富文章。


(2020年12⽉) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.


 措施解释类


措施解释类多以how发问,要侧重回答具体方法“怎么解决”,同时也可引申出解决方法的好坏,总结表达个人看法。此外还需注意题目具体要求,例如本题You can cite examples to illustrate your views,即要求举出至少一个例子。


(2018年12⽉) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance academic study and extracurricular activities. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.


 图画、图表评述类作文


图画、图表评述属于较难的形式,但其本质上与名言评论类似,图画、图表都是对一种社会现象或一个道理的“抽象包装”。


开头段一般先描述图画、图表内容,第二段再进行具体分析。


(2015年12⽉) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social net-working websites on reading. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.


 写作思路总结


1. 名言评述类作文比较抽象,故都要坚持「由表及里,由浅入深」的原则,将抽象的话题和某一社会现象、问题具体联系,或者论述某一重要素质的重要性(例如独立性、好奇心、创新等)。


2. 对于文字形式的作文,首段破解文字含义,引入事件或表达出个人的基本观点。二段是将话题联系现实生活,论述相关的社会问题或者能力素质的原因、现象、背景、重要性、利弊等。尾段再次重申观点加上建议措施即可。


3. 对于图表、图画类,首段描述图表,不做论述;二段从原因、利弊、重要性方面论述,并加以具体例证。尾段重申观点,并提出建议措施。


 “万能”功能句表达  

 功能句握在手,下笔如有神~ 

“我知道该往什么方向写,但是就是英语词穷呀~”



这时候功能句来救场了!抓紧收藏背诵!


功能句相对于网络上模板更加灵活多变,且能帮助打开思路,放在文章哪里都不突兀!


描述现象类


功能表达1:In the contemporary society, it is a common phenomenon for a host of parents to do everything for their children, to make all decisions for them and not to allow them to explore on their own in case they make mistakes or get hurt.


注意:功能句并不是固定不变的,可根据个人偏好替换部分词语。


例如:contemporary = modern/current


it is a common phenomenon for … to …. = it has become a trend for… to …


功能表达2:Living in an era of information, we are using a variety of technological products, which are based on innovative ideas, such as digital cameras, portable computers and smart phones.

 

Living in an era of … 生活...的时代,常用信息时代、人际交往的时代、激烈竞争的时代等。

 

功能表达3:Based on a survey, a majority of young people admit that they sometimes fail to recognize false information on the Internet, judge the reliability of online information sources, or tell real news stories from fake ones.


 感受类


核心句式:sb find it +adj. +to do sth


功能表达1:Meanwhile, a growing number of kids find it comfortable and enjoyable tolive in parents’protection.


替换: a growing number of …= an increasing number of …/ more and more …


 举例类


功能表达1:A case in point is … = A typical example is…


功能表达2:Meanwhile, numerous celebrities’ life stories have persuaded us that the habit of lifelong learning is an engine which drives both our study and future career.

 

 意义类


功能表达1:Young people need to be diligent and it is diligence that enables them to accumulate adequate skills, knowledge, competence and competitive edge. (强调句)


功能表达2:As a significant virtue, confidence can bring us power, arouse our passion for life and help us conquer fear.


替换:Arouse=evoke=inspire


 危害类


功能表达1:It is parents’overprotection that causes the young not to possess ample opportunities to explore the outside world and grow independently in competition.


替换: ample = enough/ adequate/ sufficient


功能表达2:Unfortunately, parents’ exceeding protection has constituted an obstacle that hampers youngsters’ long-term health and growth.


替换: exceeding = too much 过度的


constitute = form an obstacle = a barrier hamper = hinder/ impair


功能表达3:If youngsters lose independent judgment and follow whatever the stars do, they will be prone to confine themselves to poor abilities and narrow-mindedness.


建议、观点类


功能表达1:It is advisable for humans to maintain their innovative minds, provided that our human society intends to acquire and enjoy long-time prosperity. (前后两句可以换位置:先如果,再描述)


(坏事)否定可表达为:It is not advisable for us to spend too much time on the Internet and even become the slaves to it.


替换:advisable = rational/sensible /wise


intends to= dream to=target to= aim to


it is advisable for to = it is of great necessity / significance for to of+n.=adj.


very= quite=particularly=exceedingly


功能表达2:Every parent should bear in mind that they can not protect their children for a life time.


替换:bear in mind =keep in mind = remember =not forget…


功能表达3:We are supposed / educated to allocate more time to reading paper books, which is the stepping stone ensuring more fruitful results in our academic pursuit.


常用比喻:... is the stepping stone …是基石


功能表达4:It is (high) time (that) the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve traffic problems.


 引出原因/ 建议/ 危害/ 意义类


原因: reasons/accounts/causes/factors


建议: suggestions/advice


危害: hazards / negative influences / demerits / disadvantages


意义: positive effects / advantages / merits


功能表达1:There are many complex/ complicated factors leading to this phenomenon, and the following are the most representative.

 

功能表达2:I can think of no better reasons other than the following two.

 

功能表达3:It is no simple job to induce / give reasons for this complicated / complex phenomenon.


 排比句式类


功能表达1:As a matter of fact, in large numbers, intelligent people have realized the significance of innovation for our social development: without innovation, industries can never be modernized; without innovation, our medical science can never cure so many fatal diseases; and without innovation, there would be no electronic products we use today


功能表达2I, as a youngster, deem that it is of great necessity for us to use the Internet and it is of greater necessity for us not to be addicted to it or become slaves to it.


功能表达3:Thirdly, do not forget to call the police or related departments for help, if you are cheated, misled or troubled by false information or fake news.


 展望类


功能表达1:Only when parents let their children develop independently, can youngsters gain life-long benefits and have a promising and hopeful future.


半倒装:only +状语位于句首或主语之前,该句半倒装


功能表达2:If we do our utmost to do every small thing in a great way, the future of our life, work and study will be brilliant and promising.


如何才能灵活掌握功能句?


1. 记住每个句子的功能,分类理解,构建中文思路辅助记忆。


2. 灵活组合,功能句可以拆分组合,意思表达得当即可。


3. 灵活替换,部分内容换成自己擅长的单词背诵。


4. 掌握常见的词组表达


5. 从句式结构方面理解:排比、比喻、举例、强调句等,高级句式更易得高分!


6. 勤加练习是关键!实践出真知!训练时要按照考试节奏来,保证考场上也能在规定时间内完成高质量文章。



 其他注意事项 


1.列提纲:虽然考场时间较为紧张,但预先梳理思路,用关键词简单打一个草稿,可能有效降低错误率,保持写作持续输出~


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2. 一二三原则:主体内容分点写作,有序串联功能句。阅卷老师会通过“分点标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚有条理。


3.长短句原则:保证句子的正确性是第一要义。句子不是越长越高级,使用不当会画蛇添足。长句与短句相结合,反而能起到画龙点睛的作用~


四六级写作想要得高分,三维审题第一步!了解常见出题题型,拆解文章思路:开头段引入、陈述观点、利弊分析、措施建议等,迅速构建行文思路;熟练背诵下各类的万能模板,灵活替换组合,让作文妙笔生花,信手拈来!


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